The Gate - Chapter 15 complete (21/06/04)

[General Morphit]

Excellent, if anything a little short but it seems apt. Well written as always, looking forward to the journey home.. a little action can we expect?

[Epiphany]

Good chapter Merc, the next saga of this epic series is going to be grand I think

[Quetz]

Poor Ghaan, i miss the guy already

great job merc

Quetz

[SteveMill]

Is that the last chapter? It had a sort of emotional finality to it.

[Charon_A]

Very good reading.
You're exccelent as usually, Merc

Waiting for the next chapters to come.

[FourFingers]

AND thus passes the Venom Master into memory...
Upon his faceless grave it shall be written,
"Ghaan.
He departed the mortal relm as he has helped countless others to depart,
In pain and suffering."

*closes big dusty leather bound book*



does space seem a little quiter to you..


Great stuff Merc!

[Mercenary]

Is that the last chapter? It had a sort of emotional finality to it.

The next one will be the last just so that Tor can re-aquaint himself with people back at home. It could turn out as no more than a short epilogue.

[Al]

Very impressive Merc. Very much like some of Steve's more potentially gruesome bits, the readers imagination is far more powerful than any description.

Only spotted one thing: When talking about the 2exits from the prison compound you say something like " there was only 2 exits" this should be " there were only 2 exits" I think.

Al

[Adamskini]

another great chapter!

[KiwiNZ]

YAY! Nice. That is a very good finish to the chapter and basically also the book! I agree with Al, really great work!

Looking forward to the next installment!

[Fear]

Great and gruwsome end to ghaan

Any plans for a 4th story yet?

[CGrand]

as ever, i'm impressed