Marcus A tale of an Orphan of two worlds
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Marcus A tale of an Orphan of two worlds
Marcus Bentone former Goner on a quest to be reunited with his Wife Vannessa and their child lost to him in the early days of a war that he wanted no part of but that had robbed him of all he held dear in the verse.
The universe would return them to him or they would pay.
What has gone before:
Marcus dreamed of better days, days when by the sweat of his brow and with the love of a woman he had admired since the first time he had met her he had found at last peace and hope for the future.
Marcus blinked as the comm light flashed, opening the link "are you alright ?" he nearly shouted remembering in time that Vannessa his 'ness' did not like to hear him raise his voice.
"I'm fine Marcus just a quick call to let you know Chad has fixed the problem with the north solar panels. We still need what you managed to buy though".
"I'm glad about that I've got betty stuffed to the gills with them".
" What did you pay she asked quickly 12 creds a unit, you got the min thats wonderful news but I can top it, remember that bid for our organic wheat, we've got a confirmation and a sizable deposit".
A deposit Marcus almost choked no one paid deposits to farmers.
"Perhaps there's a shortage somewhere pondered Ness leastways we now have the funds to clear our debt with the finance guild.
Now I think we should celebrate a little continued Ness when will you be back?".
"Two days he sighed" wishing he had been able to upgrade betty before now especialy with Ness so far into her preganancy he hated leaving her even for a moment.
"Don't panic dearheart she whispered" meaning chad must be nearby in her office both "I and the baby are fine at least as far as I can judge by the amount of time he spends kicking me to let me know he's there. Now when you get back we will have a celebration even you have to have some off time Marcus so fly safe and I,ll see you soon I love you she said" smiling that smile that had almost stopped his heart the first time he had ever seen her and still had the same devastating effect on him.
"Beloved" he whispered as she closed the link.
"Betty he called aloud I'm going of shift you have the con".
I have control replied betty have a good rest Marcus I will wake you in 10 hours or sooner if necessary".
"Thank you betty" he replied heading into the tiny day cabin abaft the bridge, he made short work of a ration pack before turning in still picturing that devastating smile that made the goosebumps stand out on his flesh. That smile he slipped into sleep lured by that smile remebering the first time he had seen her at the information desk at that huge outpost in Heretics end where he had gone with all he posessed in the verse following rumours of finance and grants being offered to commonwealth citizens willing to settle in Terran border sectors.
"Can I help you ?" she had asked pleasently but obviousely noting his threadbare clothes.
"Yes ma'am if you please my name is Marcus Marcus Bentone I have heard that the Terran authorities are willing to asisst those who wish to make a new life for themselves in this and nearby sectors".
"We do indeed sir and there are many possible employment opportunities aavailable at this station and many others perhaps I could direct you to an employment agency".
"Oh that would be most kind but unnecessary I am not entirely without means I was wondering whom I should speak to about positioning my wheat farm. I do not wish to offend others who have similar ventures to offer".
"You own a Wheat farm ?"she aked incredulousely.
"Yes ma'am though it is still en route I hired a transporter you see and i thought it prudent to contact the Terran authorities to see where they would allow me to build my station and of course I would like to arrange accomodation if possible untill it arrives in system if iI may be honest the purchase of the wheat farm and the transport costs mean that I have a limited budget".
"Marcus said Vannessa intrigued by this rather threadbare looking young man please come with me".
"Claris she called take over for a moment".
The young Lady Vannessa Brownton Led Marcus deep into the center of the station and after comming an intercom led Marcus into a rather grand office the walls festooned with views of worlds beyond the commonwealth and of one that could only be Earth itself." Malcom I have a rather interesting young man to meet you he wants to make a new life for himself here with some asisstance from ourselves" she said motioning for Marcus to step into the office.
"That is what we are here to provide Malcom replied shaking Marcus's hand warmly taking his cue from Vannessa who had an eye for the unnusual. Now How can I help ?" he asked pouring a glass of minted water for Marcus who was astonished by its subtle flavour.
"Well sir began Marcus I have worked very hard all my life I have a dream sir to make a new life for myself and when I heard there were opportunities to do so here I bought myself and all that I have earnt to begin here with your permission of course".
"What sort of you life do you wish for ?" asked Malcom sipping at his own water.
"Well I have always wanted a farm sir so I have bought one and I was wondering where you would like me to place it that is if it woudl be allowed of course".
Malcom nearly choked on his drink for six months he had been tasked with weeding out the derelicts and con artists who thought they could bilk the empire for funds and now Vannessa had trumped him with an honest man, a man who didn't want funds to buy a station but only to ask permission to place it.
"The Station Transporter is now in system chimed in Vannessa perhaps now would be a good time to position it".
"Speed would be a blessing allowed Marcus I am paying for transport per diem hence my urgency".
" Vannessa will you contact the transport and inform the captain we will bear all insystem costs and arrange adeqaute lodgings for Mr Bentone. Marcus welcome to Heretics end know that we will alays be here to help good men like yourself".
"If you will come with me Marcus said" Vannessa winking at Malcom she led a slightly bewildered Marcus back to the outer levels.
"This is too grand" miss said Marcus looking at what vannessa considered barely tolerable accomadaqtion but that clearly Marcus saw as Luxurious.
"This is Basic accomadation on this station and dont worry Malcom has given you this room free of charge so that you can rest until your transport has finnished your station placement and please call me Vannessa".
she smiled warmly and for a moment Marcus thought his heart had stopped he could not breathe could not think and then she looked away .
"That is most kind he finaly replied is there a cafeteria I could use it has been an arduous Journey".
"Of course this is a station guide she said handing him the room pad just say what you want and it will direct you where did you travel from she asked out of curiosity?".
"Cloud base northwest" he answered simply.
Vannessa had heard of it it was the far side of known space for gods sake what drove this guy. "Do you need anything from your ship ?" she asked.
"No i have it all here" he indicated his carry bag.
"Thats it ?" she asked appalled at such poverty.
"There is little space for more he admitted but my disco she is a fine ship gifted to me and blessed by the bishop himself when I left the order".
"You were a priest ?" she asked.
"No only a novice I failed in my faith but the bishop thought that if I travelled the verse I might one day find my faith again".
Vannessa made her excuses and left Marcus to his apparrently luxurious qaurters. She had a strong suspicion the Bishop had thought young Marcus Bentone would indeed find god amongst the stars but not in the way that young man had thought he had meant god those damn Goners they were ruthless when they wanted to be.
Malcom seated vanessa at the table then nodded to the waiter to pour the wine. "You surprised me today Vanesa".
" How so ?" she asked sipping her wine
"I thought you had found an infiltrator we know the argon are spying on us hoping to glean our tech but you pulled a rabbit out of the hat. You found me an honest man thats the official report he added handing her a pad".
"You delayed the station placement to get this done ?"
"A small price to pay for security Vannessa but young Marcus is exactly who he says he is thats his whole life there.
He's had it tougher than most by a long shot. God I feel sorry for the kid his father died here in this sector defending us against the Khaak when the gate opened. His mother lost it and went to the goners but she died suicide by all accounts but the boy survived and then he got shafted by the noble goners when the widows pension stopped and they turned him loose. Vannessa this man is dangerous".
"How so?" she asked waiting for malcom to spring a trap on her.
"This kid has paid his tax in every sytem he has ever worked That disco he has parked has been thoroughly scanned by Atf he went through xenon space to get here. apparently he was working near lucky planets when he heard about our offer for settlers. And heres the kicker Vannessa that damn thing has no weapon's".
"Thats insane she breathed".
" No I've had him evaluated he's so sane it's painful He's an innocent Vannessa and I admire that I want you to keep tab's on him. If we can get more like him to settle here we have a chance a real chance to make an impact with this commonwealth of worlds and do it through economics and diplomacy not just by sending in the fleets".
"Okay I'll keep an eye on this young man for you Malcom but why the concern somethings got you rattled Malcom".
"Vannessa stay out of this there are things being discussed in the backrooms of the senate its better not to be aware of one word of caution though avoid your stepmother like the plague".
"If she's involved I can believe its not pretty ok I'll keep my nose out but let me know when to run okay".
"God willing it won't come to that Vannessa but be careful now lets enjoy our meal".
Time passed and as it did the influx of bogus settlers and tricksters fell away but she was statrtled when Marcus arrived at her desk. "How can I help you Marcus ?" she asked.
"The Station is complete he beamed pleased that she remebered hime by name, I have prepared the soil and it is reay but I cannot make it viable with my disco i just cannot cary enough Ecells to keep the lights and machinery running properly I was wondering if it might be possible to hire a transport ?".
"No thats wrong said Vanessa seeing the pain that caused him, wait she said seeing he was about to leave, I meant it is no good hiring a transport you will loose credits that way you need your own ship a small freighter that way you can transport the ecells yourself and save thousands of credits soon you will be self sufficient".
"Is this possible he asked I have enough funds left to buy ecells but even if I sell betty I could not afford a freighter".
Leave it to me Marcus she said I will see what can be done now you will have to wait on station this will take at leasty a day or two to arrange let me see yes your room is still available. I.ll contact you as soon a I Have matters in hand".
"You are most Kind Miss Brownton thank you".
Vannessa arranged the room then contacted Malcom she outlined the problem and Malcom saw the sense in the kid needing a freighter and as luck would have it there was one in salvage that was fixable, more than fixable he decided going on a gut interest in Mr Bentone.
"This is now my ship ?" asked Marcus incredulousley as they walked down the main deck through the cargo bay to the bridge.
"It will be once you have paid of the loan agreed malcom but yes she is yours, I have a surprise for you Betty Marcus is on board".
"Good afternoon Marcus cames Bettys voice over the com
. Betty where is Disco ?" asked Marcus suddenly alarmed.
"Disco is enroute home my sister is driving and I am monotoring".
" You have a sister now asked Marcus ?.
"Yes though we were once one we are now two I like this ship Marcus".
"Its a Gift From we Terrans for your work Marcus we need your wheat and helping you helps us. The ship is a standard version with few upgrades but you will be able to get your farm up and running much sooner than you had feared".
"This is beyond my wildest hopes Malcom I swear I will pay of this debt swiftly and You will have the best wheat in all known systems from my farm".
"I will leave you now then Marcus but remember we are but a call away if you need any help even advice".
"Thank you" said Marcus tears in his eyes as he gazed around him at the ship that would fulfill his dreams.
Unfortunately he could not depart till the next day so went back to the dock to collect his belongingd he would sleep on board his new Betty tonight.
As he left the ship he heard a commotion on the dark side of the dock turning to investigate he saw a group of youths attacking a man on the ground he rushed in with no thought for his own safety he scattered them but not before he felt a sickening pain in his back what happened next he had no knowledge of there were bodies on the ground and the man no the split who helped him to rest against a wall said "we should leave at once can you walk ?".
"I have a ship there "he pointed reaching for his access card.
"We go" said the split who although baddly battered about had not been stabbed with a laz blade. Chr'tt K'nnit half carried the young terran onto his ship and was questioned rather fiercely by the ships Ai until he explained the boy was wounded and that he needed access to the ships medical bay. Things got strange then even by Chr'tt,s standards the ship gave him access but then closed all ports and access ways except those that led to the rather basic med bay. Chrrt was older than he cared to admit even to his mother but he had learnt a thing or two and soon had the boys wound suchered and dressed.
for himself time would take care of his bruises and cuts as it always had it had been recklless of this terran to intervene but now Chrrt was obligated the boy had shed blood that was enough it was an old code but one chrrt at least would respect till his last breath.
"What is Marcus's condition ?" asked the the ship's AI.
"He will live but he will bear a scar to whom do I speak ?".
"I am Beth I am this ship".
"Greetings Beth I am Chrrt Knntt I am obligated to this young man how may I be of service".
"I understand comprehend the split ethical code I am allowing you access to crew qaurters".
"Thank you Beth will you inform the captain when he awakes that I am onboard.
"Betty what happened ?" asked Marcus sitting up in the med cot.
"You were attacked but a split Chrrt Kntt bought you aboard and treated your wounds My understanding is that he is obligated to you he will work with for you till one or both of you determine that obligation has been met".
"A split I remember something but no its gone betty we need energy cells get us to the spp in circle of labour you have the con".
" Understood I have control exiting dock in five four".
Marcus fell into sleep troubled by visions of a fire and of a failure to protect the one he loved tormented he dreamt harrowing dreams of fire and death.
The universe would return them to him or they would pay.
What has gone before:
Marcus dreamed of better days, days when by the sweat of his brow and with the love of a woman he had admired since the first time he had met her he had found at last peace and hope for the future.
Marcus blinked as the comm light flashed, opening the link "are you alright ?" he nearly shouted remembering in time that Vannessa his 'ness' did not like to hear him raise his voice.
"I'm fine Marcus just a quick call to let you know Chad has fixed the problem with the north solar panels. We still need what you managed to buy though".
"I'm glad about that I've got betty stuffed to the gills with them".
" What did you pay she asked quickly 12 creds a unit, you got the min thats wonderful news but I can top it, remember that bid for our organic wheat, we've got a confirmation and a sizable deposit".
A deposit Marcus almost choked no one paid deposits to farmers.
"Perhaps there's a shortage somewhere pondered Ness leastways we now have the funds to clear our debt with the finance guild.
Now I think we should celebrate a little continued Ness when will you be back?".
"Two days he sighed" wishing he had been able to upgrade betty before now especialy with Ness so far into her preganancy he hated leaving her even for a moment.
"Don't panic dearheart she whispered" meaning chad must be nearby in her office both "I and the baby are fine at least as far as I can judge by the amount of time he spends kicking me to let me know he's there. Now when you get back we will have a celebration even you have to have some off time Marcus so fly safe and I,ll see you soon I love you she said" smiling that smile that had almost stopped his heart the first time he had ever seen her and still had the same devastating effect on him.
