[Poem] With you I fell so very fine

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Teladi Profit
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[Poem] With you I fell so very fine

Post by Teladi Profit »

I wrote a little poem.
Hope you like it. ;)



With you I fell so very fine.
Babe, believe me - love`s no crime.
How I wish you could be mine.
I want to be your Valentine.
Darling, our love is simply divine.
Let`s go somewhere nice to dine.
Qould you come over for a glass of wine?
I hope to see you again some time.
When I saw you for the very first time ...
Oh, how I longed to make you mine.
I fell in love 'cause you looked so fine.

I love you more then words can say.
I love you more abd nore each day.
I think of you each night and day.
Before I met you, my days were gray.
Baby, quick kiss me and tell me you`ll stay.
If you go out with me, I`ll pay.
Oh Darling, please don`t go away.
Our love will never fade away.
With you by my side I can`t go astray.
I`d like to kiss you, if I may.

You are the sunshine of my life.
I wish we we could be husband and wife.
I have been waiting for you all my life.
In the sea of love with you I would dive.
Come over to my place after five.
Without your love I can`t survive.
I want children with you, but not more then five.
You make me feel so much alive.
To get to you, a thousand miles I would drive.
I want you, dead or alive.

Your eyes they are like stars so bright.
You keep me awake at night.
Let`s go to the cinema / a restaurant tonight.
You are sweet and funny and always right.
You are my beacon in the dark of the night.
Please come closer, I won`t bite.
We could sit together by candle light.
Kiss me quick and hold me tight.
I`m thinking of you day and night.

You are the cutest one of all.
I had your number, every day I would call.
Your love hit me like a cannon ball.
I can`t think of anything else at all.
I´m desperately waiting for your call.
I`ll surely love you until fall.
When we talk I can you tell all.
Open your heart, you can me tell all.
Don`t keep me waiting until fall.

I really have a crush on you.
I have a major crush on you.
I can`t resist your charms - it`s true.
For a long time I`ve been watching you.
I`m head over heals in love with you.
Tell me quick, »Do you love me too?«
I`m total crazy about you.
If you were in love with me, too ...
If you said »I love you too;« ...
... I´d kiss you till our lips are blue.
... I`d jump for joy like kangaroo.

My heart is in your hands.
I believe in happy ends.
I am the greatest of your fans.
Tell me, »Do I have a chance?«
I know a nice place where we can dance.
Babe, please give our love a chance.
Please don`t say, »Let`s just be friends.«
We are more than good friends.
You have the cards in your own hands.
Without you, my life doesn`t make sense.
I love you - I`ve no other chance.

You`re the most beautiful girl under the sun.
Girl, you are my number one.
Make up your mind or I`ll be gone.
Of all the moments we`ve had, I regret none.
Come on, Baby - let`s have some fun.
I love you like I´ve never loved anyone.
I ´m under your spell - what have you done?
For me you are the only one.
Being with you is so much fun.
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I will get Peter Quince to write a ballad of this dream

Post by Boro Pi »

Peace,

Is this thought to be serious in any way or is it parody? :roll:

See, despite its length, it still looks like an ad-lib work.

Sir Boro Pi

PS: Would you like, to play the lion too?
Teladi Profit
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Re: I will get Peter Quince to write a ballad of this dream

Post by Teladi Profit »

Asthetic Greetings!

Help me! Help me!
The boron Hippocampinae is following me!
Aaarrrggghhh! :P


Think it's more parody. ;)
But the girl, who i gave this, liked it very well. :roll:

It isn't an ad-lib work.


Profit!

PS
Lion? ROOAAAR!
Zalophus :mrgreen:
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