The Gate (TT3) - Chptr 4 completed (28/01/04)

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Mercenary wrote:Looks like you have some catching up to do.. :D

Disco is long gone. In terms of assets he controls a hidden base (constructed by Aliens but never occupied) with all sorts of interesting toys including construction robots.

He has the silicon mine and the majority of the sectors fighters under his direct command.

Under construction using the available resources and alien tech he is building a Cattle Ranch to supply the Cahoona Bakery and a Crystal Fab to supply the Paranid SPP.
thanks for that sumary. I was wondering a bit myself what other crucial factories he had in this sector but that all makes sense.

So thanks for that :D
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KiwiNZ wrote:
thanks for that sumary. I was wondering a bit myself what other crucial factories he had in this sector but that all makes sense.

So thanks for that :D
Understandable as there was quite a break between chapter sections around christmas and it's the first chapter which holds most of this detail.

There's a couple more twists to the story before long so shout if anything seems a bit vague...
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An unexpected but perhaps not too surprising turn of events. I do wonder who voted for Tor tho, the Paranid would be my guess.

I'd say Tor made a good move re the Ghojo programe and it looks like some interesting times ahead, but what part will Tor be playing in them? I shall be looking forward to finding out.

I'm with Parrel on not liking Hollant, he obviously worked for awhile behind Tors back to get this vote through.
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I think I might have parsially worked out what will happen here.

The natives to that sector might have worked out exactly who sent that message. If Sweety told them exactly who had sent it. That wasn't mentioned. Lets say for arguments sake that it was. They may only wish to deal with Tor and become quite agressive if they don't deal with him. Thus making tis power struggle look all the more stupid. That's a possible way I look at it at any rate.
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ooooooooooooooooooooooh! im mad grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Tor needs to say sumthing witty to them all!
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^BUMP^

any news on pt3?

:D cant wait
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Adamskini wrote:Tor needs to say sumthing witty to them all!
yup, something like "morons go home" :D
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Mercenary wrote:
Fear wrote:I was wondering what assets does Tor have besides the Modified Disco?

He did have a station right, where all the people were put on to go through the jumpgate.


Looks like you have some catching up to do.. :D

Disco is long gone. In terms of assets he controls a hidden base (constructed by Aliens but never occupied) with all sorts of interesting toys including construction robots.

He has the silicon mine and the majority of the sectors fighters under his direct command.

Under construction using the available resources and alien tech he is building a Cattle Ranch to supply the Cahoona Bakery and a Crystal Fab to supply the Paranid SPP.
I don't need any catching up to do, I've read every part of it thusfar. Tor did have a modified ship in which he killed that Xenon Destroyer(or was it Khaak? don't think so, but not 100% sure). Can't remember the type it was originaly? It is the Defiance right? as he let Sweety remove the cool stuff from all the other ships she modded.

Who owns the Roamer btw?
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Post by pixel »

Great stuff Merc!!!!

Just read the last 3 chapters in my luch break, really enjoyed it!!


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@ Fear

The Defiance is a copied version of the X-Shuttle, made from plans stolen by Nyeshta and then used by Tor and Sweety, i'm not sure at he moment if this ship actualy belongs to Tor tho!

The Roamer I would guess still belongs to the Argon Government.
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Well I suppose it could belong to the government still, although at the moment it would really belong "technically" I would have thought to the sector governer
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Yes and No, Daz. Because Parrel has stated that he will remain neutral in the whole mess they are in, the Roamer does not belong to anybody but Parrel and crew. Though, being neutral is only correct until he chooses one side, which is most likely Tor's for as long as Tor does not do anything stupid :D
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Just got back. Will resume typing this evening and should have the next part completed by tomorrow evening.

Hi Fear:

As Moss says the Defiance is a copy of the X-Shuttle (plans stolen from the Argon Government). The ship destroyed was a Khaak Destroyer.

The Mammoth belongs to a research organisation Advanced Industries Corp (AIC) that does a considerable amount of contract work for the Argon Government.

Parrel as an employee and ship commander holds the view that as the AIC still exists, allbeit in a different part of the universe the ship still belongs to them.
Adamskini wrote:Tor needs to say sumthing witty to them all!
At the moment I have, "So far I'm having a bad day and someone is going to feel it...."

But as circumstances are currently panning out, the most appropriate comment of the moment might just end up as "Oh, shit!"
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It's comming back to me now. I think that modified X-shuttle belongs to Nyeshta. But that she loaned it to Tor as he saved her life. She could have given it to him aswell though. It was originaly hers.

I take it Parrel's Corvette is a Centaur as the roamer is a Mammoth and Parrel is probably an Argon.
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Oh and hurry on that Part 3 and 4 :P
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Fear wrote:It's comming back to me now. I think that modified X-shuttle belongs to Nyeshta. But that she loaned it to Tor as he saved her life. She could have given it to him aswell though. It was originaly hers.

I take it Parrel's Corvette is a Centaur as the roamer is a Mammoth and Parrel is probably an Argon.

Correct in every respect. :wink:
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Completed under the ********

A short chapter overall as I want to keep the first meeting all in the same chapter...

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Post by KiwiNZ »

Excellent end to the chapter! Looks ;ike Tor did wake up at last. That grim determination may surprise a few people around him. But Parrel is right in being conscious about the direction Tor may move in. I am also curious to see if the Mohrabas had any connection to the Aliens that provided the tech for the Defiance and if, on what terms they were.

Very interesting developments and also good concise background on a bit of history of the Mohrabas.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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