"Beloved" he whispered as she closed the link.
"Betty he called aloud I'm going of shift you have the con".
I have control replied betty have a good rest Marcus I will wake you in 10 hours or sooner if necessary".
"Thank you betty" he replied heading into the tiny day cabin abaft the bridge, he made short work of a ration pack before turning in still picturing that devastating smile that made the goosebumps stand out on his flesh. That smile he slipped into sleep lured by that smile remebering the first time he had seen her at the information desk at that huge outpost in Heretics end where he had gone with all he posessed in the verse following rumours of finance and grants being offered to commonwealth citizens willing to settle in Terran border sectors.
"Can I help you ?" she had asked pleasently but obviousely noting his threadbare clothes.
"Yes ma'am if you please my name is Marcus Marcus Bentone I have heard that the Terran authorities are willing to asisst those who wish to make a new life for themselves in this and nearby sectors".
"We do indeed sir and there are many possible employment opportunities aavailable at this station and many others perhaps I could direct you to an employment agency".
"Oh that would be most kind but unnecessary I am not entirely without means I was wondering whom I should speak to about positioning my wheat farm. I do not wish to offend others who have similar ventures to offer".
"You own a Wheat farm ?"she aked incredulousely.
"Yes ma'am though it is still en route I hired a transporter you see and i thought it prudent to contact the Terran authorities to see where they would allow me to build my station and of course I would like to arrange accomodation if possible untill it arrives in system if iI may be honest the purchase of the wheat farm and the transport costs mean that I have a limited budget".
"Marcus said Vannessa intrigued by this rather threadbare looking young man please come with me".
"Claris she called take over for a moment".
The young Lady Vannessa Brownton Led Marcus deep into the center of the station and after comming an intercom led Marcus into a rather grand office the walls festooned with views of worlds beyond the commonwealth and of one that could only be Earth itself." Malcom I have a rather interesting young man to meet you he wants to make a new life for himself here with some asisstance from ourselves" she said motioning for Marcus to step into the office.
"That is what we are here to provide Malcom replied shaking Marcus's hand warmly taking his cue from Vannessa who had an eye for the unnusual. Now How can I help ?" he asked pouring a glass of minted water for Marcus who was astonished by its subtle flavour.
"Well sir began Marcus I have worked very hard all my life I have a dream sir to make a new life for myself and when I heard there were opportunities to do so here I bought myself and all that I have earnt to begin here with your permission of course".
"What sort of you life do you wish for ?" asked Malcom sipping at his own water.
"Well I have always wanted a farm sir so I have bought one and I was wondering where you would like me to place it that is if it woudl be allowed of course".
Malcom nearly choked on his drink for six months he had been tasked with weeding out the derelicts and con artists who thought they could bilk the empire for funds and now Vannessa had trumped him with an honest man, a man who didn't want funds to buy a station but only to ask permission to place it.
"The Station Transporter is now in system chimed in Vannessa perhaps now would be a good time to position it".
"Speed would be a blessing allowed Marcus I am paying for transport per diem hence my urgency".
" Vannessa will you contact the transport and inform the captain we will bear all insystem costs and arrange adeqaute lodgings for Mr Bentone. Marcus welcome to Heretics end know that we will alays be here to help good men like yourself".
"If you will come with me Marcus said" Vannessa winking at Malcom she led a slightly bewildered Marcus back to the outer levels.
"This is too grand" miss said Marcus looking at what vannessa considered barely tolerable accomadaqtion but that clearly Marcus saw as Luxurious.
"This is Basic accomadation on this station and dont worry Malcom has given you this room free of charge so that you can rest until your transport has finnished your station placement and please call me Vannessa".
she smiled warmly and for a moment Marcus thought his heart had stopped he could not breathe could not think and then she looked away .
"That is most kind he finaly replied is there a cafeteria I could use it has been an arduous Journey".
"Of course this is a station guide she said handing him the room pad just say what you want and it will direct you where did you travel from she asked out of curiosity?".
"Cloud base northwest" he answered simply.
Vannessa had heard of it it was the far side of known space for gods sake what drove this guy. "Do you need anything from your ship ?" she asked.
"No i have it all here" he indicated his carry bag.
"Thats it ?" she asked appalled at such poverty.
"There is little space for more he admitted but my disco she is a fine ship gifted to me and blessed by the bishop himself when I left the order".
"You were a priest ?" she asked.
"No only a novice I failed in my faith but the bishop thought that if I travelled the verse I might one day find my faith again".
Vannessa made her excuses and left Marcus to his apparrently luxurious qaurters. She had a strong suspicion the Bishop had thought young Marcus Bentone would indeed find god amongst the stars but not in the way that young man had thought he had meant god those damn Goners they were ruthless when they wanted to be.
Malcom seated vanessa at the table then nodded to the waiter to pour the wine. "You surprised me today Vanesa".
" How so ?" she asked sipping her wine
"I thought you had found an infiltrator we know the argon are spying on us hoping to glean our tech but you pulled a rabbit out of the hat. You found me an honest man thats the official report he added handing her a pad".
"You delayed the station placement to get this done ?"
"A small price to pay for security Vannessa but young Marcus is exactly who he says he is thats his whole life there.
He's had it tougher than most by a long shot. God I feel sorry for the kid his father died here in this sector defending us against the Khaak when the gate opened. His mother lost it and went to the goners but she died suicide by all accounts but the boy survived and then he got shafted by the noble goners when the widows pension stopped and they turned him loose. Vannessa this man is dangerous".
"How so?" she asked waiting for malcom to spring a trap on her.
"This kid has paid his tax in every sytem he has ever worked That disco he has parked has been thoroughly scanned by Atf he went through xenon space to get here. apparently he was working near lucky planets when he heard about our offer for settlers. And heres the kicker Vannessa that damn thing has no weapon's".
"Thats insane she breathed".
" No I've had him evaluated he's so sane it's painful He's an innocent Vannessa and I admire that I want you to keep tab's on him. If we can get more like him to settle here we have a chance a real chance to make an impact with this commonwealth of worlds and do it through economics and diplomacy not just by sending in the fleets".
"Okay I'll keep an eye on this young man for you Malcom but why the concern somethings got you rattled Malcom".
"Vannessa stay out of this there are things being discussed in the backrooms of the senate its better not to be aware of one word of caution though avoid your stepmother like the plague".
"If she's involved I can believe its not pretty ok I'll keep my nose out but let me know when to run okay".
"God willing it won't come to that Vannessa but be careful now lets enjoy our meal".
Time passed and as it did the influx of bogus settlers and tricksters fell away but she was statrtled when Marcus arrived at her desk. "How can I help you Marcus ?" she asked.
"The Station is complete he beamed pleased that she remebered hime by name, I have prepared the soil and it is reay but I cannot make it viable with my disco i just cannot cary enough Ecells to keep the lights and machinery running properly I was wondering if it might be possible to hire a transport ?".
"No thats wrong said Vanessa seeing the pain that caused him, wait she said seeing he was about to leave, I meant it is no good hiring a transport you will loose credits that way you need your own ship a small freighter that way you can transport the ecells yourself and save thousands of credits soon you will be self sufficient".
"Is this possible he asked I have enough funds left to buy ecells but even if I sell betty I could not afford a freighter".
Leave it to me Marcus she said I will see what can be done now you will have to wait on station this will take at leasty a day or two to arrange let me see yes your room is still available. I.ll contact you as soon a I Have matters in hand".
"You are most Kind Miss Brownton thank you".
Vannessa arranged the room then contacted Malcom she outlined the problem and Malcom saw the sense in the kid needing a freighter and as luck would have it there was one in salvage that was fixable, more than fixable he decided going on a gut interest in Mr Bentone.
"This is now my ship ?" asked Marcus incredulousley as they walked down the main deck through the cargo bay to the bridge.
"It will be once you have paid of the loan agreed malcom but yes she is yours, I have a surprise for you Betty Marcus is on board".
"Good afternoon Marcus cames Bettys voice over the com
. Betty where is Disco ?" asked Marcus suddenly alarmed.
"Disco is enroute home my sister is driving and I am monotoring".
" You have a sister now asked Marcus ?.
"Yes though we were once one we are now two I like this ship Marcus".
"Its a Gift From we Terrans for your work Marcus we need your wheat and helping you helps us. The ship is a standard version with few upgrades but you will be able to get your farm up and running much sooner than you had feared".
"This is beyond my wildest hopes Malcom I swear I will pay of this debt swiftly and You will have the best wheat in all known systems from my farm".
"I will leave you now then Marcus but remember we are but a call away if you need any help even advice".
"Thank you" said Marcus tears in his eyes as he gazed around him at the ship that would fulfill his dreams.
Unfortunately he could not depart till the next day so went back to the dock to collect his belongingd he would sleep on board his new Betty tonight.
As he left the ship he heard a commotion on the dark side of the dock turning to investigate he saw a group of youths attacking a man on the ground he rushed in with no thought for his own safety he scattered them but not before he felt a sickening pain in his back what happened next he had no knowledge of there were bodies on the ground and the man no the split who helped him to rest against a wall said "we should leave at once can you walk ?".
"I have a ship there "he pointed reaching for his access card.
"We go" said the split who although baddly battered about had not been stabbed with a laz blade. Chr'tt K'nnit half carried the young terran onto his ship and was questioned rather fiercely by the ships Ai until he explained the boy was wounded and that he needed access to the ships medical bay. Things got strange then even by Chr'tt,s standards the ship gave him access but then closed all ports and access ways except those that led to the rather basic med bay. Chrrt was older than he cared to admit even to his mother but he had learnt a thing or two and soon had the boys wound suchered and dressed.
for himself time would take care of his bruises and cuts as it always had it had been recklless of this terran to intervene but now Chrrt was obligated the boy had shed blood that was enough it was an old code but one chrrt at least would respect till his last breath.
"What is Marcus's condition ?" asked the the ship's AI.
"He will live but he will bear a scar to whom do I speak ?".
"I am Beth I am this ship".
"Greetings Beth I am Chrrt Knntt I am obligated to this young man how may I be of service".
"I understand comprehend the split ethical code I am allowing you access to crew qaurters".
"Thank you Beth will you inform the captain when he awakes that I am onboard.
"Betty what happened ?" asked Marcus sitting up in the med cot.
"You were attacked but a split Chrrt Kntt bought you aboard and treated your wounds My understanding is that he is obligated to you he will work with for you till one or both of you determine that obligation has been met".
"A split I remember something but no its gone betty we need energy cells get us to the spp in circle of labour you have the con".
" Understood I have control exiting dock in five four".
Marcus fell into sleep troubled by visions of a fire and of a failure to protect the one he loved tormented he dreamt harrowing dreams of fire and death.
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An Orphan of two worlds
Sorry if the first post is too long but Ive been itching to get started on this and once the muse hits me its hard to stop. I would welcome any and all criticism /advice my intent here is to establish Marcus in pre conflict terran zones and also not to rush into the main plot/story till it all meshs together. thanks all in advance for any comments.
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Hopefully it's not being too critical of technicalities, but having speech in quotes and maybe line breaks when someone different starts talking would really help with readability.
Story-wise it seems like a good start. Formatting though does a great deal, and you'll likely get more readers if it's not huge blocks of text. If that doesn't make sense let me know - it's late and I am tired.
Interested to see where this goes.
Story-wise it seems like a good start. Formatting though does a great deal, and you'll likely get more readers if it's not huge blocks of text. If that doesn't make sense let me know - it's late and I am tired.
Interested to see where this goes.
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This a DiD? Or just a story? And if it's a DiD, what game is it going to be?
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Sorry for the grammer I am going to go back over it and put in qoutes etc, I' afraid grammer has never been my strong point. as for the game this is AP not DID i have had problems with sudden lost save game ending whilst updating etc.
Rules however are implicit with did no salvage insurance no going back to last save before death etc. no mods no scripts
If I get wasted that is it.
As to where its going thats a biggie.
I am deep into AP but I cant elaborate or I will basicaly spoil the story.
This is A young Argon beset by tragedy who finds hope and by hard work makes a humble mark in the scheme of things. What follows I hope will intrigue you there are hints already. To recover his hope he must become more than he is and will his family accept the changes he must undergo assuming he ever finds them, to become that which he knows is wrong possibly evil
Lastly thank you for reading your comments are and will be continued to be appreciated as well as any advice you might offer.
Rules however are implicit with did no salvage insurance no going back to last save before death etc. no mods no scripts
If I get wasted that is it.
As to where its going thats a biggie.
I am deep into AP but I cant elaborate or I will basicaly spoil the story.
This is A young Argon beset by tragedy who finds hope and by hard work makes a humble mark in the scheme of things. What follows I hope will intrigue you there are hints already. To recover his hope he must become more than he is and will his family accept the changes he must undergo assuming he ever finds them, to become that which he knows is wrong possibly evil
Lastly thank you for reading your comments are and will be continued to be appreciated as well as any advice you might offer.
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Chapter Two:
"Marcus we are at The Solar power plant announced betty over the com they want you to personnaly request landing permission".
"Alright Betty I am on my way get me a com link up and have my account details ready".
Marcus walked unsteadily to his command chair still not used to the strange odours that had come with the ship, but ah well beggers can't be choosers he thought as he contacted the station dock manager and took his place in the landing queue.
The delay was irksome he had made promises and he needed to be on his farm not here but he needed the ecells.
"Marcus we have a Split Chrrtt in crew qaurters who wishes to enter the bridge to speak with you".
"Let him in Betty I think he may have saved my life last night".
Chrrtt Knntt entered the bridge and waved away Marcu's attempts to stand to greet him.
"We are already well met" said the split in surprisingly fluent common.
