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is the picture good?

ok
12
22%
good
21
39%
good
21
39%
 
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Post by e033x »

here is the first xuniverse picture i have made. it is not very big but it's a beginning.

http://img484.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ekt3jt.jpg

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Post by MGA »

Intriguing. What does the symbol mean though?
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Post by e033x »

i'ts x, but i agree that its hard to see.
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Post by e033x »

the firs poll answer should be 'very good'.
i wrote it but for somewhat reason it didn't work.
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Post by CBJ »

Something very weird has happened to your poll. The first two options are actually the same option and fixing one changes the other one as well. :think:
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Post by DIGSIN »

rather oriental as in ying and yang
i like it
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Post by AdmiralTigerclaw »

Here's my honest critique. Looks good. However, I didn't see it as an X until I read it here. So I would suggest moving the X over a bit and making the shape more clear by making the lower right part of the X more substantial than it is now. Second, I can see the pixelation of the white outline... which slightly frags the image. A softening tool or a very SMALL smudge brush effect can clear that up for you. And remember to use layers if you aren't already, that way you can work on the X and keep the 3 out of it, and keep the background out of the mix as well. Then export as JPEG, repost, and go from there.
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Post by e033x »

well, i made a new one. its pretty much the same, but some more details.

http://img469.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ect0nr.jpg

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Post by DIGSIN »

Prefer the original (simple and to the point)

This one looks a bit to cluttered
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Post by Mastermue »

Umm, what DIGSIN said!
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Post by e033x »

yeah, i do think it was quite bad.

this is a better version of the first one:

http://img390.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ce25ji.jpg

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Post by Mastermue »

Now that (3rd one), I like a lot!
:D

I like the 'explosion' of colours from the centre outwards and that it's not 'over' done which, to me, gives a great effect! I also like your own take on the X3 logo.

Nice one! :D :thumb_up:
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Post by MGA »

The second one wasn't great, I do like the third one though. Very nice.
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Post by DIGSIN »

Now you've got me thinking
1 or 3 :gruebel:

I like the explosion effect of number 3, but i think number 1 has a better contrast. So i'm not sure which is the better of the two.

At the end of the day, all that really matters is what you want. If pushed i would probably stick with number 1, but thats due to the impact after first seeing it.
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Post by e033x »

personaly, i like the third one.
i forgot to set the alpha on the x to 50%, but i did on the third.
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Post by domflorrie »

I like the Third.... it just feels right.... :)
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Post by e033x »

thx
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Post by Under God »

1st - 82%
2nd - 49%
3rd - 96%

Scale based on the Underish Scale of Fine Arts


(100% being based on nothing in particular and 0% based on totally sucks)
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Post by Thalass »

The third one is great!

The only thing is that I would take the lower half of the "main" stroke of the X and reverse the direction of the bend, just to make it a bit more obvious that it's an X and not a C with a couple of accents or something.

Unless you're going for a planet-silhouette thing, which I can kinda see.


Overall, I like it! :thumb_up:
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