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Post by Tenlar Scarflame » Sat, 27. Jun 09, 06:12

plot plot plot plot plot.
A little backstory for everyone, by the way. :)


November 5, 2942 Anno Domini / 772 Argon Era / 4 Reunion Era

Outside the armorglass cabin screen, there was only faintly glowing grey.

It was a strange sensation, being still whole and correct to your own eyes when the universe outside is condensed and moving at scientifically impossible velocities past you. The grey of the warp was almost like a soft liquid, a nebulous pool or fog, which would sometimes be interspersed with bluish or greenish flashes, lances of light that would leave a thin, paint-brush streak across the ghostly cosmos. It was almost silent- but warp space, wherever it existed, could faintly carry rumbles across its eerie tunnels. Passing traffic would leave small sound wakes behind them, a flitting murmur that would accompany a barely perceptible ripple. All ships traveled at the same velocity in warp-space; or rather, the universe moved at an equal velocity from all vantage points within warp-space.

At least, this was the sensation felt during a simple gate-jump. The jumpdrive was a device that could lock on to a gate, any gate in the universe, so long as you either knew its spatial location relative to your own, or its position on the “gate grid” relative to your own. A jump locking onto a gate by spatial location was prone to a very long list of problems, the most obvious of which was a failure to properly lock on to the target gate- a jump in this situation would be impossible to break out of, and warp-space, while mesmerizing and harmless, was quite uninhabitable. It was also enormously energy inefficient as opposed to grid-jumping. Such jumps were usually undertaken after a large and diverse team of scientists had pored over and thoroughly calculated the situation until they found a solution that would at least probably work. A grid-jump was a rather routine procedure, by comparison. At launch, the drive would take advantage of known gates within its own system and “skip” off of one into its connecting gate. It would ride the already existing passage between these gates until its emergence on the other side, when it would “skip” again to the next gate, and so on until the destination gate was reached. The sensation of each skip was a bit jarring, as the grey of warp-space would flash to black quite suddenly, and the nearly inaudible constant hum would suddenly cease, then return.

The gates, as such, were quite a blessing, even more so than when they were first discovered. Almost a thousand jazuras ago, at the launch of the Greater Centauri project, Man first tried its hand at gate-craft. The brightest human minds had unlocked a secret that defied all logic- a device that enabled unerring superluminal travel between two points. This, of course, was only the beginning. The human race was changed forever when they discovered their greatest creation had already been achieved, a few billion jazuras prior. A webwork of space gates, elegantly impossible, spanning the skies in every direction. Literally millions of them.

All civilization had grown around the gates. They were the valves of its arteries. The jumpdrive had allowed the distance between gates to be reduced to nearly zero. Travel was still not instantaneous- only the Kha’ak could manage that without fault- but the energy costs associated with long-range travel were extremely low, thanks to the still-functional relics of the Old Ones. To construct such hardware to last for billions of years and beyond- that was Godliness. A few gates were wrecked at the expense of gigatons of firepower at various points in history, but the gates were stubbornly hardy, sporting a resistance against massive meteor strikes and a type of impulse field that made them quite difficult to move from their chosen orbits or spatial locations.


Gate-space was where Thrk suddenly found himself. The jumpdrive seemed to be operating fine, and the power shunt, while reckless and quite hurried, had done its job well. The ship had been struck a few times by a Rhonkar fighter’s pulse beam emitter- this on top of the power shunt had the ship’s energy shields voicing their displeasure in no uncertain terms. They were safe now, though.

Thrk forced himself to exhale. He gave Jane a sidelong glance. Her hand was still firmly planted on the rear gun’s joystick. Her grip was steadily relaxing.

Thrk opened his mouth to speak, only to be interrupted when, with a mighty wind-up, Jane slapped him viciously across his cheek bone.
“Thrk, what the hell was that?” She fumed.

He rubbed his cheek, wincing a bit. “Jane… what the… Jane, in case you have forgotten in the last two stazuras, I have just murdered more than twenty Rhonkar warriors and stolen a civilian vessel to rescue you from…”

“Dammit, Thrk, thank you. Thank you, really.” Her expression hadn’t changed.