"Kratt chunt thank you I understand I owe you a debt".
Chrrt winced at the horror the Terran had made of his name "please call me Chad said Chrrtt, offering a name he had often used in the past, but we are both I think fortunate to be here this day, Know that I am obliged to you. I can help as crew I have much experience of space travel".
"I have some admitted Marcus but your help would be welcome".
Chrrt slid into the navigators chair and was all to soon totaly absorbed in the task he had set himself.
When they had finaly got some ecells at nearly 19 credits a unit marcus had betty head for home whilst he contemplated how he was going to survive till he had his first crop in. He left the bridge and went down to the gallley and reheated a militatary food pack Chad joined him later and also got a meal not commenting on such meagre fare but sat down opposite Marcus.
"You begin an adventure offered Chad",
"I do admitted Marcus I have a small wheat farm I've just set up but its only me I,m afraid with these ecells i can get my first crop in and provide some funds but I have set myself a task he admitted".
"You are young to choose to be a farmer said chad but in this I will help I have some expereience if you would allow".
"I would be grateful for any help you can give admitted marcus I am afraid my funds arew limited but I can give shelter and food for as long as you wish".
Chrrt was startled how did this terran know to offer sanctuary it was a sign he decided, only one blessed by the stars would offer such when he had nothing himself. "I am content he admitted and it would be prefferable to that trade station".
You did all this by yourself ?" asked Chad gazing at the crop fields waiting to be sown after they had docked the freighter and transhipped the Ecells.
"I had to admitted Marcus as I said I have funds for seeds and ecells but little else".
"You have no fertiliser noted chad looking at the unused chemical spray tanks".
"No I have organic, I mean bio".
"I understand said Chad you wish to specialise in an organic wheat not that which most would produce with machines and drones it is a worthy challenge I will asisst" he announced.
Over the next few months Chad was true to his word working alongside Marcus as they established their first crop at last the day arrived when Marcus hoped he would be able to recoup some of the capital he had spent,
With chad below Marcus asked betty to take them to the trading station with their precious cargo of wheat samples.
Marcus led the way to the Market board but deferred when Chad stepped ahead of him to have their wheat asessed.
"Low yield I'll give min plus 2 said the trader".
" You offend me said Chad dtawing himself upto his full height.
This is not the dust that others bring you this is the grain of your ancestors no chemical has touched this crop it is pure worthy of a loaf at the council of Rhonkar itself".
The agent scanned the grain. "Is it all like this he ?" asked the seemingly offended split farmer.
"It is I Chrrt Knntt swear it".
The Trader was no fool if a split said it was it was and he had a scource for such high qaulity grain though it would unlikely be used to make bread.
"Two above average he offered",
"I think eight would be the correct price" said Chad glaring at the agent.
The trader did the math it was good he would make a killing but he was not stupid grain this good came along once in a while.
"If I make it ten above would you give me first refusal on future deals ?"he asked tentatively.
"No for that the price would be twelve above stated Chad but it would be exclusive".
Twelve would take a slice out of it thought the trader but he sensed an opportunity he shut down his trade link. "Alright twelve if we agree to a personnal deal not through the office".
"This is acceptable said Chad but how much can you afford to buy we have a fine crop".
The agent realised this split had just called him, god I hope its a small farm he thought knowing a large one would bankrupt him.
"What just happened ?"asked Marcus as they sat down at the cafeteria table with something other than military prepacks.
"You have sold your crop" said chad enjoying for the first time in many months the flavour of a chelt steak.
Marcus Keyed his pad and his eyes bulged as he saw the numbers he was in credit except for the loan of course, but now he could plant more fields and make full use of his farm.
"Chad he asked would you be offended if I offered to buy you a drink".
"A split offended by such an offer has never occurred in all time laughed Chad"
"Alright Betty I am on my way get me a com link up and have my account details ready".
Marcus walked unsteadily to his command chair still not used to the strange odours that had come with the ship, but ah well beggers can't be choosers he thought as he contacted the station dock manager and took his place in the landing queue.
The delay was irksome he had made promises and he needed to be on his farm not here but he needed the ecells.
"Marcus we have a Split Chrrtt in crew qaurters who wishes to enter the bridge to speak with you".
"Let him in Betty I think he may have saved my life last night".
Chrrtt Knntt entered the bridge and waved away Marcu's attempts to stand to greet him.
"We are already well met" said the split in surprisingly fluent common.
"Kratt chunt thank you I understand I owe you a debt".
Chrrt winced at the horror the Terran had made of his name "please call me Chad said Chrrtt, offering a name he had often used in the past, but we are both I think fortunate to be here this day, Know that I am obliged to you. I can help as crew I have much experience of space travel".
"I have some admitted Marcus but your help would be welcome".
Chrrt slid into the navigators chair and was all to soon totaly absorbed in the task he had set himself.
When they had finaly got some ecells at nearly 19 credits a unit marcus had betty head for home whilst he contemplated how he was going to survive till he had his first crop in. He left the bridge and went down to the gallley and reheated a militatary food pack Chad joined him later and also got a meal not commenting on such meagre fare but sat down opposite Marcus.
"You begin an adventure offered Chad",
"I do admitted Marcus I have a small wheat farm I've just set up but its only me I,m afraid with these ecells i can get my first crop in and provide some funds but I have set myself a task he admitted".
"You are young to choose to be a farmer said chad but in this I will help I have some expereience if you would allow".
"I would be grateful for any help you can give admitted marcus I am afraid my funds arew limited but I can give shelter and food for as long as you wish".
Chrrt was startled how did this terran know to offer sanctuary it was a sign he decided, only one blessed by the stars would offer such when he had nothing himself. "I am content he admitted and it would be prefferable to that trade station".
You did all this by yourself ?" asked Chad gazing at the crop fields waiting to be sown after they had docked the freighter and transhipped the Ecells.
"I had to admitted Marcus as I said I have funds for seeds and ecells but little else".
"You have no fertiliser noted chad looking at the unused chemical spray tanks".
"No I have organic, I mean bio".
"I understand said Chad you wish to specialise in an organic wheat not that which most would produce with machines and drones it is a worthy challenge I will asisst" he announced.
Over the next few months Chad was true to his word working alongside Marcus as they established their first crop at last the day arrived when Marcus hoped he would be able to recoup some of the capital he had spent,
With chad below Marcus asked betty to take them to the trading station with their precious cargo of wheat samples.
Marcus led the way to the Market board but deferred when Chad stepped ahead of him to have their wheat asessed.
"Low yield I'll give min plus 2 said the trader".
" You offend me said Chad dtawing himself upto his full height.
This is not the dust that others bring you this is the grain of your ancestors no chemical has touched this crop it is pure worthy of a loaf at the council of Rhonkar itself".
The agent scanned the grain. "Is it all like this he ?" asked the seemingly offended split farmer.
"It is I Chrrt Knntt swear it".
The Trader was no fool if a split said it was it was and he had a scource for such high qaulity grain though it would unlikely be used to make bread.
"Two above average he offered",
"I think eight would be the correct price" said Chad glaring at the agent.
The trader did the math it was good he would make a killing but he was not stupid grain this good came along once in a while.
"If I make it ten above would you give me first refusal on future deals ?"he asked tentatively.
"No for that the price would be twelve above stated Chad but it would be exclusive".
Twelve would take a slice out of it thought the trader but he sensed an opportunity he shut down his trade link. "Alright twelve if we agree to a personnal deal not through the office".
"This is acceptable said Chad but how much can you afford to buy we have a fine crop".
The agent realised this split had just called him, god I hope its a small farm he thought knowing a large one would bankrupt him.
"What just happened ?"asked Marcus as they sat down at the cafeteria table with something other than military prepacks.
"You have sold your crop" said chad enjoying for the first time in many months the flavour of a chelt steak.
Marcus Keyed his pad and his eyes bulged as he saw the numbers he was in credit except for the loan of course, but now he could plant more fields and make full use of his farm.
"Chad he asked would you be offended if I offered to buy you a drink".
"A split offended by such an offer has never occurred in all time laughed Chad"
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Chapter 3: A New Life
Marcus Stood up and waved To the moniter to let Chad know that the blockage was cleared, a moment later the sprinklers burst into life drenching him in organic fertiliser. shards he cried in disgust moving out of range of the sprinklers to a water suplly line where he stripped of his fouled coveralls and turned the hose on himself.
"Is this your normal method of bathing ?" asked miss Brownton startling him.
Marcus blushed he had forgotten she had been scheduled to arrive for an inspection tour. "If you will excuse me Miss I will get some clean clothes, would you meet me at the station office".
Vannessa smiled as Marcus practicaly ran back to the stations accomadation zone in nothing but his skivvies.
"You did that on purpose "he accused Chad as he pulled on fresh clothes having had a very quick shower.
"I did not think you would signal me to operate the sprinklers until you were clear of them replied Chad fighting hard not to laugh out loud. By the way The Terran woman is here again".
"I know we met said Marcus" tersely blushing furiousely again as he struggled to put on his boots.
Chad could no longer contain himself his peals of laughter filling the room, Marcus just glared at him as he left and went downstairs to meet miss Brownton who was now waiting for him in the station office.
"I'm sorry miss Brownton I lost all track of time and I'm sorry about earlier, I had to wash it of quickly and I didn't realise you were there".
"It is an unusual way to greet a visitor agreed Vanessa but given the odour I can see why you needed to shower it of. Now are we ready to review matters ?, I have of course studied the reports you've been sending in and it appears you have matters well in hand. Is there any way in which you think we can be of help ?".
"I have only one difficulty admitted Marcus not being granted access to the terran systems means we are limited in approaching potential customers except those who are prepared to travel to this system".
"It is difficult I know Marcus but until you have been granted access by the Council there is nothing we can do the ATF are paranoid about security as you have found and I must add not without cause, you could appoint me as your agent though she suggested I could establish an office for you in the asteroid belt supply base which is where you would get most interest from Terran buyers".
"Would that be expensive asked Marcus ?".
"Well you would have to hire some staff but the cost would be small considering the potentiel gains to be had, and it would also move you one step closer to gaining access to Terran space yourself.
Look she said giving him her data pad these are the projected costings".
Marcus studied the figures it was not a huge sum but Marcus was hesitant to gamble with his hard earned credits, the potentiel rewards were undeniable with access to terran space he would be able to direct most of his sales to them rather than through the agent here at Heretics end who was no doubt making money of his efforts.
"Look why not take some time to think it over and let me know what you decide she suggested".
Marcus nodded agreement and they spent the remainder of the day going over the numbers.
"I am remiss admitted Marcus you have been here all day and I have not offered you refreshment would you care to join us for our evening meal ?".
"As long as its not an MRE ration" she replied smiling to take the sting out of her reference to his once preffered fare.
"No Chad is cooking Today he admitted".
"Lets eat then she suggested we can finnish our discussions over our meal".
Chad greeted Vannessa warmly as they entered the small dining room that were part of their living qaurters.
The meal was anything but an Mre pack Chad was delighted as she complimented him on the meal he had prepared.
"I have many skills" Chad allowed gruffly pleased at the implied compliment, when all had finished eating Chad cleared the Table and they all moved into the lounge with a light beer to discuss what wiould be the next thing to consider.
"You are doing well Marcus Vannessa concluded but you could do so much better with more people to help you.
I mean consider what just the two of you have achieved here alone, it is incredible but you can't keep up at this pace Marcus no one can and if you want to keep increasing your output you need more workers.
You have a whole station here Marcus with more than enough room to support a community".
"I could not afford to pay that many Marcus replied even paying the harvesters we use when thje crops are ready is a heavy burden to us".
"Thats the point Marcus Vannessa said you wouldn't have to pay them not in credits give them a share in the crops. There are people out there who would leap at such a chance".
"Vannessa is right said Chad people will work for a share and for a home we would have to fend of the huge number who would wish to partake in such a venture as this".
"Also added Vannessa you wouldn't have to spend every waking moment breaking your back in the fields, it would give you more time to deal with your customers as a station manager should".
"
Listen to her Marcus she is wise in this advised Chad we are at a ponit where alone we can achieve no more but with workers with a stake in the future our future it would give you many more options".
"There is a bonus Marcus Vannessa pointed out if we recruit primarily Terran families Sol itself will pay many of the innitial costs with medical staff teachers and the like as well as underwriting communal grants for facilities I can arrange that if you want".
"Sol would pay me?" asked Marcus stunned by the possibilities.
"Not directly no you would have to absorb some of the cost but given the potentiel rewards they would be minimal".
"What do you think ?"he asked Chad.
"It is your station Marcus but I would advise listening this young lady has a good vision and it would be a good thing to have people here".
"Alright Vannessa he decided if you can set things in motion We'll give it a try I will need some help though I can barely manage to keep track of things as they are".
"Leave the details to me Marcus she offered".
Vanessa was as good as her word, within a month a Terran admin staff commandeered a suite of unused station offices and began making the station ready for the anticipated arrivals a clinic was established as well as a school and a large communal dining hall and recreation centers for all ages.
Then there were the houses as Vanessa called them dwellings for the workers . Marcus had thought that all would live in the station core but had been given a swift lecture on that by Vanessa.
"These peoiple will work for a home Marcus not a room in an accomadation block" had been her terse video reply to his questioning the building of these dwellings in his crop fields.
A month later and suitably dressed Marcus was at the docking port greeting the new arrivals. All this was monitered by a large number of the sytems media who were broadcasting the official opening of the new station in Heretics end as well as dignitaries from the Terran station
"You have done well said malcom shaking Marcus by the hand".
"Thank you sir he replied feeling nervous at the sheer number of people nearby.
"Now for the hard part you have to make them feel welcome said Vanessa" taking his hand and leading him to the Large hall where the new arrivals were being seated at the dining tables waiting to meet him.
