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Reapers Passage thoughts so far?

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Reapers Passage Chapter 94 posted

Saturday 19th January 08

A shorter one to make up for the long one that was CH93 ho hum! Sorry couldn't resist ending it where I did :o

It will give me a chance to think it over, and make the most of the action in the next chapter.

Hope you enjoy all comments welcome. :D
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Interesting developments :o

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter :) don't take too long now :wink:
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Not too long I trust Snowship!

Reapers Passage Chapter 95 Posted

Tuesday 22nd January 08

Flows on from the last one but still something of a bridge.

All comments welcome and appreciated. :D
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ooh, the planetside action is starting..
can't wait til the next chapter to expand the battle and Alian facility exploration :wink:

:D :D :D
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A little more of the same Snowship.

Reapers Passage Chapter 96 Posted

Thursday 24th Jan 08

Kind of bouncing around between a lot of people here.

As ever all comments thoughts appreciated. :D
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Come on lads a few comments would be cool 8)

Reapers Passage Chapter 97 Posted

Saturday 26th January 08

A fair bit of violence in this one. Nothing but Bala Gi's Joy! :o

As I said above all communications gratefully accepted :D
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Interesting developments. Wonder which of the 4 in the alian structure are going to die :twisted: .
Interesting also the manipulation of the khaak :wink:
Wonder how the Queen is going to tackle the situation :?:

Sorry about the late comments, keep em coming :D
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As ever thanks for the comments Snowship :D

Reapers Passage Chapter 98 posted

Getting a little excited as I approach the 100th chapter. :)

That seems like a reason to celebrate a little. 8)

This one gives a good bit away but may also confuse as I was both plain, and deliberately at times a I hope also vague. :P

Enjoy! As ever all comments appreciated. Counter seems to be moving slowly at the moment or I'm writing too fast. :D
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Is that smoke I see coming from your keyboard Paranoid?? :D
You're just pumping the chapters out, what's that- 3 in 4-5 day? :o :P

Yes was interesting to have a bit of the opponents view, and that maybe Faith and The Devil are just a Alien experiment :o .

Wonder what'll happen when all the argons meet up in the hanger (if they actually do) :?:

Anyway great work and keep em coming :D
(I also can't wait til the 100th :wink: )
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Snowship wrote:Is that smoke I see coming from your keyboard Paranoid?? :D
You're just pumping the chapters out, what's that- 3 in 4-5 day? :o :P
Currently on my own doing some House Sitting! Just me the PC and oddly enough a Black Dog, but of the Canine variety. :)


Reapers Passage Chapter 99 posted

Wednesday 30th January 08

More historical revelations about my divergent version of the X Universe. :o

The Fog should lift a little bit more. I am really enjoying it at the moment. I especially like the idea of Red on Red action which almost bypasses the rest of the Universe altogether!

As ever: all comments, thoughts, criticisms, speculations appreciated :D
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Interesting developments with the KHAAK. So is the Queen another splinter of the Kha'ak race or something else :gruebel:
Although it was a bit disconcerting following the thoughts of the KHAAK sargent.... Dammit Paranoid I'm at work and shouldn't have my mind stretched :lol: :wink:

And I wonder what the species lab entails :twisted:

Can't wait til some answers make their way forth in future chapters. And how development of The Hill are progressing :idea:
Again good work Paranoid66 & keep those chapters coming. :D

Wonder how Ravn will go exploring the structure :wink:
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Thanks for the comments Snowship :D

Reapers Passage Ch 100 posted

Friday 1st Febuary 08

Well that is the 100th Chapter. :D :o :D

A lull in the storm in some respects with more insights or just stuff to further confound. It is interesting trying to see things from others perspectives not always necessarily entirely correct :!:

Anyway hope you enjoy. I find myself wondering how many more chapters it will take to finalise the plot. Content always takes more than I think it should ----- i t -- s t r e t c h e s ----- :D
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So Tur is thinking of making The Hill home again, so I was wrong in my assumptions before. :oops:

Wonder what the Queens going to do about the KHAAK newcomers :wink:

Interesting chronology of the paranid & Kha'ak there Paranoid66 :o

Again another good chapter. Can't wait til the new developments unfold :D

And congratulations for the 100th chapter 8)
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So Tur is thinking of making The Hill home again, so I was wrong in my assumptions before.
I wouldn't worry about it Snowship, sometimes even I'm not sure where parts of this plot will bend, which might terminate, or follow on through! :o

That particular subplot is still pretty much open. A lot of times it depends on what other people do. People like Tur are not really masters of their own destiny who is? :o

Reapers Passage Ch 101 posted.