“What… you’re welcome.”

“Good. But Thrk, what the hell kind of plan was that? Have you completely lost your mind, or is getting run down by the entire goddam Split Imperial Navy the best you could honestly come up with? You practically blew up the trading port. Terra’s towers, Thrk, is this a stunt of some kind? Where did you even come from? And Faustos! I looked on every station between here and Ceo’s Buckzoid for the damn lizard!”

“And looked under the Split’s iron curtain. Jane, what were you thinking?” Thrk’s expression hardened. “How did this even happen? Did you insult Ka t’Ai Rhonkar’s mother? They’re cruel and disgusting bastards, but they don’t just scrabble up every pilot they find and throw them into a slave pen. I know that.”

“I… Thrk, honestly, I was looking for Adrian.”

Ah, thought Thrk. That made sense. Of course, Adrian ought to be quite dead, after the events at the palace station of the Baron of Danna’s Chance. The Baron, self-proclaimed monarch lording over Danna’s Chance shortly before the Reunion Era began, had begun manufacturing and stealing materials for a battle fleet the likes of which would stress the entire Commonwealth Collective Fleet to near destruction- the crew of the Osprey-class vessel Cossack One, captained by Adrian Carter, and her fighter wings were swept up into the Baron’s nefarious plans when Thrk’s brother, T’ach, had turned coat and opted for the Baron’s heftier pay. Aligning themselves with the cause of the Gencore Technical Alliance, a high-technology and arms research company, they tracked down the Baron and his lackeys to their palace station deep within the asteroid belt of Danna’s Chance, and in a mighty battle were able to bring down the station from the inside. The losses were great, but the cavalry arrived in the end- in the form of the Argonia Navy, three destroyers and their escorts.

It wasn’t that simple, of course, for many reasons; the Baron’s men and ships were far too well equipped for an Independent faction under embargo from all five Commonwealth races. This hinted at either corporate sponsorship or something even more sinister. And T’ach was there, at the station’s destruction- Thrk had witnessed the floor collapse from beneath his brother, who was not wearing a space suit. His brother was dead. And then the unimaginable happened. The planet cracked. Danna’s Rock simply split down the middle, right there in plain sight. Ships’ reactors started to overheat alarmingly, and the station began to collapse. The Baron had some kind of weapon, and this was his last-ditch effort to thwart the combined forces that assailed him. He crushed the station. Thrk had barely managed to escape- and he had lost contact with most of the other crew members until recently. Quite a lot had managed to jump away, many more than he’d previously assumed. He should have been relieved, but one thing haunted his mind, constantly.
His brother. As he had jumped away from the station, he had seen the body of his brother, which should have been destroyed after such protracted exposure to vacuum- but there was not a scratch on him. And he was breathing.


Jane continued.

“After what happened on the Baron’s palace station I wasn’t going to just leave him for dead. I know we never found Siegfried One after the Cossack was destroyed, so I thought he might have taken it. Well, I thought I’d found him, three jazuras ago. The trail led through Rhonkar’s Clouds. I found a few of the old Cossack’s crew, your marines. Well, something went wrong. I was arrested. I don’t know why.”

“You’re lucky one of those marines is still in contact with me. He surfaced three mazuras ago and told me you’d been imprisoned, and that you didn’t end up in one of Rhonkar’s public affairs prisons- you dropped off the map completely. It took me a mazura to track down Faustos, and him another mazura and a half to locate you.”

“He just surfaced?”

“Yes. The others are dead.”

“…what?”

“Yes, my marines are dying. The rest that had met you in Rhonkar’s Clouds were dead by the time my contact came around. He’s been in hiding.”

“…Thrk, what’s going on? Hiding from what?”

“I don’t know.”

Jane flung herself back into her chair. “Terra’s towers. Was he being followed?”

“I think so. At least, that’s what he indicated to me.”

“Then you’re right, I was an idiot. Leading up to my arrest I had a feeling I was only one step ahead of something the whole way. Something was following me, Thrk. A ship here and there between the gates, people out of place on stations. I… I think whatever it was, it engineered my arrest by Rhonkar.”

