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Time for me to browse the other, eh?Mercenary wrote:
Cheers,
1st time anyones mentioned the link problem and I've been cut and pasting it.
Not as active on the forum as I used to be, just posting here as and when so I have some catch up reading to do.
PM me if you're looking for ideas. In the meantime I'd best get reading.
Note: This is the 4th story in the series, and if you've not read the last 2 then things may appear a bit out of kilter with the X2 universe you know from the game.
Golden_Gonads wrote:Mercenary wrote:Taken it's time as I've been a little distracted with something called 'work' anyway chapter completed under the =====
Cheers.
I think you'll find that its completed, and partially repeated, ie. most the last part was in twice. Anyhows, nice part.
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Goldenus Gonadius
You seem to of repeated yourself twice alsoMercenary wrote: "Good, prepare the drive and initiate if our shield strength falls below fifteen percent."
"Fifteen, won't that cut it a little fine." Tris was worried.
"Very, but if we jump out on the point of victory then we'll have to do all this again." Tor looked at her.
eath, fearing the horrors that lay ahead, she had watched the footage of the last encounter. Thinking to herself how many times the shields had plunged to near critical levels but somehow still making it out. She sensed her mouth was dry and tentatively swallowed to draw out saliva.
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The Defiance emerged at the nearest gate. Tor hit the boost briefly to give the initial surge of speed, driving the ship outside the limits of any Khaak scouts.
Tris looked out of the screen, there was nothing to be seen. As she pondered where the Khaak were, jump tunnels opened up ahead of them and clusters of fighters emerged. Tor glanced across and saw her nervous expression.
isnt that meant to be death,Mercenary wrote: eath, fearing the horrors that lay ahead, she had watched the footage of the last encounter
