marklaverty wrote:
Let me know what you think

The only thing I want to say about the content is that I was hoping for something more along the lines of
X2Scripting in a Nutshell, and this is more like
X2Scripting for Dummies.
Knowing that, I still have gripes, and they deal exclusively with presentation. The site that is hosting this is crap for color/font selection. It makes your guide hard to read. There's zero font/color differentiation for code blocks, and they aren't set apart from the rest of the text. The section headings are in
italics. They need to be bold, and larger than the rest of the text fonts.
The code blocks really need to be distinguished in some way, much the way quotes are handled in this message board (except maybe without the indentation). Like so:
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Delete all of the line in the ‘code’ section except for <new line> and return null. Next insert a new line above the ‘return null’, highlight it and hit return. Go into ‘General commands’ and select the ‘<retvar/if><expression>’ function. Then choose ‘if’ from the list of selections. You should now have
Arguments
Ship <Var/ship> Ship
Code
If <?> …
return null
<new line>
Highlight <?> and hit return, highlight ‘ship’ and hit return. You should now have...
Arguments
Ship <Var/ship> Ship
Code
If $ship …
return null
<new line>
Highlight ‘…’ and hit return, select ‘= =’ and hit return. Now your script should look like …
Arguments
Ship <Var/ship> Ship
Code
If $ship = = …
return null
<new line>
Highlight ‘…’ and hit return, select ‘PLAYERSHIP’ and hit return. This should give you…
Arguments
Ship <Var/ship> Ship
Code
If $ship = = [PLAYERSHIP] …
return null
<new line>
Insert a new line above ‘return null’, select it and hit return. Go into the ‘logbook commands’ section and pick ‘write to player logbook <value>’ then hit return. Select <string> from the list of selections and hit return. Type in ‘this is your ship’ and hit return. You should be taken back to your script which will now look like …
Arguments
Ship <Var/ship> Ship
Code
If $ship = = [PLAYERSHIP] …
Write to player logbook ‘this is your ship’
return null
<new line>
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See how this is easier to read?
Get the hosts of that site to do your guide a favor, and format it like a regular coding guide. It will help your readers.