“I think so too. We’ll discuss that later, Jane. You’re going to come down from your adrenaline shortly. I suggest you use the bunk.”

“Faustos, is he…”

“Yes, he jumped ahead of us. So did Conestoga.” He turned to the grayish glow of warp-space. “We’re going to Hatikvah’s Faith.”

“Why?”

“We need to rescue Adrian.”

Jane smiled- she was indeed losing energy and that was all she could muster at the moment. But he was alive. "Thrk," she said.

"Yes?"

"For the love of Terra, the next time you need to spring me from jail, do it without SQUASH mines."

"Deal. I need to check on the passengers. Please rest."
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Post by TotallyBlazing » Sun, 28. Jun 09, 09:11

Creativity at its best. You sir are a god. :)

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Post by Tenlar Scarflame » Sun, 28. Jun 09, 19:37

Thanks :D. I'm glad you've forgiven the 13th paragraph of the last part...

Jane. Jane? Jane! Jane. Jane? :roll: Yeah, I'm going to fix that.
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Post by Tenlar Scarflame » Thu, 2. Jul 09, 00:01

Next part's in the works. It'll probably be up this weekend, most likely NOT before- big nasty test on Friday. Story of my life. :roll:

Ah yes, and paragraph 13 of the last post is fixed. So Thrk is not repeating "Jane" like the fracking seagulls from Finding Nemo. :P
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Post by The Zig » Thu, 2. Jul 09, 01:53

... Mate!

Next part AFTER the Test?!? Where are your priorities, man?!


Nah, seriously, good luck with the test.
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Post by SOTS » Thu, 2. Jul 09, 22:37

Good luck for Friday!

Also

Might have a spinoff of my own to keep my RP-brain ticking over while I wait for AJK to resurface. Let you know how it goes (Y) And before Zig throws me another stunningly subtle hint, the next chapter of Siege is already in the works ;)

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Post by Tenlar Scarflame » Tue, 14. Jul 09, 05:23

Part 8 is halfway written, though I might give it a sweeping re-write and save what's happening now for later.

As in, yes I'm still working on this. :P Either way part 8 will be the sweetness.
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Post by Blown » Mon, 3. Aug 09, 11:26

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Oi! Wake up in there! This thread's deader than most at the moment...
What happened to part 8?
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Post by Tenlar Scarflame » Mon, 3. Aug 09, 20:48

Good timing... I've just deleted what I was writing and started part 8 from scratch. :P That said, I fully expect to post on it tonight. I pwomise!
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Post by SOTS » Mon, 3. Aug 09, 20:55

You better :P

I'm still wrestling with the first chapter of my new one. And the next Siege chapter. Sigh. Patience, I suppose, is my order of the day.

Looking forward to your next instalment!

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Post by Tenlar Scarflame » Tue, 4. Aug 09, 05:00

See, I pwomised!

Anyway, short part. Sets up for the next part in this thread, though there will be Thrk/Jane/Adrian action in between.

November 7, 2942 Anno Domini / 772 Argon Era / 4 Reunion Era

The captain wasn’t sure what had roused him from his sleep.

Of course, there was always some kind of background noise in Torus Alpha 705. Not the aching rattle of a Teladi station or unsettling thump and murmur of a Boron station- the Torus was massive enough that its heartbeat was drawn to little more than a distant ringing in the ears. It was uncannily quiet, in fact, for a spaceborne installation. The air filters were next to silent, and the nearest power plants were many kilometers downspin in Torus Alpha through Gamma 696. There was the odd buzz or ratchet of a mechanical system, but in a Commonwealth station it was always so close- here on the Torus, or on most Space Command and ATF-built installations, it seemed to be coming from miles away, which was quite amazingly possible.

