'Of Future Heroism' - Pt.11 - Fight or Flight...

[Mercenary]

Good read,

The emotional side working well with the clipped style

There are many different facets to the X-Universe so feel free to write about the more "species" side of it without feeling the necessity to embelish it with lots of space scenes.

Stuff like this helps to breath life into the place.

A typo:

part of me is delighted another part of me is sort of frightened of what's going to be like to give birth

"what's" should be "what it's" don't shorten.

In terms of the other threads then I can only use the Yorkshire saying, "There's nought as funny as folk."

Keep writing.

[Some Idiot in PA]

Once it became clear to you that the piece was deeply felt and personal, I feel you should have apologised or stopped posting. I imagine that appealing to your better nature is rather a waste of time though.

Rug

Moi? Apologize? Didn't I already explain why I DON'T apologize? Maybe I wasn't clear enough. Reread my post.

As for my "better nature".... Last I checked, I ditched that two or three years ago.

[Thalass]

Ah. This guy is a tough one. *chuckles*


What Merc said, SW. Keep writing. 'Tis good.