1. "appeared to prove the point by flying on circles around " should be in circles.
Good stuff. Will be interesting to see what they do about the unknown ship. I hope he attacks and captures it
Little short but I'm sure you are already working on the next chapter
Al
Cheers Al,
There is more to this chapter coming up soonish. It just had a natural break point here... Original intention was to get to Omicron Lyrae just in this one chapter but I may have to split it in two.
Very good, little does he know who she is and she is out for him on the order of the other Argon, what's his name.
some who deserve life receive death. Others who deserve death receive life. Can you give it to them? Don't be eager to deal out death in judgement, for not even the wise can see all ends.
Excellent read, Merc. Looks like by now Tor does have an advantage of the kind he was looking for. A shuttle is nothing you find every day floating about in space
Looking forward to finding out how he gets on with obtaining that slave.
Oops seemed to have missesd a section or two, dunno how I managed that especialy as I was here earlier today
Still, very interesting read Merc, tense ending too! as I recall Creed and Nyeshta are wanting each other dead on sight, well Creed in particular and here we now have Tor stood between them, now i'm very interested in knowing how this will work out.
This chapter has been planed for some time. Since the first Traders Tale, hence a lot of the earlier side tracks now come to light. It's just been a matter of fittting it in at the appropriate moment.
Also why it's been one of the quickest and longest chapters so far.
The moral dilemma is highlighted more in the next section as history is revealed.
Well, she is a very good mechanic and he certainly can do with somebody like that. Having said that, though, she is also one of Feran's folks and that, of course, could make her a potential danger.
Good mechanic, where on Argon did ya get that idea from, did you read what she did to that ship, killed it single handedly without even drawing a weapon mate! lol, well ok it seems it was in a bad state when she aquired it aparently, but still she was not exactly caring with it. No wonder it refused to obey her and blow up as requested!!!
Hey, she built it from scratch, was simply unlucky of getting low-quality parts for it. Want to see you do that Give her some slack, after all, she is facing in the barrel of a gun in Creeds hand
And he thought the Pirate base was going to be trouble
some who deserve life receive death. Others who deserve death receive life. Can you give it to them? Don't be eager to deal out death in judgement, for not even the wise can see all ends.
KiwiNZ wrote:Hey, she built it from scratch, was simply unlucky of getting low-quality parts for it. Want to see you do that Give her some slack, after all, she is facing in the barrel of a gun in Creeds hand
Well we'll see, if she survives! weather or not she did actualy build it, and getting low quality stuff from Taladi's would be fairly normal i'd think, as for giving her some slack, talk to Creed mate
but there is a fair amount to get through before Tor gets anywhere near the Khaak...
Give her some slack, after all, she is facing in the barrel of a gun in Creeds hand