The noise was from the movement of people. There was always someone moving in Ta705’s hallways. He supposed Ta705 had quite a lot else going on besides keeping him confined to a single tower of the Torus, hell, a single bedroom that would make Split accommodations seem welcoming. Perhaps there were other persons of interest that the ATF was protecting and interviewing. There were certainly enough Task Force personnel to handle a large group- there were at least fifty doctors, not counting their assistants and nurses, that he’d seen just on this floor. At least one hundred interviewers (or so he gathered, since they were carrying the same pad of paper and wearing the same “invisible” ear piece that his own interviewer had,) a few dozen scientists of various fields, perhaps a dozen specialists of professions he couldn’t place, and twice as many armed and armored guards as anyone else.

The show of force interested him greatly- of course the captain was a high value asset that needed to be defended against many organizations from Sol and beyond. Solar anarchist groups, tinfoil hat types, mafias, Far Planets unions, Xenos. The ATF had made sure to inflate his ego enough that every imaginable high-profile organization seemed to want him as their pawn. And why not? He was, both in the Commonwealth and Sol, a living legend. Perhaps he was simply monumentally lucky, but that was what usually made legends.

But the captain, for all his travails, was incredibly perceptive. The AGI task force was not keeping him here to protect him as a high value asset, that much was certain. He wondered why he’d never met any other guests on Ta705. He knew they were there, of course- he’d seen more than one, all of them Terran- but the ATF seemed to make doubly sure that he would be steered away from them and into another interview. There were ATF marines at almost every door, all of them armed with EMP rifles. He suspected that if he ever tried to pass by them, they’d cross their guns in front of him, just like a pair of medieval pikemen, and gruffly deny him access. He’d have to try that some day.

He rolled on to his back, grimly accepting that he was becoming quite aware of each coil in his mattress. It creaked- not harshly, but just enough to bounce the noise around his head quite annoyingly. How he missed the Commonwealth. To be fair, not all parts of it- he could have died happily without being so intimately acquainted with The Mind of the Beast- but his earlier experiences were the most exciting times of his life. He had missed his homeworld acutely, every day. But there was so much unknown between the gates- so much opportunity, beauty, adventure! And now the ATF wanted to keep him chaperoned in Ta705 like a twelve-year-old boy asking him pre-canned show-and-tell questions about it. Madness. This ball of red tape was not the Earth he had missed for fifty years.

The captain’s floor was surprisingly quiet. He wasn’t sure of the time- they hadn’t provided him with a clock, of all things, and his nanocom was in his pants pocket under the bunk. The lights were on in the hallway as always, and the thinnest sliver of light made its way under his door, always uncomfortably bright, but little enough that the rest of the room was kept inky black. It was not conducive to sleep. Though, the captain mused, he generally didn’t have problems sleeping at this age.

Which reminded him- what woke me up in the first place? It must have been four in the morning- not a footfall to be heard. No shadows of feet creating ripples in the sliver of light at the base of his door. He couldn’t remember if he’d ever been awake for it like this. In a few ways it was refreshing, but in infinitely more ways unsettling. There was always someone awake in Ta705. Or had he always been asleep for this? He wished he knew. He also wished he’d discover what had awoken him. Wasn’t there always a marine squad making rounds in the guest quarters’ hallways?

Then, the room was abruptly flooded with light as the man who had been standing in the corner opened the door and left, leaving the door to slowly swing shut behind him.
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Post by Tenlar Scarflame » Tue, 13. Oct 09, 05:55

So I SUCK at updates. :P This part took me way too long to write. It should come out faster now though. I have a bit of free time, so there may perhaps be a few more subsequent posts in the near future. Here's more Thrk and Jane. ^^

November 9, 2942 Anno Domini / 772 Argon Era / 4 Reunion Era

Three sectors south of Family Rhonkar lay the easternmost sector of the Old Independents, Hatikvah’s Faith, the easternmost part of Old Commonwealth space.

Milky Gray was replaced by turquoise, then black, as Conestoga breached plane of the north gate and returned to real space. Thrk fired the freighter’s primary engines to guide it away from the apparition cylinder as Betty, his multiship CAI, spoke up in her distinctive low-resolution voice.

