The Gate - TT3 ch2 complete (06/01/04)

[KiwiNZ]

Excellent finish to the chapter, Merc and great to see you back in action!!

Haha ... the cloaking thought is a scary one! I guess they will not make that public But obviously the Mahrabas do know cloaking devices as their defense grid is invisible to scanners.

Looking forward to see how they manage to get in touch with the M's. I do recall reading some of that last year

Now go back to work and write


"Have you checked that, this planetary defence system" - comma

"Slightly more sophisticated then that." - then = than

"He paused a for a moment as he gathered his thoughts, "For the moment" - moment

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[Mercenary]

Cheers Kiwi,

edited.

Nicely remembered, yep the bit I put in the Homebound story is just about to take place...

[SteveMill]

Yep - good ending Merc.

[SteveMill]

A bump is needed.

[Moss]

Nice to have you back continuing the story Merc, some interesting developments in that last section. I do like having the veiwpoint and actions of the Mohrabas explained. I shall be looking forward to more (if none is yet up! I havn't yet checked the forum properly) .

Cheers.

[Mercenary]

Nice to have you back continuing the story Merc, some interesting developments in that last section. I do like having the veiwpoint and actions of the Mohrabas explained. I shall be looking forward to more (if none is yet up! I havn't yet checked the forum properly) .

Cheers.

That's it so far, but half way through typing the first part of the next chapter which should be complete in the next day or two.

[Al]

Nice one Merc. Good to see some more after the recent drought of X story updates

Al

[General Morphit]

My first post in I dont know how long and I go saying silly things: http://www.egosoft.com/x2/forum/viewtop ... 790#239790
Ahh well, great to have you back, and nice to see The Gate up and running again. Keep it up.