Marcus walked to the edge of the Podium all to aware of the media cameras trained on him for a moment he thought he might faint he was so nervous.
The noise level dropped as people noted him and waited to hear what this man would say and consider how it would shape their future.
"Welcome to wheat farm beta said Marcus Thats our official designation by the way, Me I prefer to call it home.
Many of you have traveled great distances to be here and for that I thank you tommorrow we will begin a new life but for today please take your ease. if any of you need help or advice please ask a member of the base staff. You have all been assigned dwellings and rescources are available transports pods and the like but there is no rush if you prefer to wait until tommorrow to move in that is fine we have ample accomadation here at the hub I want all of you to relax take your time to settle in. We are between Harvests right now so we have time to get to know one another. for the moment please enjoy your meal".
There was a smattering then a crescendo of applause as Marcus stepped down from the stage and joined Chad and Vannessa at their table.
"Well said Marcus allowed Chad giving him a glass of light ale that is what they needed reassurance".
"There are so many of them admitted Marcus I'm not good with crowds".
"You did fine Marcus you hit just the right note of welcome and reassurance Vanessa said looking out over the crowded dining room where the noise of conversation was slowly building. Its a very good start she said".
Marcus Stood up and waved To the moniter to let Chad know that the blockage was cleared, a moment later the sprinklers burst into life drenching him in organic fertiliser. shards he cried in disgust moving out of range of the sprinklers to a water suplly line where he stripped of his fouled coveralls and turned the hose on himself.
"Is this your normal method of bathing ?" asked miss Brownton startling him.
Marcus blushed he had forgotten she had been scheduled to arrive for an inspection tour. "If you will excuse me Miss I will get some clean clothes, would you meet me at the station office".
Vannessa smiled as Marcus practicaly ran back to the stations accomadation zone in nothing but his skivvies.
"You did that on purpose "he accused Chad as he pulled on fresh clothes having had a very quick shower.
"I did not think you would signal me to operate the sprinklers until you were clear of them replied Chad fighting hard not to laugh out loud. By the way The Terran woman is here again".
"I know we met said Marcus" tersely blushing furiousely again as he struggled to put on his boots.
Chad could no longer contain himself his peals of laughter filling the room, Marcus just glared at him as he left and went downstairs to meet miss Brownton who was now waiting for him in the station office.
"I'm sorry miss Brownton I lost all track of time and I'm sorry about earlier, I had to wash it of quickly and I didn't realise you were there".
"It is an unusual way to greet a visitor agreed Vanessa but given the odour I can see why you needed to shower it of. Now are we ready to review matters ?, I have of course studied the reports you've been sending in and it appears you have matters well in hand. Is there any way in which you think we can be of help ?".
"I have only one difficulty admitted Marcus not being granted access to the terran systems means we are limited in approaching potential customers except those who are prepared to travel to this system".
"It is difficult I know Marcus but until you have been granted access by the Council there is nothing we can do the ATF are paranoid about security as you have found and I must add not without cause, you could appoint me as your agent though she suggested I could establish an office for you in the asteroid belt supply base which is where you would get most interest from Terran buyers".
"Would that be expensive asked Marcus ?".
"Well you would have to hire some staff but the cost would be small considering the potentiel gains to be had, and it would also move you one step closer to gaining access to Terran space yourself.
Look she said giving him her data pad these are the projected costings".
Marcus studied the figures it was not a huge sum but Marcus was hesitant to gamble with his hard earned credits, the potentiel rewards were undeniable with access to terran space he would be able to direct most of his sales to them rather than through the agent here at Heretics end who was no doubt making money of his efforts.
"Look why not take some time to think it over and let me know what you decide she suggested".
Marcus nodded agreement and they spent the remainder of the day going over the numbers.
"I am remiss admitted Marcus you have been here all day and I have not offered you refreshment would you care to join us for our evening meal ?".
"As long as its not an MRE ration" she replied smiling to take the sting out of her reference to his once preffered fare.
"No Chad is cooking Today he admitted".
"Lets eat then she suggested we can finnish our discussions over our meal".
Chad greeted Vannessa warmly as they entered the small dining room that were part of their living qaurters.
The meal was anything but an Mre pack Chad was delighted as she complimented him on the meal he had prepared.
"I have many skills" Chad allowed gruffly pleased at the implied compliment, when all had finished eating Chad cleared the Table and they all moved into the lounge with a light beer to discuss what wiould be the next thing to consider.
"You are doing well Marcus Vannessa concluded but you could do so much better with more people to help you.
I mean consider what just the two of you have achieved here alone, it is incredible but you can't keep up at this pace Marcus no one can and if you want to keep increasing your output you need more workers.
You have a whole station here Marcus with more than enough room to support a community".
"I could not afford to pay that many Marcus replied even paying the harvesters we use when thje crops are ready is a heavy burden to us".
"Thats the point Marcus Vannessa said you wouldn't have to pay them not in credits give them a share in the crops. There are people out there who would leap at such a chance".
"Vannessa is right said Chad people will work for a share and for a home we would have to fend of the huge number who would wish to partake in such a venture as this".
"Also added Vannessa you wouldn't have to spend every waking moment breaking your back in the fields, it would give you more time to deal with your customers as a station manager should".
"
Listen to her Marcus she is wise in this advised Chad we are at a ponit where alone we can achieve no more but with workers with a stake in the future our future it would give you many more options".
"There is a bonus Marcus Vannessa pointed out if we recruit primarily Terran families Sol itself will pay many of the innitial costs with medical staff teachers and the like as well as underwriting communal grants for facilities I can arrange that if you want".
"Sol would pay me?" asked Marcus stunned by the possibilities.
"Not directly no you would have to absorb some of the cost but given the potentiel rewards they would be minimal".
"What do you think ?"he asked Chad.
"It is your station Marcus but I would advise listening this young lady has a good vision and it would be a good thing to have people here".
"Alright Vannessa he decided if you can set things in motion We'll give it a try I will need some help though I can barely manage to keep track of things as they are".
"Leave the details to me Marcus she offered".
Vanessa was as good as her word, within a month a Terran admin staff commandeered a suite of unused station offices and began making the station ready for the anticipated arrivals a clinic was established as well as a school and a large communal dining hall and recreation centers for all ages.
Then there were the houses as Vanessa called them dwellings for the workers . Marcus had thought that all would live in the station core but had been given a swift lecture on that by Vanessa.
"These peoiple will work for a home Marcus not a room in an accomadation block" had been her terse video reply to his questioning the building of these dwellings in his crop fields.
A month later and suitably dressed Marcus was at the docking port greeting the new arrivals. All this was monitered by a large number of the sytems media who were broadcasting the official opening of the new station in Heretics end as well as dignitaries from the Terran station
"You have done well said malcom shaking Marcus by the hand".
"Thank you sir he replied feeling nervous at the sheer number of people nearby.
"Now for the hard part you have to make them feel welcome said Vanessa" taking his hand and leading him to the Large hall where the new arrivals were being seated at the dining tables waiting to meet him.
Marcus walked to the edge of the Podium all to aware of the media cameras trained on him for a moment he thought he might faint he was so nervous.
The noise level dropped as people noted him and waited to hear what this man would say and consider how it would shape their future.
"Welcome to wheat farm beta said Marcus Thats our official designation by the way, Me I prefer to call it home.
Many of you have traveled great distances to be here and for that I thank you tommorrow we will begin a new life but for today please take your ease. if any of you need help or advice please ask a member of the base staff. You have all been assigned dwellings and rescources are available transports pods and the like but there is no rush if you prefer to wait until tommorrow to move in that is fine we have ample accomadation here at the hub I want all of you to relax take your time to settle in. We are between Harvests right now so we have time to get to know one another. for the moment please enjoy your meal".
There was a smattering then a crescendo of applause as Marcus stepped down from the stage and joined Chad and Vannessa at their table.
"Well said Marcus allowed Chad giving him a glass of light ale that is what they needed reassurance".
"There are so many of them admitted Marcus I'm not good with crowds".
"You did fine Marcus you hit just the right note of welcome and reassurance Vanessa said looking out over the crowded dining room where the noise of conversation was slowly building. Its a very good start she said".
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Chapter 4: Home
Marcus looked out over the wheat fields it would soon be harvest time and all his and his peoples efforts would finaly be rewarded he had already confirmed the sale of this crop and that would enable him to improve the stations facilities for the workers.
He had been astonished at how well things had gone Vannessa and Chad had been right about the people they had made the station seem more like a home.
They had worked as hard as he had to bring this crop in and he wanted to reward their efforts.
The problem lay in how best to do that he hoped Vannessa might have some suggestions, Vannessa was also a scource of concern to him she had worked tirelessly to implement the changes here at the station but of late she had seemed distant, perhaps she thought she had completed her task here she worked for the Terran delgatation after all and there was a limit on what he could expect of her. Even so he had asked her to arrange a meeting with the families to help him decide what facilities or improvements they wanted. which reminded him he would be late if he didn't get to the council room quickly.
"Thank you for coming I know how busy you all are so lets get started he said moving to the head of the table, first there have been requests to improve or provide additional facilities for the community and I am pleased to report that funds are now available the question is in selecting which to implement, thats down to you you know what you need and want so lets discuss them".
"When you say funds are available do you mean station or general funds ?" asked Timmon.
"Station funds he replied credits set aside for the community are their responsibility Vannessa you arranged that can you elaborate for me".
"Very well Vannessa standing up to address the councillors as you know we have established a credit system for the puchase of goods on station each family recieves a percentage of the stations proffits which is added to their credit balance those station credits are matched by actual Terran or Commonwealth credits set aside for that purpose from station funds once allocated they are deducted from the stations cash reserves in effect those credits are yours to use here or of station as you choose.
The funds to update or improve station facilities will be drawn from the stations account not yours". It also means that if you go off station you have currency that is yours alone to do so.
"So what you are saying Marcus is that you are actualy paying for these facilities" said Timmins.
"Essentialy yes agreed Marcus so lets discuss what we can afford and which you wish to implement first".
Marcus waited till it seemed a consensus had been reached both on improvemnents to be started at once and a wish list for next time. The meeting broke up with the workers going back to their homes.
"That went well said Vannessa but you do realise you have just pledged a large amount of credits to them and with the promise of more to come".
"Chad suggested it he admitted ruefully, he told me to consider it an invesment in the future and to be honest they have worked hard so some form of reward seemed to be justified".
"Well its your money Marcus and investing in your workers whilst unnusal is a sound idea that Chad is one smart split.
Where is he by the way I thought he would be here ?".
"Personnal business he went to the trade station I didn't think it wise to ask what it was about" he admitted recalling Chads terse request to borrow the disco.
"See you are learning how to deal with people some of them at least she added" giving him that look again.
"Vannesa He asked fearing her answer have I given offence ? I mean I appreciate all the work you have done here without your help and support I would still be struggling to run this place by myself.
I am gratefull he added quickly".
"Its a shame you don't show it then she said the anger unmistakable in her tone of voice".
"I was right I have offended you please I appologise for whatever slight you feel I have offered you. How can I make ammends ? I cherish your advice and friendship".
"Just friends ? she asked glaring at him, do you think I would have invested this much time and effort into helping you just to be friends".
Marcus literaly felt the floor disappear from under his feet, she was going to leave he could sense it feared it more than anything he had ever feared in his life.
"Please he said his heart hammering in his chest his skin cold with fear don't go".
"Give me a reason not to" she said simply throwing it back at him.
"Because I Love you he said simply I always have".
"Finaly she said you do have feelings after all I was begining to think the goners had erradicated them from you".
"Not entirely he admitted ruefully but I was afraid you would spurn me I was afraid if I showed my feelings for you you would leave I couldn't bear that".
"Oh Marcus you are such a fool she said embracing him. I will stay on one condition".
"Anything he answered without thought".
"We are getting married" she announced and at that moment he did fall through the floor as he felt her lips on his.
Marcus looked out over the wheat fields it would soon be harvest time and all his and his peoples efforts would finaly be rewarded he had already confirmed the sale of this crop and that would enable him to improve the stations facilities for the workers.
He had been astonished at how well things had gone Vannessa and Chad had been right about the people they had made the station seem more like a home.
They had worked as hard as he had to bring this crop in and he wanted to reward their efforts.
The problem lay in how best to do that he hoped Vannessa might have some suggestions, Vannessa was also a scource of concern to him she had worked tirelessly to implement the changes here at the station but of late she had seemed distant, perhaps she thought she had completed her task here she worked for the Terran delgatation after all and there was a limit on what he could expect of her. Even so he had asked her to arrange a meeting with the families to help him decide what facilities or improvements they wanted. which reminded him he would be late if he didn't get to the council room quickly.
"Thank you for coming I know how busy you all are so lets get started he said moving to the head of the table, first there have been requests to improve or provide additional facilities for the community and I am pleased to report that funds are now available the question is in selecting which to implement, thats down to you you know what you need and want so lets discuss them".
"When you say funds are available do you mean station or general funds ?" asked Timmon.
"Station funds he replied credits set aside for the community are their responsibility Vannessa you arranged that can you elaborate for me".
"Very well Vannessa standing up to address the councillors as you know we have established a credit system for the puchase of goods on station each family recieves a percentage of the stations proffits which is added to their credit balance those station credits are matched by actual Terran or Commonwealth credits set aside for that purpose from station funds once allocated they are deducted from the stations cash reserves in effect those credits are yours to use here or of station as you choose.
The funds to update or improve station facilities will be drawn from the stations account not yours". It also means that if you go off station you have currency that is yours alone to do so.
"So what you are saying Marcus is that you are actualy paying for these facilities" said Timmins.
"Essentialy yes agreed Marcus so lets discuss what we can afford and which you wish to implement first".