“We’re entering Hatikvah’s Faith, Thrk. What are your instructions?”
“Betty, can you give me a read on Siegmund One?” Thrk spoke to his console. Conestoga was considerably lighter now without a good eighty passengers stowed in the uncompressed freight bay. The slaves had been dropped in Company Pride on their way south from Family Rhonkar- the nearest place they could be reasonably certain the Commonwealth Rights Council would be able to keep their eyes on them. Company Teladi detested the slave trade outwardly, but the Split-dominated business inevitably found its way to the pirate clans, and pirate clans were profitable. Company Pride, at least, was within the boundaries of the Old Commonwealth. He hoped the poor creatures he’d found aboard the Imperial Trading Port would be returned to their homes, or at least offered honest work.

They’d also ditched the commandeered freighter in Company Pride, setting it on an auto-piloted course for Brennan’s Triumph. Thrk doubted that this would trip up the Family Rhonkar’s “Red Operatives” for long, but it would at least cause them a second guess.

Betty replied quickly. “Yes, Thrk. I’m requesting Hatikvah’s Faith’s public navigation network. Siegmund One is twenty-eight thousand miles distant from Hatikvah Prime, at heading two-sixty-three, fifteen high. The navigation network does not report large trans-gate activity behind us.”

“Thank you, Betty. Can you take us to Massa, Hatikvah Prime?”

“Yes, Thrk. Travel time from this location approximately six hours, eighteen minutes. Shall I engage SETA?”

“Yes. Thank you Betty.”

“Affirmative. Perceived travel time will be one hour, three minutes.”

“Faith?” said Jane as the cockpit door slid open.

“Yes ma’am,” fired back Thrk, without looking. Though Betty had taken control of Conestoga, his eyes remained on the rapidly expanding Gray-Blue disk of Hatikvah Prime. “Faustos is almost on the ground. He’ll watch ahead for anything that looks Rhonkar.”

“Should we be worried about him?”

Thrk smirked. “There’s plenty of Teladi in Massa. He’s more than okay.”

Thrk managed to take his eyes off of Hatikvah Prime and turned to Jane. He was immediately impressed- only four days removed from brutal slavery and she seemed almost her old self. Emergency protein and a long shower had her looking much less malnourished, though it would take another week for the treatment to heal her completely. Her cheeks remained a bit too hollow, and a persistent bruise still colored her right brow an unfortunate blue. She’d found some of her old clothes aboard Conestoga- her usual form-fitting leather jacket and tight pants. Her perfectly straight, fire-orange hair reached just above the small of her back. The spark of bright blue remained behind her eyes- though, Thrk thought for a moment, it was changed. Not less intense- quite the opposite. She was very much her old self, much too soon after she’d been extracted from beneath the slave master’s whip. He’d have to keep an eye on her. Adrian, he assumed, would not be able to.

“You look quite well,” he smiled, obscuring his concern as best he could. He stood, deliberately stretching his wiry arms.

“You look like a pirate.” She fired back, looking him over. He had on a thin white dynamic flak vest and the bottom portion of a civilian flight suit. Three laspistols were hooked to his belt, along with the electron sword, and a bandolier of energy cells crossed his right shoulder. The cargo pockets on his flight suit pants doubtless contained an assortment of explosives.

“I do what I can.” Thrk passed her and left the cockpit for the galley.

“Betty gives us an hour. I suggest you eat something before Massa.”

Jane managed to suppress a scowl. She would eat when she damn well wanted to. “Exactly how much of Massa are we going to cover to look for Adrian?”

“Not much. I have my suspicions. Faustos will be able to leverage the planetary network to some degree.”

“Why not just contact him?”

Thrk strategically chose not to respond. Jane did scowl this time. She turned to the armorglass screen- outside, a thick field of small rocks and rubble sped past, though under the effects of SETA, the Singularity Engine Time Accelerator, they were perceived as moving at six times their true relative speed. Beyond the rocks, the gray-green disc of Hatikvah Prime grew.

