Out of the starlight, hidden in space,
my quarry races by me at a frantic pace.
I picked up the job from an ammonia-breathed snob
and I'm to bring back the body of this unfortunate slob.
I fire up her engines, and pull out from the 'roid;
my Nova's jonesing to have her twin BHEPT's deployed.
So I follow him slowly, with my IFF green
til he's 10 clicks from gate and thinks he's unseen.
Then I pop on the j-drive and pop out of space
and I show up before him with white terror on his face.
A Disco goes easy, when you bear full arms down;
within five seconds it's no longer around.
So I open the bay and I haul in the ex-Split,
and I jump back to Queen's Space to offload it.
A million credits later, a drink at the bar,
and I've picked up a new job to kill 'neath the stars.
Keep your deals clean, and your temper in check,
or my sweet bead of plasma will run down your neck.
Ill-Gotten Credit
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a few signs of severe straining to get the rhyme, but strangely compelling.
I Like the ending
I Like the ending

"I find your lack of belief in the Three Dimensionality disturbing." Mercenary
"So getting this chick back is more than just getting a chick back. It's the concrete manifestation of an abstract policy goal. And we like concrete - right, Vic?"
Red wine...the only way to frag
"So getting this chick back is more than just getting a chick back. It's the concrete manifestation of an abstract policy goal. And we like concrete - right, Vic?"
Red wine...the only way to frag
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Re: Ill-Gotten Credit
Yes SirGunFreak wrote:Keep your deals clean, and your temper in check,
or my sweet bead of plasma will run down your neck.

Good effort,
The thing is...there is no thing.
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hmmmmm sweeeet plassssma.......
exelent job my good man!

exelent job my good man!
want the FACTS about X2/X3?
Usenko wrote:Don't get me wrong, I think animals have their place in the scheme of things. It's just that in the case of sheep, cattle and pigs, their place happens to be in neat pieces under the griller.
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Yeah, sorry if the meter is absent. I had about five minutes between crises here at work to squeeze the ol' creative juices. I had resolutions about using "slob" but kind of made it keep on the "edgy" theme.
After Love's Blazing White Sun, I decided to shorten these up a bit as well. Seems the country song theme doesn't fit the X-universe
After Love's Blazing White Sun, I decided to shorten these up a bit as well. Seems the country song theme doesn't fit the X-universe
