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Reapers Passage thoughts so far?

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Reapers Passage Chapter 71 posted

Friday 26th October 07

Quite an enjoyable one to write hope you enjoy it too. This one suspects there may be some sort of fracas ahead!

As ever the Paranoid one is always happy to get your opinions and comments! :D
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ooh, there's going to be a big chaotic firefight comming up 8) :twisted:
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Finally had a chance to catch up on everything - I'm really, really looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reapers Passage Chapter 72 posted

Monday 29th Oct 07

Thanks for the comments hope you all enjoy this slightly brutal one. :D

As ever glad to hear any further opinions.
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Brutal's certainly the word!

Good though, enjoyed it.
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:thumb_up: good one Paranoid66
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Thanks for the support. Yes that one was pretty harsh which is how I would prefer my violence to be. Besides the LoD are not what you would call nice people!

Reapers Passage Chapter 73 posted

Friday 2nd November 07

No blood and guts here just positioning.

As ever all further comments appreciated. :D
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smart move by the damned GTD off the bodies :)

Methinks Sven's outmanouvered here.
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Chapter 74 posted

Sunday 04th Nov 07

Kind of feels appropriate that this one arrives on a new page to me.

I feel rather sorry for AFC 4 if its not one thing its something else!

All comments appreciated as ever.

The cleanup GTD seemed like a good idea at the time. I liked his excuse myself! Otherwise it looks like Sven might be the least of Anna's worries. :D
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Now I wonder if it's ANI or that Alien tech that screwing the comms again :?:

Anyway, another great chapter Paranoid :)
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Chapter 75 posted

Tuesday 6th November 07

That was a funny one as the timeline advanced almost nothing at all.

More Cannon Fodder on the station :?:

Glad to see your still enjoying the story Snowship.

As ever all comments welcome and appreciated. :D
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Chapter 76 posted

Thursday 8th November 07

Kind of played out very quickly was it an anti-climax?

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It was a bit confusing in the beginning of the chapter, also thought it may have been a bit too quickly wrapped up (maybe it could have been spaced to 2 chapters?).

Although I'm assuming now other arcs in the storyline can progress again (pollypoop & Feys' nemisis?).

Wonder what going to happen with Anna, Ravn etc next......
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Snowship wrote:It was a bit confusing in the beginning of the chapter, also thought it may have been a bit too quickly wrapped up (maybe it could have been spaced to 2 chapters?).
Well that is a first for me being too brief, but I agree having some concerns myself. I guess I was starting to feel a bit bogged down and wanted to free things up a bit. Have a cunning plan with the next few chapters to fill in some details in a different manner.

First however I think I will take a look at 76 add some short lead in's to the various sections. I agree the leaps are a little abrupt in places.

I confess I quite enjoyed Fay relating some events in retrospect as a change of pace though.

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Did anyone think I had blown AFC 4 up (from the description at one point). I confess that brief moment of confusion was deliberate - just a little amusing wake up call for the reader - even though it was clarified a little later. :twisted:
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Chapter 76 posted with some additional content.

Saturday 10th November 07

Nothing changed just filled it out a bit as I promised.

There is always one every so often that requires a little reworking.

Maybe somebody will tell me what they think :D
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Chapter 77 posted

Tuesday 13th of November 07

What can I say about this short soapy one... it is not what I expected myself. I had about five false starts before it came together as it is.

Anyway as ever happy to hear any comments. :D
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Keep em coming :D
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I know Snowship I'm slowing down a bit!


Chapter 78 posted.

Friday 18th November 07

Can anyone guess what Tur Ryn is going to do :?:

I don't think its too difficult but then I know :P

Like I always say all comments appreciated. :D
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Post by Snowship »

I reakon he's going to try and get one of his captives against Poly :?:
as a rough quess.


Also enjoyed the mention of mead, I think that's the 1st time I've read about beer in the X Universe (personally I'd go nuts in a universe without beer, hmmm beer :D ).

Can't wait til the next one. 8)
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Yes beer though mead is kind of an odd one. These small details just help make them Argons seem a bit more human. I guess part of Tur's plot should be out of the bag with this one.

Chapter 79 posted

Monday 19th November 07

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