Traders Tale II - Chapter 8 - completed (24/06/03)

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Still doesn't mean that there can't be suspitions and trying to force a mistake. I wonder what their motivation is then?
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The Doctor wrote:Still doesn't mean that there can't be suspitions and trying to force a mistake. I wonder what their motivation is then?
:) True, but the beginning of the next chapter should help to answer your question.. :wink:
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Nice end to the chapter Merc, how Nyeshta will hide for long from three intel officers (if thats what they are, saw no id being shown around!) is going to be tricky i'd think, still she could always spend time on the ship teaching Tor how to defend when Sweety attacks him in chess with 50 blobby things :D by the way shouldn't that be 8 blobby things! or has the game evolved?
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So when we seeing ch 9?
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Hi Daz,

Soon, I'll be working on it later today and try have the 1st part out tomorrow evening...
Moss wrote:Nice end to the chapter Merc, how Nyeshta will hide for long from three intel officers (if thats what they are, saw no id being shown around!) is going to be tricky i'd think, still she could always spend time on the ship teaching Tor how to defend when Sweety attacks him in chess with 50 blobby things :D by the way shouldn't that be 8 blobby things! or has the game evolved?
:) Ah well, if Tor knew the game then ... :wink:
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So are Sweety and Nyeshta going to merge then? Or will she get it together with our main character? lol even so, if that happened, Sweety would get jellass I think
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There's no plan currently to merge the two characters... as for them getting together, only time will tell, but as you mention Sweety might have something to say about it.. :roll:
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So will the story take us up to when he does his disappearing act? If you remember right back at the start, or will that all be explained? Have you thought about that? I'm interested in what happens here, because you can look at this story, and it's all really from Tris telling it isn't it.
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The Doctor wrote:So will the story take us up to when he does his disappearing act? If you remember right back at the start, or will that all be explained? Have you thought about that? I'm interested in what happens here, because you can look at this story, and it's all really from Tris telling it isn't it.
Not this one, we're still a good five Argon years before that happens.... As for Tris, now where did she get too... :roll:
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indeed, was wondering.
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