Homebound - Chpt 11 complete (07/01/05)
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therjw
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Mercenary
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Okay so this is pretty quick going in the chapter posted realm (for me at least).
It's now complete, and a long awaited moment has actually arrived. Though I can anticipate this moment might not be agreeable to everyone, it nevertheless weaves in nicely with the story from the first Traders.
(Does this mean I've been planning far to far in advance).
It's now complete, and a long awaited moment has actually arrived. Though I can anticipate this moment might not be agreeable to everyone, it nevertheless weaves in nicely with the story from the first Traders.
(Does this mean I've been planning far to far in advance).
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General Morphit
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Pretty bloody impressive if you ask me. That really does start to draw the story up neatly. Shame about Tris but I guess as therjw says
Hmm, I seemed to skip the boundry from Gate, to Homebound.. which means the end is way too close
But I'm sure great stuff is still to come.
How many chapters are you intending anyway? TT1 was 25, TT2 was 22 and TT3 was 16.
I suppose theres alot of stuff to round up, the war on the Khaak I could see as eating up quite alot.
therjw wrote:All Great Things Must Come To An End
Hmm, I seemed to skip the boundry from Gate, to Homebound.. which means the end is way too close
But I'm sure great stuff is still to come.
How many chapters are you intending anyway? TT1 was 25, TT2 was 22 and TT3 was 16.
I suppose theres alot of stuff to round up, the war on the Khaak I could see as eating up quite alot.
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Gandalf The White
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KiwiNZ
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YAY, Creed is back. Now that should prove interesting. I am curious to find out how he made it out alive. Interesting twist with Nyeshta! I can imagine Tris going haywire over it. Well, there is certainly one thing for sure, Tor is not going to have an easy time left in the core sectors.
Also good fight, those ID's are quite scary
Looking forward to the next chapter!
"official confirm Tor's" - to confirm or confirming?
Also good fight, those ID's are quite scary
Looking forward to the next chapter!
"official confirm Tor's" - to confirm or confirming?
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Smarty74
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Another great chapter merc 
Me hopes we'll see some action with Tor & Creed before the end 
Really hope Tor finds a solution to his heart condition, after all, The guy deserves to live happily ever after!! Have you got any plans for another X-universe related story and if so will it happen this year??
Looking forward to the next part. Keep up the good work
Me hopes we'll see some action with Tor & Creed before the end Really hope Tor finds a solution to his heart condition, after all, The guy deserves to live happily ever after!! Have you got any plans for another X-universe related story and if so will it happen this year??Looking forward to the next part. Keep up the good work
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Gandalf The White
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Yeah, book 5 of this story of course, Tor has to be sent on that mission by Tris yet whitch will result in him going missing. It's got to happen in the next book because at the moment she's got no rank.
some who deserve life receive death. Others who deserve death receive life. Can you give it to them? Don't be eager to deal out death in judgement, for not even the wise can see all ends.
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