Marcus waited till it seemed a consensus had been reached both on improvemnents to be started at once and a wish list for next time. The meeting broke up with the workers going back to their homes.
"That went well said Vannessa but you do realise you have just pledged a large amount of credits to them and with the promise of more to come".
"Chad suggested it he admitted ruefully, he told me to consider it an invesment in the future and to be honest they have worked hard so some form of reward seemed to be justified".
"Well its your money Marcus and investing in your workers whilst unnusal is a sound idea that Chad is one smart split.
Where is he by the way I thought he would be here ?".
"Personnal business he went to the trade station I didn't think it wise to ask what it was about" he admitted recalling Chads terse request to borrow the disco.
"See you are learning how to deal with people some of them at least she added" giving him that look again.
"Vannesa He asked fearing her answer have I given offence ? I mean I appreciate all the work you have done here without your help and support I would still be struggling to run this place by myself.
I am gratefull he added quickly".
"Its a shame you don't show it then she said the anger unmistakable in her tone of voice".
"I was right I have offended you please I appologise for whatever slight you feel I have offered you. How can I make ammends ? I cherish your advice and friendship".
"Just friends ? she asked glaring at him, do you think I would have invested this much time and effort into helping you just to be friends".
Marcus literaly felt the floor disappear from under his feet, she was going to leave he could sense it feared it more than anything he had ever feared in his life.
"Please he said his heart hammering in his chest his skin cold with fear don't go".
"Give me a reason not to" she said simply throwing it back at him.
"Because I Love you he said simply I always have".
"Finaly she said you do have feelings after all I was begining to think the goners had erradicated them from you".
"Not entirely he admitted ruefully but I was afraid you would spurn me I was afraid if I showed my feelings for you you would leave I couldn't bear that".
"Oh Marcus you are such a fool she said embracing him. I will stay on one condition".
"Anything he answered without thought".
"We are getting married" she announced and at that moment he did fall through the floor as he felt her lips on his.
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Chapter 5: A stranger in the dark
Marcus cleared the moorings quickly every second was vital not just because of the cargo of ecells he had bought that the station desperately needed but because every moment he was away from vannessa tore at him especialy now with her being so far into her preganancy.
"Betty he called on the ships Ai please set the fastest possible route home I need to rest".
"I have control announced betty course laid in and locked eta is 72 hrs".
Three days Marcus berated himself for not having had betty upgraded three days he groaned aloud as he settled into the cot in the cabin just aft of the bridge.
Marcus had an uneasy sleep his dreams were of fire and of a woman screaming and he was helpless to intervene or to help, then he was fighting there was blood and the wailing of alarms.
Marcus awoke to the sound of the emergency klaxon.
Rushing from his cot he ran to the bridge fearing what he might find awaiting him."Betty silence the alarm whats wrong ?".
"I detected a distress signal I have altered course to intercept as per standing orders regarding such intercepted distress signals".
"Understood why the alarms you nearly scared me to death ?".
"My appologies Marcus In order to acquire rendezvous with the scouce of the signal it was necessary to alter course and speed significantly to achieve this without causing you injury it was necessary to place you in a stasis field, Acceleration is now within limits you are able to withstand.
Contact with signal scource will be achieved in seven hours".
"Just how long was I in stasis he asked ?".
"Six days fourteen hours Marcus" Betty replied.
A week he had been in stasis for a week.
"Get me a com link to home" he demanded knowing that Vanessa would be worried out of her mind.
"Comm link established be aware there will be a time delay of three hours for a response to be innitiated".
Three hours that was absurd he thought, then reality made him feel cold.
"Betty display our position please".
They were in Heretics end at least but so far above the range of the ecliptic that he was almost out of the system.
"Com link active announced Betty".
"Vannessa this is Marcus as you know by now I have been delayed I will get home as soon as I can but Betty recieved a distress signal and its pretty far out to put it mildly I will be home as soon as I can I love you Marcus out.
Betty keep that com link open".
"Understood Marcus ssaid Betty".
Marcus watched the scanners as they neared the source of the distress signal even this close it was clear it had been out here a while its signal was failing rapidly which in an escape pod was not good news the signal would use the last reserves of power to keep going meaning the occupants of the pod would probably already be dead.
"Incomming Transmission" said betty powering up the monitor to his right.
"Marcus thank god You're safe said Vannessa we've been so worried Chad is en-route to you he leapt into the disco as soon as we got a fix on your position, my god Marcus you're so far away but you are doing the right thing the ecells can wait, rescue whoevers on that pod or at least bring them home so that we can contact their next of kin dont' leave them out there in the dark Marcus no one should be left alone out there.
I love you she said you make me proud".
The link ended as Betty began final manouvering on the escape pod.
"Marcus you will need to go eva Betty advised".
"On my way Betty" he said running to the airlock.
He suited up quickly and grabbed his emergency bag from the shelf before climbing into the thruster pack and heading out into the dark.
"Lights on the pod please" he asked betty not seeing it at first even its marker lights had failed which did not bode well for the occupants.
Steeling himself to expect the worst he moved to the pods acces panel and plugged in his emergancy power and atmopsphere packs.
It took a while for him to open the outer hatch the power cells were that low but at last he gained entry to find a single occupant within.
Marcus levered the suited figure out of the pod's airlock and across to Betty's open catgo lock.
"Betty cut the g field on board this guys a big one".
"Gravity field deactivated" betty confirmed over the com.
Marcus closed the hatch and waited for the pressure to be restored before cracking his helmet.
With some trepidation he cracked the seals on the pod occupants suit then stood back at the stench of foul air it vented.
Almost immediatly the split for that was what it was gasped in the fresh air almost chioking as he vomitted out the poisens that must have been in his lungs.
"Relax draw shallow breaths Marcus said I'm here to help". Carefully he manouvered the split into the cramped med bay before asking betty to reinstate the grav field.
It wasn't pleasent getting the split out of the spacesuit he had donned knowing it was his last resort as the pod systems had begun to fail and he had been in it far longer than it had been designed to maintain life.
Marcus bathed him as best he could and following Bettys prompts from the medical database had inserted catheters for saline and protein drips to counteract his advanced dehydration.
When he was satisfied that he had done all that he could he ordered Betty to set a course for home.
Marcus cleared the moorings quickly every second was vital not just because of the cargo of ecells he had bought that the station desperately needed but because every moment he was away from vannessa tore at him especialy now with her being so far into her preganancy.
"Betty he called on the ships Ai please set the fastest possible route home I need to rest".
"I have control announced betty course laid in and locked eta is 72 hrs".
Three days Marcus berated himself for not having had betty upgraded three days he groaned aloud as he settled into the cot in the cabin just aft of the bridge.
Marcus had an uneasy sleep his dreams were of fire and of a woman screaming and he was helpless to intervene or to help, then he was fighting there was blood and the wailing of alarms.
Marcus awoke to the sound of the emergency klaxon.
Rushing from his cot he ran to the bridge fearing what he might find awaiting him."Betty silence the alarm whats wrong ?".
"I detected a distress signal I have altered course to intercept as per standing orders regarding such intercepted distress signals".
"Understood why the alarms you nearly scared me to death ?".
"My appologies Marcus In order to acquire rendezvous with the scouce of the signal it was necessary to alter course and speed significantly to achieve this without causing you injury it was necessary to place you in a stasis field, Acceleration is now within limits you are able to withstand.
Contact with signal scource will be achieved in seven hours".
"Just how long was I in stasis he asked ?".
"Six days fourteen hours Marcus" Betty replied.
A week he had been in stasis for a week.
"Get me a com link to home" he demanded knowing that Vanessa would be worried out of her mind.
"Comm link established be aware there will be a time delay of three hours for a response to be innitiated".
Three hours that was absurd he thought, then reality made him feel cold.
"Betty display our position please".
They were in Heretics end at least but so far above the range of the ecliptic that he was almost out of the system.
"Com link active announced Betty".
"Vannessa this is Marcus as you know by now I have been delayed I will get home as soon as I can but Betty recieved a distress signal and its pretty far out to put it mildly I will be home as soon as I can I love you Marcus out.
Betty keep that com link open".
"Understood Marcus ssaid Betty".
Marcus watched the scanners as they neared the source of the distress signal even this close it was clear it had been out here a while its signal was failing rapidly which in an escape pod was not good news the signal would use the last reserves of power to keep going meaning the occupants of the pod would probably already be dead.
"Incomming Transmission" said betty powering up the monitor to his right.
"Marcus thank god You're safe said Vannessa we've been so worried Chad is en-route to you he leapt into the disco as soon as we got a fix on your position, my god Marcus you're so far away but you are doing the right thing the ecells can wait, rescue whoevers on that pod or at least bring them home so that we can contact their next of kin dont' leave them out there in the dark Marcus no one should be left alone out there.
I love you she said you make me proud".
The link ended as Betty began final manouvering on the escape pod.
"Marcus you will need to go eva Betty advised".
"On my way Betty" he said running to the airlock.
He suited up quickly and grabbed his emergency bag from the shelf before climbing into the thruster pack and heading out into the dark.
"Lights on the pod please" he asked betty not seeing it at first even its marker lights had failed which did not bode well for the occupants.
Steeling himself to expect the worst he moved to the pods acces panel and plugged in his emergancy power and atmopsphere packs.
It took a while for him to open the outer hatch the power cells were that low but at last he gained entry to find a single occupant within.
Marcus levered the suited figure out of the pod's airlock and across to Betty's open catgo lock.
"Betty cut the g field on board this guys a big one".
"Gravity field deactivated" betty confirmed over the com.
Marcus closed the hatch and waited for the pressure to be restored before cracking his helmet.
With some trepidation he cracked the seals on the pod occupants suit then stood back at the stench of foul air it vented.
Almost immediatly the split for that was what it was gasped in the fresh air almost chioking as he vomitted out the poisens that must have been in his lungs.
"Relax draw shallow breaths Marcus said I'm here to help". Carefully he manouvered the split into the cramped med bay before asking betty to reinstate the grav field.
It wasn't pleasent getting the split out of the spacesuit he had donned knowing it was his last resort as the pod systems had begun to fail and he had been in it far longer than it had been designed to maintain life.
Marcus bathed him as best he could and following Bettys prompts from the medical database had inserted catheters for saline and protein drips to counteract his advanced dehydration.
When he was satisfied that he had done all that he could he ordered Betty to set a course for home.
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Chapter 5: Home coming.
Marcus headed back to the bridge satisfied that for the moment he had done all that he could for the survivor in the med bay.
"Betty open the com link".
"Link open" Betty replied:
"Vannessa hi its me Just to let you know I'm on my way home mission accomplished I'l fill you in on the deatils later but for the moment I'm exhausted I'l grab a quick nap then I.l com you again Marcus out".
Marcus hated sending such a short message but he was literaly out on his feet he climbed into his cot and was asleep almost as soon as his head touched the pillow.
It was three days later that he slowed to a stop to allow Chad to come on board.
"You will take the Disco and return home Marcus Chad ordered I will take care of the survivor and bring the ship home.
Your wife feared you lost when you failed to contact her for so long she will not be happy until you are home so stop arguing it is what you want to do so do it".
"Thank you Chad Marcus" commed as he set the disco on a max speed course for home.
Chad watched the ship vanish into the distance then went down to confront his guest.
"You can stop feigning sleep now the terran is gone".
Vgntt opened his eyes, "I thought you were dead old man the bounty my lord placed on your head should have assured him of that at least".
"Those he sent after me were good but not that good and he knew why I left his service".
"You and that old code of yours. She was already dead Chrrt".
"It was a matter of honour I slew those who killed her and those who ordered it done".
"So now I am your prisoner asked Vgnntt".
"No replied Chrrt the terran who rescued you is a friend in this I am bound to his decisions, he is not aware of who or what you are.
Now do you want to continue lying with those tubes sticking into you or would you like some real food ?".
Marcus headed back to the bridge satisfied that for the moment he had done all that he could for the survivor in the med bay.
"Betty open the com link".
"Link open" Betty replied:
"Vannessa hi its me Just to let you know I'm on my way home mission accomplished I'l fill you in on the deatils later but for the moment I'm exhausted I'l grab a quick nap then I.l com you again Marcus out".
Marcus hated sending such a short message but he was literaly out on his feet he climbed into his cot and was asleep almost as soon as his head touched the pillow.
It was three days later that he slowed to a stop to allow Chad to come on board.
"You will take the Disco and return home Marcus Chad ordered I will take care of the survivor and bring the ship home.
Your wife feared you lost when you failed to contact her for so long she will not be happy until you are home so stop arguing it is what you want to do so do it".
"Thank you Chad Marcus" commed as he set the disco on a max speed course for home.
Chad watched the ship vanish into the distance then went down to confront his guest.
"You can stop feigning sleep now the terran is gone".
Vgntt opened his eyes, "I thought you were dead old man the bounty my lord placed on your head should have assured him of that at least".
"Those he sent after me were good but not that good and he knew why I left his service".
"You and that old code of yours. She was already dead Chrrt".
"It was a matter of honour I slew those who killed her and those who ordered it done".
"So now I am your prisoner asked Vgnntt".
"No replied Chrrt the terran who rescued you is a friend in this I am bound to his decisions, he is not aware of who or what you are.
Now do you want to continue lying with those tubes sticking into you or would you like some real food ?".
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Chapter 6: A hazardous guest.
Marcus was prersent when Chad finaly bought Betty home Vannessa at his side as she always seemed to be this days, not that he minded.
His workers were busy swinging the cargo modules of the ramps into the stations warehouses.
"Better late than neve"r said Marcus knowing that the station energy reserves were almost gone.
"We have two freighters en route to us said Vannessa when you vanished I ordered them just in case. I had to pay top price but".
