Rogues Revenge Ch 25 finished 3/2/04

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Rogues Revenge Ch 25 finished 3/2/04

Post by SteveMill » Wed, 28. Jan 04, 15:10

Chapter completed below the ---------------- on Space Ritual page,

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Several decks below a repair droid lurched awkwardly into the air on anti-gravs that howled under the strain. Xela finished rerouting power through sub-systems not designed for such a load and diverted a trickle to the comm. unit. It hummed to life and she caught the jagged hiss of energy fire.
Rogues Revenge Ch 25 (series on the X2 disc) continued on http://www.spaceritual.com/1977/2004.html

Downloadable pdf also updated on the Space Ritual site.
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Post by KiwiNZ » Wed, 28. Jan 04, 22:24

Hey, great to see you managed to finish the chapter.

Very sad to see Xela going down. At this time the question probably is: is her chip fried of just the droid destroyed. I would like to believe it is the second option. Cannot imagine her being out of contention when Max is kind of delivering himself to the butcher.

Bugger, sad end to that chapter.

Hope to see soon how that all develops, i.e. before I die of curiosity :D

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Post by Al » Thu, 29. Jan 04, 18:12

Yup great read. Cant wait for more :)

Xela will be back.....I hope!

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Post by Moss » Fri, 30. Jan 04, 12:02

Al wrote:Yup great read. Cant wait for more :)

Xela will be back.....I hope!

Al
If she does come back then Max will have to go! as they will not be meeting again according to the latest addition to the story.

Great read again Steve.

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Post by Al » Fri, 30. Jan 04, 12:07

I'm hoping Steve is selling us a dummy.....but you're probably right.

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Post by SteveMill » Fri, 30. Jan 04, 12:46

Al wrote:I'm hoping Steve is selling us a dummy.....but you're probably right.

Al
Whenever have i sold my readers a dummy? :wink:

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Post by Faze » Sat, 31. Jan 04, 20:00

You are very good on the cliffhangers Steve. :evil:

Whens the next bit. :D

Love it.

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Post by Aye Capn » Sat, 31. Jan 04, 20:58

I was fully expecting that Jackson was going to betray Xela, as he was the only one who knew that she was Force's "edge". Then she goes and gets shot down crossing an elevator shaft.

I like stories that are unpredictable.

You don't expect a major character to get tagged by a random shot; it's very like the player's typical death experience in a video game. One minute you're closing in on the boss' lair, the next some random grunt patrolling the hallway puts a bullet in you. "Hey, that wasn't supposed to happen ..."

I can identify with that! :)

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Post by SteveMill » Mon, 2. Feb 04, 12:42

Ch 25 updated.

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Post by Faze » Mon, 2. Feb 04, 18:06

Faze wrote:You are very good on the cliffhangers Steve. :evil:

Whens the next bit. :D

Love it.

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And again. :evil: :evil: :evil:

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Post by Oldman » Mon, 2. Feb 04, 20:52

Faze wrote: And again. :evil: :evil: :evil:

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I Agree....Lol..... :D

Excellent!
I like the way you can bring out so many emotions in the reader with this particular four person 'scene/confrontation' in the story Steve.

Needless to say, but I will....looking forward to the next part. :wink:

Oldman :)

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Post by KiwiNZ » Mon, 2. Feb 04, 22:11

Excellent read. And man, you have a sick sense for twists ;-) In a way I had that bad feeling that it may be Max to bite the bullet but would still not put money on either him or Xela. I can still see him get out of there alive with the three other ones being casualties.
Very intense part of the chapter, made me shiver.

Looking forward to seeing what we are in for next!

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Post by Moss » Mon, 2. Feb 04, 22:28

How could you leave it there?

That has to be the worst cliffhanger yet!

Great read and addition to the chapter tho, I really hope you'll soon be posting more, well more from the control room scene that is.

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Post by SteveMill » Tue, 3. Feb 04, 10:27

Moss wrote:How could you leave it there?

That has to be the worst cliffhanger yet!

Great read and addition to the chapter tho, I really hope you'll soon be posting more, well more from the control room scene that is.
Best. Cliffhanger. Ever. :twisted:

Will try and get more posted soon.

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Post by Moss » Tue, 3. Feb 04, 10:46

SteveMill wrote:Best. Cliffhanger. Ever. :twisted:

Will try and get more posted soon.
Well that would be a matter of opinion, and mine definitly differs from yours. By the way aren't you suposed to be writing something? *stands with arms crossed a stern look and toes tapping impatiently*

Very much looking forward to reading the rest of that encounter :)

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Post by Al » Tue, 3. Feb 04, 10:58

******* hell. that is just plain evil leaving it there. :evil:

You're a bad man. :lol:

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Post by SteveMill » Tue, 3. Feb 04, 12:22

Al wrote:******* hell. that is just plain evil leaving it there. :evil:

You're a bad man. :lol:

Al
more on its way soon.

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Post by SteveMill » Tue, 3. Feb 04, 15:36

Al wrote:******* hell. that is just plain evil leaving it there. :evil:

You're a bad man. :lol:

Al
Evilness abolished, cliff-hangers resolved, chapter completed.

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Post by Al » Tue, 3. Feb 04, 15:49

While I have to agree about the cliff hanger being removed, I'm not entirely sure about the ending. Its going to be interesting to see where you take it now.....

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Post by Faze » Tue, 3. Feb 04, 21:16

Aaaarrrrgggghhhhhhhhhhhhhgggg

Did it again.

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