Corrections madeKiwiNZ wrote: "the detonation of the drive larger" - doesn't really fit; word missing when you read the sentence
"early half a stazura later and the six battle sequences later Broden" - 2x later
"to a ultimate Khaak victory" - an
"the display changes to show" - changed
Homebound - chpt 7 completed (23/11/04)
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