first pic.
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first pic.
here is the first xuniverse picture i have made. it is not very big but it's a beginning.
http://img484.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ekt3jt.jpg
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http://img484.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ekt3jt.jpg
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Here's my honest critique. Looks good. However, I didn't see it as an X until I read it here. So I would suggest moving the X over a bit and making the shape more clear by making the lower right part of the X more substantial than it is now. Second, I can see the pixelation of the white outline... which slightly frags the image. A softening tool or a very SMALL smudge brush effect can clear that up for you. And remember to use layers if you aren't already, that way you can work on the X and keep the 3 out of it, and keep the background out of the mix as well. Then export as JPEG, repost, and go from there.
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well, i made a new one. its pretty much the same, but some more details.
http://img469.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ect0nr.jpg
hope its better!
http://img469.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ect0nr.jpg
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yeah, i do think it was quite bad.
this is a better version of the first one:
http://img390.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ce25ji.jpg
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this is a better version of the first one:
http://img390.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ce25ji.jpg
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Now you've got me thinking
1 or 3
I like the explosion effect of number 3, but i think number 1 has a better contrast. So i'm not sure which is the better of the two.
At the end of the day, all that really matters is what you want. If pushed i would probably stick with number 1, but thats due to the impact after first seeing it.
1 or 3

I like the explosion effect of number 3, but i think number 1 has a better contrast. So i'm not sure which is the better of the two.
At the end of the day, all that really matters is what you want. If pushed i would probably stick with number 1, but thats due to the impact after first seeing it.
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I like the Third.... it just feels right.... 

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The third one is great!
The only thing is that I would take the lower half of the "main" stroke of the X and reverse the direction of the bend, just to make it a bit more obvious that it's an X and not a C with a couple of accents or something.
Unless you're going for a planet-silhouette thing, which I can kinda see.
Overall, I like it!
The only thing is that I would take the lower half of the "main" stroke of the X and reverse the direction of the bend, just to make it a bit more obvious that it's an X and not a C with a couple of accents or something.
Unless you're going for a planet-silhouette thing, which I can kinda see.
Overall, I like it!

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