"You don't have to explain Ness he interrupted at least it means we'l have some time before we have to send betty out again she will need a good maintenance check after this".
There's Chad she said pointing him out and that must be the survivor".
Marcus strode onto the access ramp and shook hands warmly with his friend relieved to have him back.
"This is Vgnntt Chad said as he introduced the split Marcus had rescued from the escape pod, by chance he is known to me".
"Any friend of yours is always welcome Chad said Marcus come we have a meal waiting and facilities for your freind to refresh himself".
Vgntt looked at Marcus as if puzzled then formaly bowed to him. "Know that I am indebted to you" he announced in heavily accented common.
Marcus acknowledged the Splits words but was puzzled by Chads silence there was something of import to Chad involved here but no doubt he would know soon enough what that was.
"How is your friend ?" asked Vannessa as they relaxed that evening in their home.
"He is well Vannessa but needs rest he is still very weak from his ordeal".
"As long as he knows he is safe now that is the main thing she agreed god it must have been terrible for him what he went through I mean".
"He as fortunate that Marcus arrived when he did Chad agreed even a few moments longer and he would not have survived".
"Does he want us to contact anyone to let them know he is safe ?" asked Marcus.
"That would be unwise said Chad He is highborn a man of some rank, those who attacked him finding he has survived their assault would return.
It would be best if we did not announce his prescence here".
"How awful for him said Vannessa tell your friend he can stay as long as he needs to".
"I will Chad assured them now I will bid you good night the hour is late and you also need your rest my lady".
Vannessa blushed furiously at Chads words "goodnight then" she replied sleep well.
It was a week later when Marcus recieved an urgent call to the docking office.
"Whats going on he asked ?".
"Sir We have a flotilla of ships demanding access to the docking ports" replied the watch manager.
Marcus scanned the sensors "Get Chad up here he ordered now".
The ships wanting to dock were not freighters they were fighters lots of them and a battleship he noted was waiting just at the edge of sensor range.
"Open a com link" ordered Chad as he strode into the control center.
"Link is up" said the dock manger. Chad then started speaking in split roaring orders in a tone that Marcus had never heard him use before.
"Fighters are peeling away a transport ship is inbound reported the scan operator"
"Let it dock" said Marcus glancing at Chad for confirmation.
Chad nodded just as his friend arrived.
"Your Lord seems to hold you in high regard still" said chad in split noting the formidable array of forces that had gathered off station.
"My appologies said Vgntt I will personnaly chastise those who have caused alarm to your friends. This was not my intent.
Will you not come with me ?".
"No I am obligated as I have said and it is time for younger men such as yourself to bear the burdens of our lords protection".
"He will be disappointed Vgntt suggested".
"Not realy I am old and feeling my years if our lord allows I will live out my days in peace here".
"Then I will take my leave know that you and your terran friend have done me a service and that I am ever in yout debt".
Chad bowed formaly as his onetime protege left for the boarding docks, glancing at Marcus he could see that there was much he would have to explain.
"Sir we have a freghter moving into dock called the dockmaster as Chads friends transport ship cleared its mooring clamps.
Its on auto pil;ot Sir its registered as one of our ships".
Marcus looked at Chad for an explanation.
"A gift from my fromer lord I suspect" he said switching back to common.
"What type of ship is that ?"asked Marcus looking at the monitors as the freighter docked.
"A Chokaro a fast freight transport vessel Chad replied it is of Yaki origin".
Yaki, Marcus took a long deep breath there was much he had to discuss with his friend that was clear but for the moment he was enthralled by the sheer beatuty of the fast freighter as it closed on the mounting clamps.
"Shall we go on board asked Chad leading the way to the dock.
"She's beautiful Marcus said simply looking over the rail of the command bridge".
"And fully equipped agreed Chad although the Ai has been removed security" he said.
Betty Marcus called on the com to his mercury which at the moment was being swarmed over by maintenance droids.
"Yes Marcus", she replied.
I think I have a new home for you would you like to come on board.
Screens burst into life around him as Betty established a link.
"I am online advised Betty after a few minutes. I like this ship" she announced after a moment as console after console burst into life as Betty explored her new home.
"Follow me said Chad grinning broadly this is how a frieghter should be built. Marcus followed Chad of the bridge into the aft corridoors your stateroom announced Chad opening the door".
The room was luxurious there was a huge desk and bank of moniters nearby and more rooms led of from this one.
These qaurters are better than my house admitted Marcus.
My god he has given us this asked Marcus. How muich do these ships cost ?".
" Equipped like this more than your station cost you suggested Chad. my former lord was never one to stint on rewards he considered appropriate".
"That does raise another matter you were, are Yaki aren't you Marcus ?" asked.
"Once I was my lords blade chad answered pouring them both drinks from a concealed bar, but that was another life".
"You could have gone back with your friend couldn't you ?".
"It was offered but I am obligated to you and I am past the age where I would be of much service to my lord" Chad admitted settling into a seat opposite Marcus.
"Obligated to me but why ?".
"Do you not recall the hour we met you saved my life from those scum you shed blood unasked in what way am I not to be considered obligated ?".
"But you saved my life Marcus rememebered that night only vaguely you killed them".
"No Marcus I did not you did, you were injured but you moved as one born to hunt prey they fell before you in moments rarely have I seen one with your skills".
"Skills" Marcus said feeling ill as memeories he had tried to surpress rose up in him once more.
"You are but a tool Marcus Chad continued in a voice that seemed to echo from the bulkheads but you have been forged as only the finest of Knives can, be were we to meet in combat I tell you plainly I would know fear".
"This can't be said Marcus I was a Goner".
"No you were trained Marcus Chad replied and I have seen such training, you need to remember or you will never be whole"
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Trained there were images crashing through his mind of fire and a woman screaming then nothng just a voice he loved.
"Marcus come bck to me I need you".
Marcus followed the voice it was hard but as the words reverberated through him he pushed through the fog that clouded his senses.
"Vannessa he gasped seeing tears in her eyes where am I ? what happened ?"
"You'l be fine now Marcus just relax" Vannessa said gripping his hand urgently.
" Where's Chad ? I was with Chad".
"Chad is just fine he bought you here after you attacked him".
"I attacked Chad he gasped that can't be right".
"It is and you did said Vannessa now no more secrets,
Who are or who were you husband ?".
"I am Isiaha warrior of the light he answered without hesitation I am Gods hand".
"No more you are Marcus you are my husband and I Love you".
Something broke inside him he could feel it as tears poured from his eyes as long buried memories flooded in on him.
"I'm here Marcus Vannessa whispered I'll always be here"
"God the things I've done he admitted how can you bear to touch me".
"Because I love you hold onto that Marcus and remember that Chad is still your friend".
"Still yet you say I attacked him he queried".
"Apparently that means you have gained merit in his eyes Vannessa replied smiling" .
At that moment Chad entered the med bay his left arm bound in a sling.
"You are awake good said Chad gruffly.
There is much to be done we will speak when you return home.
Marcus was prersent when Chad finaly bought Betty home Vannessa at his side as she always seemed to be this days, not that he minded.
His workers were busy swinging the cargo modules of the ramps into the stations warehouses.
"Better late than neve"r said Marcus knowing that the station energy reserves were almost gone.
"We have two freighters en route to us said Vannessa when you vanished I ordered them just in case. I had to pay top price but".
"You don't have to explain Ness he interrupted at least it means we'l have some time before we have to send betty out again she will need a good maintenance check after this".
There's Chad she said pointing him out and that must be the survivor".
Marcus strode onto the access ramp and shook hands warmly with his friend relieved to have him back.
"This is Vgnntt Chad said as he introduced the split Marcus had rescued from the escape pod, by chance he is known to me".
"Any friend of yours is always welcome Chad said Marcus come we have a meal waiting and facilities for your freind to refresh himself".
Vgntt looked at Marcus as if puzzled then formaly bowed to him. "Know that I am indebted to you" he announced in heavily accented common.
Marcus acknowledged the Splits words but was puzzled by Chads silence there was something of import to Chad involved here but no doubt he would know soon enough what that was.
"How is your friend ?" asked Vannessa as they relaxed that evening in their home.
"He is well Vannessa but needs rest he is still very weak from his ordeal".
"As long as he knows he is safe now that is the main thing she agreed god it must have been terrible for him what he went through I mean".
"He as fortunate that Marcus arrived when he did Chad agreed even a few moments longer and he would not have survived".
"Does he want us to contact anyone to let them know he is safe ?" asked Marcus.
"That would be unwise said Chad He is highborn a man of some rank, those who attacked him finding he has survived their assault would return.
It would be best if we did not announce his prescence here".
"How awful for him said Vannessa tell your friend he can stay as long as he needs to".
"I will Chad assured them now I will bid you good night the hour is late and you also need your rest my lady".
Vannessa blushed furiously at Chads words "goodnight then" she replied sleep well.
It was a week later when Marcus recieved an urgent call to the docking office.
"Whats going on he asked ?".
"Sir We have a flotilla of ships demanding access to the docking ports" replied the watch manager.
Marcus scanned the sensors "Get Chad up here he ordered now".
The ships wanting to dock were not freighters they were fighters lots of them and a battleship he noted was waiting just at the edge of sensor range.
"Open a com link" ordered Chad as he strode into the control center.
"Link is up" said the dock manger. Chad then started speaking in split roaring orders in a tone that Marcus had never heard him use before.
"Fighters are peeling away a transport ship is inbound reported the scan operator"
"Let it dock" said Marcus glancing at Chad for confirmation.
Chad nodded just as his friend arrived.
"Your Lord seems to hold you in high regard still" said chad in split noting the formidable array of forces that had gathered off station.
"My appologies said Vgntt I will personnaly chastise those who have caused alarm to your friends. This was not my intent.
Will you not come with me ?".
"No I am obligated as I have said and it is time for younger men such as yourself to bear the burdens of our lords protection".
"He will be disappointed Vgntt suggested".
"Not realy I am old and feeling my years if our lord allows I will live out my days in peace here".
"Then I will take my leave know that you and your terran friend have done me a service and that I am ever in yout debt".
Chad bowed formaly as his onetime protege left for the boarding docks, glancing at Marcus he could see that there was much he would have to explain.
"Sir we have a freghter moving into dock called the dockmaster as Chads friends transport ship cleared its mooring clamps.
Its on auto pil;ot Sir its registered as one of our ships".
Marcus looked at Chad for an explanation.
"A gift from my fromer lord I suspect" he said switching back to common.
"What type of ship is that ?"asked Marcus looking at the monitors as the freighter docked.
"A Chokaro a fast freight transport vessel Chad replied it is of Yaki origin".
Yaki, Marcus took a long deep breath there was much he had to discuss with his friend that was clear but for the moment he was enthralled by the sheer beatuty of the fast freighter as it closed on the mounting clamps.
"Shall we go on board asked Chad leading the way to the dock.
"She's beautiful Marcus said simply looking over the rail of the command bridge".
"And fully equipped agreed Chad although the Ai has been removed security" he said.
Betty Marcus called on the com to his mercury which at the moment was being swarmed over by maintenance droids.
"Yes Marcus", she replied.
I think I have a new home for you would you like to come on board.
Screens burst into life around him as Betty established a link.
"I am online advised Betty after a few minutes. I like this ship" she announced after a moment as console after console burst into life as Betty explored her new home.
"Follow me said Chad grinning broadly this is how a frieghter should be built. Marcus followed Chad of the bridge into the aft corridoors your stateroom announced Chad opening the door".
The room was luxurious there was a huge desk and bank of moniters nearby and more rooms led of from this one.
These qaurters are better than my house admitted Marcus.
My god he has given us this asked Marcus. How muich do these ships cost ?".
" Equipped like this more than your station cost you suggested Chad. my former lord was never one to stint on rewards he considered appropriate".
"That does raise another matter you were, are Yaki aren't you Marcus ?" asked.
"Once I was my lords blade chad answered pouring them both drinks from a concealed bar, but that was another life".
"You could have gone back with your friend couldn't you ?".
"It was offered but I am obligated to you and I am past the age where I would be of much service to my lord" Chad admitted settling into a seat opposite Marcus.
"Obligated to me but why ?".
"Do you not recall the hour we met you saved my life from those scum you shed blood unasked in what way am I not to be considered obligated ?".
"But you saved my life Marcus rememebered that night only vaguely you killed them".
"No Marcus I did not you did, you were injured but you moved as one born to hunt prey they fell before you in moments rarely have I seen one with your skills".
"Skills" Marcus said feeling ill as memeories he had tried to surpress rose up in him once more.
"You are but a tool Marcus Chad continued in a voice that seemed to echo from the bulkheads but you have been forged as only the finest of Knives can, be were we to meet in combat I tell you plainly I would know fear".
"This can't be said Marcus I was a Goner".
"No you were trained Marcus Chad replied and I have seen such training, you need to remember or you will never be whole"
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Trained there were images crashing through his mind of fire and a woman screaming then nothng just a voice he loved.
"Marcus come bck to me I need you".
Marcus followed the voice it was hard but as the words reverberated through him he pushed through the fog that clouded his senses.
"Vannessa he gasped seeing tears in her eyes where am I ? what happened ?"
"You'l be fine now Marcus just relax" Vannessa said gripping his hand urgently.
" Where's Chad ? I was with Chad".
"Chad is just fine he bought you here after you attacked him".
"I attacked Chad he gasped that can't be right".
"It is and you did said Vannessa now no more secrets,
Who are or who were you husband ?".
"I am Isiaha warrior of the light he answered without hesitation I am Gods hand".
"No more you are Marcus you are my husband and I Love you".
Something broke inside him he could feel it as tears poured from his eyes as long buried memories flooded in on him.
