Executor 2 Chapter 2

[A.r.m]

The System known as the wall was under a massive attack kaaak destroyers every where 3 M0's and a hord of fighters. the damage was getting worse and the argon used the gate shield to stop any ship going to argon prime. as the last argon ship was destroyed a huge shape appeared in the distance along with 3 smaller ones.
'' Any Argon Ships Left In This Sector Are To Dock With Me For Repairs'' no body answered the call. the shields of the mighty ship enabled and a visible blue glow was coming from the ship and the kaaak fleet turned to face this threat. as the two fleets waited the Biggest ship the Executor 2 was making 20 ISD mark 2's t Join the action. 20 minutes later the fleet was ready and 5,000 Fighters had also appeared and now they began to advance. the kaaak ships also moved forward and they opened up the Emitters on the executor 2 but to no affect then the launched a barrage of missle which pasted throught the shield but the Armor on the huge ship was enough to deflect the blast at this point the ships began to fire on the kaaak M0's and detroyers doing little damage at first as the kaaak had modified the shields but they were no strong enough to deflect the blasts. at the point the Executor stopped firing and a cloud of green energy appeared at the bow as the energy began to collaspe the kaaak assumed they had won but. just then a massive green flash appeared and destoryed the Kaaak flagship and the guns opened up again.
On the bridge of the executor the computer mentioned ''Super Beam Weapon fired Massive damage recorded'' captian armstrong was atthe controls and when he saw this he was astowneded at the result. after this the kaaak fled and the other ISD2 Sent messages saying repairing damage and defending the system.
At this point the ship began to shake violently and Geoff asked the main computer was was going on and the reply was '' System importance requires a Super Ship to defend it. The Design being produced. Design specification Executor Mark 2 Plans. Time till Completion 4 Hours. Taking Solar Energy from Nearest Star'' at the sound of the geoff left the bridge and traveled to the Foundry Viewpoint and saw a huge contruction effort on the way solar energy came in from the star and was used to create pieces of the New ship at this point the Ship asked him to name the ship. He thought about it for a moment and then Said '' The Wall's Protector''. ''name noted'' the console said at that point a argon ship arrived and hailed the captian and requested to dock with him and he said yes.

in the bridge the High Admiral of the argon fleet greeted the captian and made his point that the argon Didnt trust the motives of geoff and was to place him under arrest and charge him with attemping to take over the federation the High Admiral on the other hand trusted him and told him to go to the system which he found and await contact and with that he left. Geoff was stunned and imediatly asked the computer if he can jump to the Abandened planet which he got the ship. a reply came back '' hyper drive can take us to Capital planet The wall's protector Can also join us Do You Wish to Procede?'' ''yes'' said the shaken voice of the captian as he said that the ship began to move away from the planet and the shot off into the distance. at that point the ISD2 all headed off too. and from the east gate the argon fleet arrived to arrest geoff but finding noone they scaned the system to see which way he headed also to see what system he was destined for but they found nothing and saw no reason to continue the search.

Back at the capital planet the ship arrived and continued construction of the sister ship. at this point a small fleet also arrived it was an argon one but they sent a message seying they wanted to join to captian aboard and that they defected to him and they saw him as the hero of the federation. after a confrence the captian was told The Wall's Protector was completed and awaiting a crew at this he asked the second crew to go to the ship and board it and take control. as they left the captian told the ship computer to send a program to the Sister ship saying that if any of the guns of the Sister Ship were targeting the executor then ship was to shut down and vent the atmosphere and become slaved to the executor 2. ''programed installed'' came the reply and with that the planing began on how to regain his reputation with the argon.


tell me what u think and please give me suggests on further plot lines thanks Geoff A.R.M

[SOTS]

Again, it's OK, but I think it still needs a little cleanup - not enough full stops! I think I read a paragraph where it was mostly one sentence.

Other than that, good story!

[biggie1447]

sounds like things are getting interesting, but you may want to slow down construction times a little, especially on a 21 kM long ship

[A.r.m]

well mate if u read about a star forge itll create a 1.6 km long ship in seconds and this is the same technology