Eden chapter 1 (part 1)

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Eden chapter 1 (part 1)

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current location: kha'ak high council's court room
"Jury have you reached a decision on young Eden yet ?"the judge asked with a rather aggressive tone
a kha'ak stands up and says "Sir we find young Eden guilty of being insane. As a punishment we are going to send him into exile and cut him off from the over mind"
"how the hell are you going to do that"the judge asked looking at the juror as if he had three eyes like a paranid.
" looking through young Eden's notebooks we found he experimented on someone and managed to cut off him off from the hives over mind and managed to keep him alive. We are going to do the same to him"
"Eden please enter your ship and dock at the carrier thats waiting out side"
Eden reluctantly did so and found himself jumped to an unknown sector far away from the kha'ak sectors he knew so well. "before you go Eden report to the medic bay on this ship"the captain announced. "try and make me"Eden muttered to himself and started to run as fast as he could to his ship sudenly............................................................................
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sorry if its a little on the short side
expect part to come out in approximately a month
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Khaak

Post by Boro Pi »

Peace,

Excuse me for for being somehow destructive. But do you really think, that a species existing in a hive over mind does have things like personal notebooks, courts and captains? Not to mention dialogues.

Sir Boro Pi

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