Tuesday 5th Feb 08

What can I say, this was a tough one! :headbang:
I actually edited out eight pages of unnecessary background information. Count that not one, not two, not three, not four... eight! yes I almost ran out of pinkies :o Well some of this material may slip back into other Chapters here, and there before the end.

Anyway it still contains some very serious stuff!

Hope it isn't too shocking, or too much of a let down (although it isn't over quite yet), I hope the readership still enjoy it! :D

As ever all comments appreciated - I can see the end in sight, its just over that next rise, or maybe the one after that as it undulates a little bit 8) :D


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Guess it is a good thing my story is winding to a close. It is about to get even more unofficial - if that was possible - due to whatever events will unfold when X3 TC is released.

Wow is the creative forum quiet today everyone must be playing with pancakes!
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Interesting developments there Paranoid, but looks like the end is rushing towards us :o :cry:

Good to hear from Elaen & the AF4 Commander (forgot his name atm). Wonder how those stories will intertwine back with Anna & Ravn??

A bit shocking seeing Ruth cap herself, will stess can do strange things to people. Personally I'd have slapped her and told her to get a grip :wink:

Anyway, good work and keep em coming :D
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Snowship wrote:Interesting developments there Paranoid, but looks like the end is rushing towards us :o :cry:
All things must come to an end Snowship watching the counter I also worry some readers may be getting bored with my - long winded - rambling ways!

Still I hope it is not rushed either more like gathering momentum at last! :)

I'm sure Anna wishes she had given Ruth a slap too. Unfortunately Leon accidentally planted thoughts in that poor Argons head that took serious root. Her fear was increased by seeing first hand how advanced the aliens were and their to her perspective - shocking disregard for the dignity, and sanctity of life!

Meeting very advanced Aliens would be rather horrific if we judged them by our own standards of behaviour.


Reapers Passage Chapter 202 posted

Friday 8th of Feb 08

At the moment in my story it seems like life is suffering - lucky it is also change, even if change is said to cause suffering too!

As ever all comments welcome it is a pity you can't tell how many separate readers you really have just by the counter alone.

Anyway I would like to thank those that continue to stick with me!

As ever all comments criticism appreciated I jest not! :D
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I like how the Citadel's progressing there Paranoid.

Wonder where Rav's going to end up though.

Good to hear about The Wolf aswell, although I wouldn't have risked cryogenic freezing, worried I'd wake up to The Devil :wink:

noticed a couple or spelling mistakes, overall nothing to bad (were instead of we're :P ). I suppose with the amount you're churning out it's to be expected. (And something to be fixed with a pre-pdf review :wink: :) )

Can't wait til the next installment :D
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Snowship: Yep some typos and spelling errors get away!

I manage to locate some after the fact when re-reading. Find proofing easier with the white on black text after posting - going to blame it on eye strain with the glaring WP screen - miss my own monitors.

However (were to we're) is a favourite as (well and we'll) easy to miss when skim reading and too close to it - Too easy to read it like it should - be not how it is!

Whole thing will need a very serious overall health check when finished! Something I am both dreading, and looking forward too!

I also thought the Wolf would be wary of sleep for that reason, but decided he was getting even more afraid of not waking up at all - due to the Incentive! :)


Reapers Passage Chapter 103 posted :D

Sunday 10th Feb 08

Notice, my poor attempt at a running joke with G!

This chapter became a kind of necessary filler.
It just moves things a long a bit. :)

Anyway hope you all enjoy, as ever all comments appreciated. :D
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So many thread arcs :o

Interesting to hear from Prime :wink:

I now I'm wondering how the Unlimited Connected will deal with the minions left over in the Citadel.

By the way the story is progressing that line will finish before beachhead does, and how the AF4/Fey/Sven arc tie themselves up will be interesting to read :)

Keep them coming Paranoid :D
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Thanks for the comments Snowship. Maybe a few answers here.

Reapers Passage Chapter 104 posted

Tuesday 12th Feb 08

This one is kind of light with a few not so hidden depths.

I actually got a bit emotional finishing one line of Fays! :o :cry:
Guess I really do need to get out more! :D

Speaking of which the sun has been shining outside in the real world :o

Anyway as ever all comments appreciated. :D
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