Traders Tale II - Final Chptr - complete (20/10/03)

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Mercenary wrote:There's one guess which isn't far off in terms of "who" :P

Anyway I will see how much I can get typed this evening, but it could be tomorrow eveing before you have your answer...
Is it a killer robot sent by future Xenon to take over the sector governership?
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SteveMill wrote:
Mercenary wrote:There's one guess which isn't far off in terms of "who" :P

Anyway I will see how much I can get typed this evening, but it could be tomorrow eveing before you have your answer...
Is it a killer robot sent by future Xenon to take over the sector governership?
That'll be Sweety then.... :twisted:
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Post by Al »

Great stuff Merc. Makes coming back to work much easier :D

1 error:

"beat" should be "be at"

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Post by General Morphit »

Mercenary wrote:There's one guess which isn't far off in terms of "who" :P
Well, seeing as I took so many random stabs in the dark, that doesnt give much away :P
Cant wait till tonight, 8) must.. find.. out....


Oh yeah, Bump! :D
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Post by Gandalf The White »

Who else could it be other than Creed?
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Post by Mercenary »

Chapter and story now complete under the ~~~~~~~

(Now where was that X2.... hmm, not here yet.... ho hum..)
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Post by General Morphit »

:o :o :o
:D I was right.. ish. Looks like they are gonna hop back home in time for the party .. if the party is in 200 Mohrabas solar cycles. Hmm, wonder how long that'll be. Well, we'll find out.. next book! :D

I think its "..solar cycles of the.." just pluralize the cycle.
and "I would have though it’s apparent" add a t
Umm, too enthralled to pick up any other errors. :)
Cant wait again.. Roll on TT3 :D
Any news on what the title of this book is going to be?
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Post by KiwiNZ »

Excellent finish! True, it is not the classical cliffhanger, yet, it leaves us wanting to find out more just as much :D Looks like they are given their chance. I guess that was the ancient that disabled the gates in the first place, ey? 200 cycles? Yeah, me too wonders how long that is gonna be.
Good to see that they are apparently safe in that sector, makes development a lot easier. Perhaps sweety also finds a way to adapt that Ghojo program to larger ships while the construction work is going on. Looks like they will need any advantage they can get ... just as much as those reflective shields.

Yay, looking forward to the third book!
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ooooooh, nicelt rapped up :)


200 solar cycles == how many Earth years then? ;)
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Post by Al »

Kinda abrupt ending. Been a great story though and of course sets the scene for TT3. So chapter one by the end of the week? :p

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Al wrote:So chapter one by the end of the week? :p
You have got to be absolutely kidding!!!


How about tomorrow? :D
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Post by crunn »

A masterpiece.
Truly outstanding.
You have outdone yourself.
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Post by Mercenary »

Cheers all,

Edits made, no predictions as to when the next story will start but it will be earlier than Feb 2004...
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Post by Gvork »

Only one word to describe it, class. Keep it up.Please
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Post by SteveMill »

Great story all round Merc. :D
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Post by Gvork »

Only one word to describe it, class. Keep it up.Please
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Post by Gvork »

Only one word to describe it, class. Keep it up.Please
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Post by Gandalf The White »

Very nice!

When's book 3 starting then? Talk about an ending that I didn't think of.
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