Arguably, The Faith was the most cosmopolitan of all the Old Independents. To the north lay All Split territory, and just beyond that, Teladi Company space. To the east was the Aladna Hill Confederacy, the first Argon state outside the Old Commonwealth. To the south lay a gate to recently discovered territories claimed by the Second Duchy of the Paranid Empire. Through Paranid space it was only a few jumps to Boron territory. As a result, the residents of Hatikvah’s Moon and Hatikvah Prime were incredibly wealthy and more than a little underhanded, and jealously guarded their crossroads.

This did not mean there was no threat of piracy: quite the opposite was true, and any intelligent pilot knew to hire a few escorts before venturing into the Faith, unless he was quite sure of his own speed or firepower. The sort of piracy that occurred on the fringe of the Old Commonwealth was, however, generally not the fatal kind. There were always a few spaced-out weedheads that would fire two or three too many impulse rays at their target, but the Hatikvah’s Faith Independent Guard were quick to stamp out these types. Major pirate clans like the Yaki were kept beyond the borders of the Faith, lest it be branded a “Pirate Sector” by the Commonwealth Senate and subjected to a war of occupation that the Guard knew they couldn’t win. As one of the few Independent Sectors with a legitimate standing government, the Faith was at least given a modicum of recognition from the Commonwealth: the first sign of any breakdown of their establishment would likely result in their being annexed by one or another race.

Through-traffic in the system saw very little other than some unusually dense rock fields- the whole system was littered with planetary shards- and a couple of food processing stations for various races. What was kept out of sight was the planetside life- a surprisingly thriving and wild culture with entertainment and tourist traffic that even rivaled Spaceweed Drift and Teladi Gain. Massa, the cultural center of Hatikvah Prime, was a fantastic den of brothels and black market transactions, from the destitute to the hyper-rich.

The Teladi, of course, were the masters of entertainment and deal-making, and as such Massa supported an incredible population of Company and Zuran outcasts alike. The native population, however, was largely Argon, an offshoot of the colonies that eventually became the Aladna Hill Confederacy. A few wandering Boron called the place home, and there was the usual insular enclave of Paranid present in the city, but these two races largely steered clear of the Faith. The Split loved Massa and the lesser cities of Hatikvah Prime, and were notorious for their predilection for consuming far too much space fuel and starting exactly as many fights as they were able to finish. All races converged here, and for good or for ill, the city and the sector thrived for it.

Thrk, however, harbored a persistent dislike for Massa. Of course he enjoyed a stiff space fuel and even the occasional fast woman just like any honest Split. What set him off was the ostentation. Not the places the tradesmen would ever see- that Massa was a hive of edginess, punks, tight clothing and neon glow. But everyone knew the natives when they saw them- plump, smiling men and women on the bleeding edge of fashion, flowing garments immaculately kept and ornamented with tens of thousands of credits worth of cut nividium and boroshell. They made an unimaginable profit running Massa, siphoning off the greed and vices of any trader with a streak of lawlessness, and quickly working to convert those who lacked one.

It didn’t help that Massa served as shore leave for Family Rhonkar naval crews; not necessarily as observant as the Red Operatives, but considerably more numerous and quicker to arms.

Thrk re-entered the cockpit, holding a half-eaten Vita Bar. Jane had taken his seat. He grunted. “I do suggest you eat something before we’re planetside.”

Wordlessly, she left her seat, brushed past him, and left the cockpit. He sighed, taking another bite of his Vita Bar. He would certainly need to keep an eye on her.
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Post by SOTS » Tue, 13. Oct 09, 23:40

Yay, politics ¬_¬ you know this means more work for me, writing my spinoff, to keep it in the same Universe, right? :P

In other, less whiny news, glad to see more of this! Good to have you back :D

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Post by Tenlar Scarflame » Sat, 17. Oct 09, 04:01

You know, I do what I can... :P

Also, good to be back. ^^ Part 10 is (and I actually mean this) in the works. It's more Thrk and Jane, which is the easiest of the three threads to write on...
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Post by The Zig » Sun, 18. Oct 09, 14:17

Nice work setting the scene. Gives us a good sense of what they're about to walk into.

Very curious how the next part will pan out. Good stuff :thumb_up:

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