When I first drafted the section there was going to be a connection between the Mohrabas and the Alien in the first story, i.e. some previous encounter between the two races.KiwiNZ wrote:Excellent end to the chapter! Looks ;ike Tor did wake up at last. That grim determination may surprise a few people around him. But Parrel is right in being conscious about the direction Tor may move in. I am also curious to see if the Mohrabas had any connection to the Aliens that provided the tech for the Defiance and if, on what terms they were.
Very interesting developments and also good concise background on a bit of history of the Mohrabas.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
But having re-read the section the connection just didn't seem to work and could overly complicate things....
Corrected cheers...KiwiNZ wrote: "pumping though his body"
"The ships scanned filtered through"
