Traders Tale II - Chapter 8 - completed (24/06/03)
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Still doesn't mean that there can't be suspitions and trying to force a mistake. I wonder what their motivation is then?
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Nice end to the chapter Merc, how Nyeshta will hide for long from three intel officers (if thats what they are, saw no id being shown around!) is going to be tricky i'd think, still she could always spend time on the ship teaching Tor how to defend when Sweety attacks him in chess with 50 blobby things
by the way shouldn't that be 8 blobby things! or has the game evolved?

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Hi Daz,
Soon, I'll be working on it later today and try have the 1st part out tomorrow evening...
Ah well, if Tor knew the game then ... 
Soon, I'll be working on it later today and try have the 1st part out tomorrow evening...
Moss wrote:Nice end to the chapter Merc, how Nyeshta will hide for long from three intel officers (if thats what they are, saw no id being shown around!) is going to be tricky i'd think, still she could always spend time on the ship teaching Tor how to defend when Sweety attacks him in chess with 50 blobby thingsby the way shouldn't that be 8 blobby things! or has the game evolved?


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So are Sweety and Nyeshta going to merge then? Or will she get it together with our main character? lol even so, if that happened, Sweety would get jellass I think
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So will the story take us up to when he does his disappearing act? If you remember right back at the start, or will that all be explained? Have you thought about that? I'm interested in what happens here, because you can look at this story, and it's all really from Tris telling it isn't it.
some who deserve life receive death. Others who deserve death receive life. Can you give it to them? Don't be eager to deal out death in judgement, for not even the wise can see all ends.
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Not this one, we're still a good five Argon years before that happens.... As for Tris, now where did she get too...The Doctor wrote:So will the story take us up to when he does his disappearing act? If you remember right back at the start, or will that all be explained? Have you thought about that? I'm interested in what happens here, because you can look at this story, and it's all really from Tris telling it isn't it.

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