Homebound - chpt 7 completed (23/11/04)

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Mercenary
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Post by Mercenary »

Cheers all,
KiwiNZ wrote: "the detonation of the drive larger" - doesn't really fit; word missing when you read the sentence

"early half a stazura later and the six battle sequences later Broden" - 2x later

"to a ultimate Khaak victory" - an

"the display changes to show" - changed
Corrections made
Al
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Post by Al »

Great stuff. Looks like there is fun ahead!

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