Good chapter and a nice build up for the battle to come Steve, there seems a lot of uncertainties concerning Laws forces and tactics, leaving quite a bit for us to speculate about, will Jackson come through and do well, he should after his rather large recent investment, i'd think anyway.
Looking forward to more good reading, cheers.
Rogues Resurgence Ch 19 completed 22.4.03
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Excellent read, Steve! Now we are gearing up for action by the looks of it.
I like the '... jeans' bit
Mind you, I don't trust the girl. Wrong questions at the right time ....
Cool, that build-up got my heart beat faster!
Can't wait for more.
Wouldn't be me if I hadn't noticed a typo
"what’s they word he used"
I like the '... jeans' bit

Mind you, I don't trust the girl. Wrong questions at the right time ....

Cool, that build-up got my heart beat faster!
Can't wait for more.
Wouldn't be me if I hadn't noticed a typo

"what’s they word he used"
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Thanks, will edit that.KiwiNZ wrote:Excellent read, Steve! Now we are gearing up for action by the looks of it.
I like the '... jeans' bit
Mind you, I don't trust the girl. Wrong questions at the right time ....![]()
Cool, that build-up got my heart beat faster!
Can't wait for more.
Wouldn't be me if I hadn't noticed a typo![]()
"what’s they word he used"
I'm about to start work on the final chapter. It might be awhile as I want to post it complete.
Chapter Twenty: Vengeance

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Hopefully you mean the final chapter in this story, and then you'll be working on the next installment? Or maybe a completely new story based in the X universe....SteveMill wrote:
I'm about to start work on the final chapter. It might be awhile as I want to post it complete.
Chapter Twenty: Vengeance

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