Homebound -chptr 2(complete 09/09/04)

Mercenary · Post by **Mercenary** » Thu, 9. Sep 04, 12:34

Chapter 2 now completed under +++++

And on to chapter 3...

Al · Post by Al » Thu, 9. Sep 04, 13:03

Good stuff. Looks like there will might be more action on the horizon

Al

Tyepo · Post by **Tyepo** » Thu, 9. Sep 04, 13:38

Good read merc!

Lookin forward to the next chapter.

Found a typo for ya.....

Tor relaxed in the pilot seat, "We all saying things when we're a bit stressed or angry, it's something in our nature and a natural way for us to vent off unwanted emotions." He paused, "When he's in a good mood ask Broden if he meant it and see what response you get."

Quetz · Post by **Quetz** » Thu, 9. Sep 04, 14:57

Great stuff Merc, looking forward to the next chapter now

By the way Dark Mage...

KiwiNZ · Post by **KiwiNZ** » Thu, 9. Sep 04, 20:06

Excellent read. Although there was no action in it, I felt a lot of suspense. Very well done! I am curious what the next chapter will bring. Will there be life on the planet? Have the inhabitants of the system survived just like the Mohrabas did?

Looking forward to more!

crunn · Post by **crunn** » Thu, 9. Sep 04, 23:50

Adamskini · Post by **Adamskini** » Sat, 11. Sep 04, 19:40

nicely completed

Medic279 · Post by **Medic279** » Sun, 26. Sep 04, 04:14

Nice continuation Merc.

Cheers for the link to your fantasy writing and that forum - will have a good and proper read when it's not 3am and perhaps feedback if I think of anything not aready covered there.

Matt

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Homebound -chptr 2(complete 09/09/04)