"I'm here Marcus Vannessa whispered I'll always be here"
"God the things I've done he admitted how can you bear to touch me".
"Because I love you hold onto that Marcus and remember that Chad is still your friend".
"Still yet you say I attacked him he queried".
"Apparently that means you have gained merit in his eyes Vannessa replied smiling" .
At that moment Chad entered the med bay his left arm bound in a sling.
"You are awake good said Chad gruffly.
There is much to be done we will speak when you return home.
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Chaopter 7: A prelude to war.
Marcus joined Chad in the stations main office " what's going on?" he asked looking to the main monitors.
"Something disturbing answered Chad pointng to the system traffic monitoring screens.
There is a large increase in military transports and other military vessels both Terran and commonwealth".
"Will we be in any danger here" asked Marcus ?.
"Unlikely replied Chad but it would be wise to use the Chokaro to deliver our goods for the moment she has heavy shields and is armed.
It might be wise to consider purchasing a jump drive for her just in case.
added Chad".
"We'll do that then agreed Marcus we have a Delivery to make in Black hole sun lets move the cargo from the mercury".
"Already in Hand Marcus, I will be going with you this trip Marcus if we also put a supply of ecells on board we will be able to make a jump from the goner Temple direct to the south gate here that will cut our jouney time by a third Chad suggesred".
We'll do that then, I'l just let Vannessa know what we're doing".
That was not as easy as he had hoped Vannessa wanted to go with them.
"You can't beloved the baby is due in a few weeks and who knows what we will find out there I'll be back as soon as I can".
"Just make sure you are Marcus. now fly straight and true the sooner you leave the sooner you will be back".
"Are we ready to go ?"he asked Chad as he studied the system traffic from the bridge monitors.
"Indeed Marcus take her out I have a course laid in for the goner Temple".
"The Goner temple Marcus" queried.
"Once we have a Jump drive we will make up the time we will not keep your customers waiting Marcus".
It was a troubling Journey as they passed through the southern sectors on the way to the goner temple it was obvious that there was indeed a massive military build up going on.
They reached The Temple in record time mostly due to Chad using strafing manouvers to push them beyond even the rated speed limits of the Chokaro.
As They docked he was paged and asked to meet a Goner priest at the Station docking office.
"I know you Marcus" whispered as he entered the office.
"And I you Isiah replied the priest. what brings you here ?".
"I want to buy a jump drive for my ship".
"And if we decide not to sell you one what then ?".
"Then you commit me to a long Journey to terracorp Hq, I can buy one there but that would place my family in jeopardy that I would find hard to forgive".
"Understood said the priest, knowing all to well Isiah's circumstances he had watched over him for many years and knew well what troubled the young warrior.
That is a burden I will not impose on you Isiah you may have the jump drive, know also that what was done to you was necessary I am sorry if it has caused you difficulties, should you ever need council I will be here".
"Thank you Menan but no I will not be returning I am in need of haste" said Marcus.
"Understood said Menan" allowing the warrior to leave unhindered.
Menan watched Isiah make his way back to his ship.
"This is Menan He said into the comm unit the transaction is to be allowed I wish it to be expidited with all possible speed and Harath. Yes came the reply. Send him a gift a transporter device no charge". Understood sir.
Menan sat back in his chair as he saw a swarm of dock workers begin installing the Jumpdrive on the freighter.
He regretted that Isiah had chosen not to return but it was understandable there were dark days ahead he hoped that Isiah would survive them.
Marcus joined Chad in the stations main office " what's going on?" he asked looking to the main monitors.
"Something disturbing answered Chad pointng to the system traffic monitoring screens.
There is a large increase in military transports and other military vessels both Terran and commonwealth".
"Will we be in any danger here" asked Marcus ?.
"Unlikely replied Chad but it would be wise to use the Chokaro to deliver our goods for the moment she has heavy shields and is armed.
It might be wise to consider purchasing a jump drive for her just in case.
added Chad".
"We'll do that then agreed Marcus we have a Delivery to make in Black hole sun lets move the cargo from the mercury".
"Already in Hand Marcus, I will be going with you this trip Marcus if we also put a supply of ecells on board we will be able to make a jump from the goner Temple direct to the south gate here that will cut our jouney time by a third Chad suggesred".
We'll do that then, I'l just let Vannessa know what we're doing".
That was not as easy as he had hoped Vannessa wanted to go with them.
"You can't beloved the baby is due in a few weeks and who knows what we will find out there I'll be back as soon as I can".
"Just make sure you are Marcus. now fly straight and true the sooner you leave the sooner you will be back".
"Are we ready to go ?"he asked Chad as he studied the system traffic from the bridge monitors.
"Indeed Marcus take her out I have a course laid in for the goner Temple".
"The Goner temple Marcus" queried.
"Once we have a Jump drive we will make up the time we will not keep your customers waiting Marcus".
It was a troubling Journey as they passed through the southern sectors on the way to the goner temple it was obvious that there was indeed a massive military build up going on.
They reached The Temple in record time mostly due to Chad using strafing manouvers to push them beyond even the rated speed limits of the Chokaro.
As They docked he was paged and asked to meet a Goner priest at the Station docking office.
"I know you Marcus" whispered as he entered the office.
"And I you Isiah replied the priest. what brings you here ?".
"I want to buy a jump drive for my ship".
"And if we decide not to sell you one what then ?".
"Then you commit me to a long Journey to terracorp Hq, I can buy one there but that would place my family in jeopardy that I would find hard to forgive".
"Understood said the priest, knowing all to well Isiah's circumstances he had watched over him for many years and knew well what troubled the young warrior.
That is a burden I will not impose on you Isiah you may have the jump drive, know also that what was done to you was necessary I am sorry if it has caused you difficulties, should you ever need council I will be here".
"Thank you Menan but no I will not be returning I am in need of haste" said Marcus.
"Understood said Menan" allowing the warrior to leave unhindered.
Menan watched Isiah make his way back to his ship.
"This is Menan He said into the comm unit the transaction is to be allowed I wish it to be expidited with all possible speed and Harath. Yes came the reply. Send him a gift a transporter device no charge". Understood sir.
Menan sat back in his chair as he saw a swarm of dock workers begin installing the Jumpdrive on the freighter.
He regretted that Isiah had chosen not to return but it was understandable there were dark days ahead he hoped that Isiah would survive them.
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Chapter 8: All things lost
Marcus was impatient to be home tearing away from the station he set the jumpdrive and waited as the universe dissolved around him.
"Warning we have been targetted missiles inbound" announced Betty.
Gods snarled Marcus throwing the ship into a desparate series of manouevers.
"We are being hailed" said Chad.
"What they shoot first and talk later, put it on screen Betty" he snapped taking them clear of the missile barrage.
"This is ATF defence forces heave to and prepare to be boarded for inspection".
"Why have you attacked me ?" screamed Marcus the rage building in him.
"You are Argon you are designated as a hostile prepare to be boarded any evasive manoevers will be classed as a hostile act" came the terse reply.
"Chad what are we dealing with here ?" he asked.
"Two rapiers and a scimitar replied Chad studying his screens shall I destroy them ?".
"Not yet lets not burn any bridges before we have to set a course for home. Betty give me a com link.
Atf forces this is Marcus Bentone I am en-route to wheat station beta I have urgent supplies for that station please desist from attacking us we are not hostile".
A rapier flashed past realy close Marcus thought.
"Freighter we have scanned your ship you are armed Mr Bentone".
"We have not fired said Marcus we will dock at Wheat station beta if you will allow we are peaceful Marcus insisted".
"Understood Mr Bentone but we wil be monitoring you. You are clear to proceed until advised otherwise".
"Chad power down weapons lets not have any misunderstandings here".
"Understood said Chad reluctantly course for home has been resumed".
The journey took longer than Marcus wished but once docked he ran to his home to find it empty.
"She's not here Chad he said simply feeling his world shattering around him and despair tearing at his heart".
"She would not leave without cause advised Chad check your Message log".
Marcus keyed the Log. "Marcus said Vannessa looking frightened as he watched the message vid if you are hearing this it means you're alive.
My god so much has happened Earth Torus is gone Marcus and there are reports of a full scale attack on terran system's.
My fathers dead she said simply he was on the torus.
I wanted him to meet you Marcus but now that can't be god I am so frightened. Malcom sent me a message My step motrher has taken control of my fathers holdings. I can't stay here Marcus tha woman won't leave me as a possible heir to my fathers fortune.
I'm sorry I cant't stay she is coming and I have to run find me Marcus and know that I love you".
Marcus was impatient to be home tearing away from the station he set the jumpdrive and waited as the universe dissolved around him.
"Warning we have been targetted missiles inbound" announced Betty.
Gods snarled Marcus throwing the ship into a desparate series of manouevers.
"We are being hailed" said Chad.
"What they shoot first and talk later, put it on screen Betty" he snapped taking them clear of the missile barrage.
"This is ATF defence forces heave to and prepare to be boarded for inspection".
"Why have you attacked me ?" screamed Marcus the rage building in him.
"You are Argon you are designated as a hostile prepare to be boarded any evasive manoevers will be classed as a hostile act" came the terse reply.
"Chad what are we dealing with here ?" he asked.
"Two rapiers and a scimitar replied Chad studying his screens shall I destroy them ?".
"Not yet lets not burn any bridges before we have to set a course for home. Betty give me a com link.
Atf forces this is Marcus Bentone I am en-route to wheat station beta I have urgent supplies for that station please desist from attacking us we are not hostile".
A rapier flashed past realy close Marcus thought.
"Freighter we have scanned your ship you are armed Mr Bentone".
"We have not fired said Marcus we will dock at Wheat station beta if you will allow we are peaceful Marcus insisted".
"Understood Mr Bentone but we wil be monitoring you. You are clear to proceed until advised otherwise".
"Chad power down weapons lets not have any misunderstandings here".
"Understood said Chad reluctantly course for home has been resumed".
The journey took longer than Marcus wished but once docked he ran to his home to find it empty.
"She's not here Chad he said simply feeling his world shattering around him and despair tearing at his heart".
"She would not leave without cause advised Chad check your Message log".
Marcus keyed the Log. "Marcus said Vannessa looking frightened as he watched the message vid if you are hearing this it means you're alive.
My god so much has happened Earth Torus is gone Marcus and there are reports of a full scale attack on terran system's.
My fathers dead she said simply he was on the torus.
I wanted him to meet you Marcus but now that can't be god I am so frightened. Malcom sent me a message My step motrher has taken control of my fathers holdings. I can't stay here Marcus tha woman won't leave me as a possible heir to my fathers fortune.
I'm sorry I cant't stay she is coming and I have to run find me Marcus and know that I love you".
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Gavrudhka
Thsnk you for your kind words, my lack of punctuation is a failing I admit I will try to improve.
I am slowly making my way through my prior posts and editing them to make them more readable.
They won't be perfect but I hope that will make them more enjoyable for those reading.
I am slowly making my way through my prior posts and editing them to make them more readable.
They won't be perfect but I hope that will make them more enjoyable for those reading.
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Chapter 9: The search begins.
Marcus called an emergency council meeting.
"Thank you all for comming he said simply, we all know what has happened. The question now is one of your safety.
We could evacuate you said Marcus but I cannot take you to terran space.
I am now considered a hostile to the terran forces insystem".
"Could we stay asked Timmins ?".
"That is an option your homes are here and this station is not a strategic target. But you would be on your own.
I obviousely would not be allowed to stay much as I would wish to.
Look he continued the choice is yours one day this will be over I will come back when I can it is not my intent to abandon you".
"But if you leave how will we survive ?"asked Dannar.
"People will still need wheat Marcus replied and I intend to leave the Mercury here and the station funds so that you can purchase what you need.
What is important to me is that should you choose to stay then you have the means to do so".
Timmins rose to speak when the conversation died away. "I think I can speak for the majority Marcus when I thank you for taking the time to give us what assurances you can when it is clear you have far more pressing concerns.
For myself I and my family will stay no matter what happens we will ward your home I will ask gods blessing on your quest to find Vannesa".
"Thank you said Marcus I leave in an hour I wish you all well".
Marcus called an emergency council meeting.
"Thank you all for comming he said simply, we all know what has happened. The question now is one of your safety.
We could evacuate you said Marcus but I cannot take you to terran space.
I am now considered a hostile to the terran forces insystem".
"Could we stay asked Timmins ?".
"That is an option your homes are here and this station is not a strategic target. But you would be on your own.
I obviousely would not be allowed to stay much as I would wish to.
Look he continued the choice is yours one day this will be over I will come back when I can it is not my intent to abandon you".
"But if you leave how will we survive ?"asked Dannar.
"People will still need wheat Marcus replied and I intend to leave the Mercury here and the station funds so that you can purchase what you need.
What is important to me is that should you choose to stay then you have the means to do so".
Timmins rose to speak when the conversation died away. "I think I can speak for the majority Marcus when I thank you for taking the time to give us what assurances you can when it is clear you have far more pressing concerns.
For myself I and my family will stay no matter what happens we will ward your home I will ask gods blessing on your quest to find Vannesa".
"Thank you said Marcus I leave in an hour I wish you all well".
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Chapter 10. Silence
"What now asked Chad ? "as Marcus strode onto the bridge.
"I guess it's up to us said Marcus Vannessa took the Disco she didn't say where she was going but I doubt it was north. As for the station the people will stay".
"That is wise agreed Chad taking the Chokaro out. aware of the ATF fighters monitoring their every move at the edge of scan range".
"Can you get us within comm range of the Terran outpost ?".
"It will be difficult but I will do it".
"Vannessa will have left me a trail Chad Marcus said aloud all I need to do is find where it start's".
"We will find your woman Chad asserted".
Marcus commed Malcom personnaly not daring to come within weapons range of the now heavily militarised station.
