OK, critix on my short story's over! I became so dissed, that I thought up something better. Now for my real work:
The Xenon War
Xenons...
They're everywhere...
They're once the Terraformers, tool for mankind...
Until a fatal error has changed their minds, then turned against humanity, and became the Xenon...
Those nightmares in my head...
They just can't go away....
The Xenon Wars costed too many lives....
Carriers, Fighters, Destroyers... some are Earth Fleet's, the others are Xenon.... they are all destroyed.....
So many lives... lost to these former creations....
these thoughts can't get out of my mind....
Till I CRUSH THEM ALL!!!!!!!!!
And nothing will stand in my way.....
Nothing....
Well then talk about this. How'dya think?
And please, no 0s. I'd vote a 0 on yours!
The Xenon Wars
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