The Mossfoot Marauder: Comments

Mailo · Post by **Mailo** » Tue, 29. Jan 08, 12:30

If he messes up the rescue because he named a ship "Ran's Rescue", I'll smack him

Nice story, really enjoyed reading it so far.

supakillaii · Post by **supakillaii** » Wed, 30. Jan 08, 10:41

Awesome. Pure dance of words.

EDIT: Just got a- THE best idea EVER. Someone (please?) make the (custom) ships... like Ran's Revenge, the Cruiser/Destroyer thing, Mossfoot ships (the ones with the cool 'pics' on the side)....

mossfootx · Post by **mossfootx** » Mon, 4. Feb 08, 19:15

Chapter 23 - Feints and Fortunes

is now up

mossfootx · Post by **mossfootx** » Tue, 5. Feb 08, 16:21

Chapter 24 - A Simple Ploy

and

Chapter 25 - Happy Vapor Trails

Are now up, and the novel is now complete.

It totals at 51,000 words, which is basically a short novel in length (60-100,000 words is considered normal novel length)

Hope you enjoyed it. Later I'll give it a bit of an edit/polish and give it to Roguey to do with what he will

Mailo · Post by **Mailo** » Tue, 5. Feb 08, 17:25

Wow, that was fast, almost missed it.

Great ending, I'm a sucker for happy ones though

Have you planned a sequel?

Madw0lf · Post by **Madw0lf** » Tue, 5. Feb 08, 20:24

Oh wow, awesome work man! Absolutely loved the ending.

Please dont let this be the end of your contributions to this board!!

mossfootx · Post by **mossfootx** » Tue, 5. Feb 08, 21:25

Heh, fast but not THAT fast. Iould hav mean 50,000 words is a short novel. I could have stretched it out but didn't see a point.

A good story shouldn't take forever to read unless it has a point in doing so. And I think this one got the point across nicely

A sequel? Maybe someday, but I have a lot of projects to do in a lot of other areas. I have a novel I'm trying to get published, a comic book series that needs my attention, a video journal to finish... yikes

elwayno · Post by **elwayno** » Tue, 5. Feb 08, 23:35

ur a pro writer? can see why

if any rps i do turn out half as good ill be happy.

mossfootx · Post by **mossfootx** » Wed, 6. Feb 08, 10:17

Semi-pro. Technically pro because I have and am paid to write, but I won't consider myself a true pro till I get a novel published

By the way, those of you who like the story I'd like to encourage you to spread the word about it once I get it polished a bit. I'll clean it up a bit, format it nicely and make it avaialble as a .pdf on Roguey's site. When that happens I'll let you know, and feel free to show it to whoever you think would like it

supakillaii · Post by **supakillaii** » Wed, 6. Feb 08, 15:06

Wahhooo!!! I'll copy, print and even more copy it and sell it for prit$$$$$.... nah, j/k... But it rawks.... it's better than HP!

elwayno · Post by **elwayno** » Wed, 6. Feb 08, 17:31

well hope you get a novel published.

supakillaii · Post by **supakillaii** » Wed, 6. Feb 08, 18:47

I hope it's this novel. If it is (and even if it's not this one that get's published), can you send me a copy (with your signature in it) to me?

mossfootx · Post by **mossfootx** » Wed, 6. Feb 08, 22:52

No, not this novel. This was just a bit of fun. I've already formatted it so it's in a proper novel layout and made it into a .pdf

The novel I'm trying to get published is about an English teacher in Japan (it involves a computer geek so everyone here will relate

)

supakillaii · Post by **supakillaii** » Thu, 7. Feb 08, 08:39

pls send me a copy with you're signature on it!

elwayno · Post by **elwayno** » Thu, 7. Feb 08, 11:17

mossfootx wrote:No, not this novel. This was just a bit of fun. I've already formatted it so it's in a proper novel layout and made it into a .pdf

The novel I'm trying to get published is about an English teacher in Japan (it involves a computer geek so everyone here will relate )

im afraid im no good with computers. gaming, internet and musics all i can do

Roguey · Post by **Roguey** » Thu, 7. Feb 08, 23:09

mossfootx wrote:I'll clean it up a bit, format it nicely and make it avaialble as a .pdf on Roguey's site. When that happens I'll let you know, and feel free to show it to whoever you think would like it

beat you to it

- X3 Novels

mossfootx · Post by **mossfootx** » Thu, 7. Feb 08, 23:34

Indeed you did. Hope the folks here enjoy the format

mossfootx · Post by **mossfootx** » Thu, 7. Feb 08, 23:40

Yep, beat me to it.

When you run it it'll start you right on Chapter 1, but there is in fact a front cover and opening pages to make it in line with a proper novel (in case anyone bothers printing it

)

Just a bit of fun, but hey, might as well make it look nice

supakillaii · Post by **supakillaii** » Sun, 10. Feb 08, 20:16

/me is still waiting for that signed hard covered copy...

Stryc9 · Post by **Stryc9** » Mon, 9. Jun 08, 11:50

This was an awesome story mossfootx, I intended to be in bed asleep almost three hours ago but I couldn't tear myself away from the texty goodness, I kept telling myself just one more chapter and that was at chapter 16. Well done!

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The Mossfoot Marauder: Comments