"Marcus My god I'm glad to see you are safe".
"Malcom Vannessa has gone I need to find her is there anything you can tell me that will help me do that".
"She said nothing to me Marcus everything happened so quickly, but I can send you the system scans if you have a time scale of when she left.
Marcus sent Vannessa's time of departure from the station and Malcom responded instantly.
I'm sorry that's all I can do for the moment Marcus said Malcom find her he begged".
Marcus understood Malcom had loved Vannessa still did if he had not appeared in her life Malcom might have married her.
"Thank you Malcom I promise you I will find her and when she is safe I will let you know somehow".
"That is all I can ask for Marcus gosdpeed now get out of here".
"We have fighters on intercept advised Chad ATF. I guess they picked up our comm's traffic"
"Lets get out of here then agreed Marcus"
They Jumped into omicron Lyrae to a scene of carnage proximity alarms screamed.
"There has been a battle here" Chad said wrestling the ship clear of the debris field.
"What are you doing shouted Marcus as the ship Lurched heavily?".
"Salvage Marcus said Chad as he wrestled with the controls now sit down and watch".
Chad wrestled the ahip through the sector picking up abandoned crates with an ease born of years of experience.
"Now we will dock" annouced Chad heading for the equipment dock.
avoiding the swarms of fighters that seemed to be scanning them every few moments.
They finaly docked but had to wait on board before a station security team checked them out.
"Now to buisnes said Chad I assume we have left the Home account to the station".
"I did agreed Marcus all I have are my personnal credits".
"Then first we shall establish a new account" said Chad leading the way of the docks.
Chad had changed thought Marcus as he sat down opposite him in a station bar.
"Now you must begin anew Marcus said Chad as he sipped his ale. You have done what you could for your people and that is honourable, but are you willing to go on ?".
"How can I not ? Vannesa is out there somewhere she is my life I will do anything I have to, to find her".
"What now asked Chad ? "as Marcus strode onto the bridge.
"I guess it's up to us said Marcus Vannessa took the Disco she didn't say where she was going but I doubt it was north. As for the station the people will stay".
"That is wise agreed Chad taking the Chokaro out. aware of the ATF fighters monitoring their every move at the edge of scan range".
"Can you get us within comm range of the Terran outpost ?".
"It will be difficult but I will do it".
"Vannessa will have left me a trail Chad Marcus said aloud all I need to do is find where it start's".
"We will find your woman Chad asserted".
Marcus commed Malcom personnaly not daring to come within weapons range of the now heavily militarised station.
"Marcus My god I'm glad to see you are safe".
"Malcom Vannessa has gone I need to find her is there anything you can tell me that will help me do that".
"She said nothing to me Marcus everything happened so quickly, but I can send you the system scans if you have a time scale of when she left.
Marcus sent Vannessa's time of departure from the station and Malcom responded instantly.
I'm sorry that's all I can do for the moment Marcus said Malcom find her he begged".
Marcus understood Malcom had loved Vannessa still did if he had not appeared in her life Malcom might have married her.
"Thank you Malcom I promise you I will find her and when she is safe I will let you know somehow".
"That is all I can ask for Marcus gosdpeed now get out of here".
"We have fighters on intercept advised Chad ATF. I guess they picked up our comm's traffic"
"Lets get out of here then agreed Marcus"
They Jumped into omicron Lyrae to a scene of carnage proximity alarms screamed.
"There has been a battle here" Chad said wrestling the ship clear of the debris field.
"What are you doing shouted Marcus as the ship Lurched heavily?".
"Salvage Marcus said Chad as he wrestled with the controls now sit down and watch".
Chad wrestled the ahip through the sector picking up abandoned crates with an ease born of years of experience.
"Now we will dock" annouced Chad heading for the equipment dock.
avoiding the swarms of fighters that seemed to be scanning them every few moments.
They finaly docked but had to wait on board before a station security team checked them out.
"Now to buisnes said Chad I assume we have left the Home account to the station".
"I did agreed Marcus all I have are my personnal credits".
"Then first we shall establish a new account" said Chad leading the way of the docks.
Chad had changed thought Marcus as he sat down opposite him in a station bar.
"Now you must begin anew Marcus said Chad as he sipped his ale. You have done what you could for your people and that is honourable, but are you willing to go on ?".
"How can I not ? Vannesa is out there somewhere she is my life I will do anything I have to, to find her".
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Chapter 11: Breadcrumbs.
Marcus groaned as he waited for yet another security check before being allowed on dock.
"Relax said Chad we have almost a full freght bay of salvaged goods after this we wll move on".
"You found something in Malcoms data" Marcus guessed.
"Indeed Vannessa joined a military convoy Headed for the one place she knew her family would fear to follow her".
M148 said Marcus he knew of it who did not the Argon system where the defeat of the Kha'ak had been concieved and mounted from.
"It poses some dificulties for us Marcus said Chad but it has been many years since I have been of interest to the Argon military.
For the moment I have arranged to sell the missiles and weapons we salvaged here and I have bought a discoverer she is being equipped as we speak. When we are cleared to go on station there is a man I have to find".
"You want to go alone" said Marcus.
"No said Chad I want you there but not as if we are known to each other".
"Understood" said Marcus.
The Bar was dark and inhospitable Marcus ordered a whiskey and moved to a table near the back of the room.
He saw Chad enter a short while later in the company of a Teladi and one of the biggest split Marcus had ever seen.
Marcus only sipped his whiskey his eyes scanning the room for potentiel danger but even so he missed it when it happened. For no reason he could fathom the Teladi drew a weapon on Chad without thought he leapt into the fray throwing his drink into the splits eyes then knocking him unconcious as he sought to protect his friend.
Their was a sound of blaster fire then silence as Chad rose to his full height.
"Get that garbage out of here he pointed to the dying Teladi. and you he pointed to the bar keep you will take that scum to my ship indicating the unconcious split".
" Yes my lord at once "agreed the bar keep signaling his men to do as Chad had instructed.
"What just happened" asked Marcus as the adrenalin rush left him feeling the sweat cool on his skin.
Later said Chad leading them out of the bar.
Only when they were back on board and the locks sealed did Chad discuss what had happened.
"It was a trap as I anticipated said Chad as they made their way down to the lower holds. The Teladi was a spotter for the pirates as such he had much information of value to us it is unfortunate he chose to die but I think his body gaurd will be able to tell us what which we need".
"You mean you are going to beat it out of him Marcus suggested.
"Not me you said Chad if I defeat him he will accept it as an honourable defeat. If however he was bested by a terran of your stature he would be humbled".
"You want me to fight him ?, Marcus was a little concerned recalling the size of the split.
"No said Chad I want Isiah to fight him but not to kill him or does Isiah care nothing for your wife ?".
Chad watched the change come over his friend recognised the walk become that of one who hunts.
"You take great risks here said Isiah better if I had been left asleep".
"I think not Chad replied Marcus is strong in many ways but he need's you without you he is not ready for what lays ahead".
"Are you ready ? asked Isiah I was forged to be god's hand Marcus cannot bear the burden of what I have done for the lord".
"And yet you are the same person Chad pointed out, perhaps Marcus will only succeed in his quest if you become one".
"Then he would no longer be Marcus, not as you know him".
"Perhap's he would be stronger and you would no longer have to sleep" suggested Chad.
He saw Hope flare in Isiah's eyes
"It has never been achieved said Isiah that was why I was cast out".
"And if I say it can be achieved would you do as I bid ?" asked Chad.
"I would Isiah said swiftly but Marcus would also have to agree to this it would cause him much pain".
"I wil guide you Isiah for now though you must defeat this split but not kill him and if you could limit the damage you inflict that would be helpful" suggested Chad as they arrived at the hold where the split had been transfereed to.
"So Chrrt Knntt said the Split rising to meet them I had heard you were dead".
"Many have made that mistake agreed Chad. Now to buisnes you will tell me all about your former employer and what he knew".
"And why would I do this ? kill me and be done he said simply".
"I have a proposition for you said Chad defeat this terran in combat indicating Isiah and you may leave with all honour".
"You will not fight me ?" asked the Split puzzled.
"If I fought you I would have to kill you Chad admitted if the Terran subdues you however will you swear fealty to him".
Harrntt studied the Terran he was small even by their standards. "Is this a joke ?".
"No Chad answered defeat him and walk free or swear fealty to him".
Harrnntt lunged at the terran but was surprised at the mans speed he moved like a ghost Harrntt gasped as he felt the blows land home.
He fought to his limits but the terran seemed able to anticipate his every strike. He was dead the Terran was playing with him.
"Isiah stop ordered Chad as Isiah moved in for the kill. alive remember you cannot help Vannessa if you kill him".
Isiah moved back the blood lust driving him he was barely in control.
"Enough Isiah it is time to sleep I need to speak to Marcus now".
Isiah nodded then changed.
"What did I do asked Marcus ?".
"What I asked admitted chad and now you must deal with this Split It is important Marcus".
Harnntt came to a short while later, He was not dead then.
He rose to his knees his senses still reeling "I Harrnntt swear fealty to you he said may my ancestors witness my vow ".
Marcus groaned as he waited for yet another security check before being allowed on dock.
"Relax said Chad we have almost a full freght bay of salvaged goods after this we wll move on".
"You found something in Malcoms data" Marcus guessed.
"Indeed Vannessa joined a military convoy Headed for the one place she knew her family would fear to follow her".
M148 said Marcus he knew of it who did not the Argon system where the defeat of the Kha'ak had been concieved and mounted from.
"It poses some dificulties for us Marcus said Chad but it has been many years since I have been of interest to the Argon military.
For the moment I have arranged to sell the missiles and weapons we salvaged here and I have bought a discoverer she is being equipped as we speak. When we are cleared to go on station there is a man I have to find".
"You want to go alone" said Marcus.
"No said Chad I want you there but not as if we are known to each other".
"Understood" said Marcus.
The Bar was dark and inhospitable Marcus ordered a whiskey and moved to a table near the back of the room.
He saw Chad enter a short while later in the company of a Teladi and one of the biggest split Marcus had ever seen.
Marcus only sipped his whiskey his eyes scanning the room for potentiel danger but even so he missed it when it happened. For no reason he could fathom the Teladi drew a weapon on Chad without thought he leapt into the fray throwing his drink into the splits eyes then knocking him unconcious as he sought to protect his friend.
Their was a sound of blaster fire then silence as Chad rose to his full height.
"Get that garbage out of here he pointed to the dying Teladi. and you he pointed to the bar keep you will take that scum to my ship indicating the unconcious split".
" Yes my lord at once "agreed the bar keep signaling his men to do as Chad had instructed.
"What just happened" asked Marcus as the adrenalin rush left him feeling the sweat cool on his skin.
Later said Chad leading them out of the bar.
Only when they were back on board and the locks sealed did Chad discuss what had happened.
"It was a trap as I anticipated said Chad as they made their way down to the lower holds. The Teladi was a spotter for the pirates as such he had much information of value to us it is unfortunate he chose to die but I think his body gaurd will be able to tell us what which we need".
"You mean you are going to beat it out of him Marcus suggested.
"Not me you said Chad if I defeat him he will accept it as an honourable defeat. If however he was bested by a terran of your stature he would be humbled".
"You want me to fight him ?, Marcus was a little concerned recalling the size of the split.
"No said Chad I want Isiah to fight him but not to kill him or does Isiah care nothing for your wife ?".
Chad watched the change come over his friend recognised the walk become that of one who hunts.
"You take great risks here said Isiah better if I had been left asleep".
"I think not Chad replied Marcus is strong in many ways but he need's you without you he is not ready for what lays ahead".
"Are you ready ? asked Isiah I was forged to be god's hand Marcus cannot bear the burden of what I have done for the lord".
"And yet you are the same person Chad pointed out, perhaps Marcus will only succeed in his quest if you become one".
"Then he would no longer be Marcus, not as you know him".
"Perhap's he would be stronger and you would no longer have to sleep" suggested Chad.
He saw Hope flare in Isiah's eyes
"It has never been achieved said Isiah that was why I was cast out".
"And if I say it can be achieved would you do as I bid ?" asked Chad.
"I would Isiah said swiftly but Marcus would also have to agree to this it would cause him much pain".
"I wil guide you Isiah for now though you must defeat this split but not kill him and if you could limit the damage you inflict that would be helpful" suggested Chad as they arrived at the hold where the split had been transfereed to.
"So Chrrt Knntt said the Split rising to meet them I had heard you were dead".
"Many have made that mistake agreed Chad. Now to buisnes you will tell me all about your former employer and what he knew".
"And why would I do this ? kill me and be done he said simply".
"I have a proposition for you said Chad defeat this terran in combat indicating Isiah and you may leave with all honour".
"You will not fight me ?" asked the Split puzzled.
"If I fought you I would have to kill you Chad admitted if the Terran subdues you however will you swear fealty to him".
Harrntt studied the Terran he was small even by their standards. "Is this a joke ?".
"No Chad answered defeat him and walk free or swear fealty to him".
Harrnntt lunged at the terran but was surprised at the mans speed he moved like a ghost Harrntt gasped as he felt the blows land home.
He fought to his limits but the terran seemed able to anticipate his every strike. He was dead the Terran was playing with him.
"Isiah stop ordered Chad as Isiah moved in for the kill. alive remember you cannot help Vannessa if you kill him".
Isiah moved back the blood lust driving him he was barely in control.
"Enough Isiah it is time to sleep I need to speak to Marcus now".
Isiah nodded then changed.
"What did I do asked Marcus ?".
"What I asked admitted chad and now you must deal with this Split It is important Marcus".
Harnntt came to a short while later, He was not dead then.
He rose to his knees his senses still reeling "I Harrnntt swear fealty to you he said may my ancestors witness my vow ".
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