Rogues Revenge Ch 16 27/8

SteveMill · Post by **SteveMill** » Wed, 27. Aug 03, 12:01

Chapter Fifteen: Assault Vector

“Bring me Captain Hart and remove that offence from my eyes.” Law’s order sliced through the frozen silence of the command centre like his voice was a diamond-edged blade, glittering and deadly. Hagman instantly cut the main viewer but an after-image of the Black Heart, a wounded, broken hulk made ghost by the crystal haze of frozen gases venting from multiple hull breaches, remained burnt on his retina.

Continued on the Space Ritual site, below.

Faze · Post by **Faze** » Wed, 27. Aug 03, 12:32

Love it Steve.

;p

KiwiNZ · Post by **KiwiNZ** » Wed, 27. Aug 03, 13:36

Excellent read, Steve. It opens again many possibilities for the next chapter(s). I'd like to have one of those interplanetery assault vessels parked at my front door thanks. Mars is near enough to try

Looks like Jackson has got his second station more or less in his pocket

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Al · Post by Al » Wed, 27. Aug 03, 13:43

Yup great stuff. Get it while its hot

Al

Adamskini · Post by **Adamskini** » Wed, 27. Aug 03, 14:20

another good read Steve, only problem i was having is with trying to picture the big Skull assualt ship, i need drawings to get a proper idea

KiwiNZ · Post by **KiwiNZ** » Wed, 27. Aug 03, 23:37

Gandalf The White · Post by **Gandalf The White** » Wed, 27. Aug 03, 23:50

I would say sort of like Voyager.

Moss · Post by **Moss** » Sat, 30. Aug 03, 14:33

Bump..

Great story

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Deleted User · Post by **Deleted User** » Sun, 31. Aug 03, 00:17

The Doctor wrote:I would say sort of like Voyager.

My fav ST ship, nice read Steve

KiwiNZ · Post by **KiwiNZ** » Mon, 1. Sep 03, 02:09

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Rogues Revenge Ch 16 27/8

Rogues Revenge Ch 16 27/8