Been looking at this for sometime, i have a suggestion......again its just an idea/suggestion, so please keep the original !expnobody wrote:new ship(more like an idea or concept)
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M1+, no fighter catapult or hanger, but with max capacity of 36xM6 park outside, or 4xM7..
Look at moving the bridge back about 30% of the hull, creating a flat space in between the bridge and the nose of the ship ( similar to what you have done with the Heavy Titan and the standard Vanilla Colossus) it should look better than having the bridge touch the nose of the ship...have the back slop of the new bridge merge with back spine of the ship (behind the 1st round tube lying on its side, i hope you see what i am getting at) and remove the 1st tube so its all one nice long shape (just keep the tube above the engine's), and try and remove one one of the red stripes down the side...this should create a more simple powerful shape....the bridge moving a lot more backwards should give it more balance.
edit...in fact take the bridge that far back the start of it would only just start where the 1st tube would be....so the bridge is dead centre of the length of the ship!
edit 2...try and make those two side engines come out a little more to give more shape so it not so tubular.
That's it i will shut up now...and like a i said its just a suggestion!