Rogues Resurgence Ch 19 completed 22.4.03

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Post by Moss » Tue, 22. Apr 03, 22:25

Good chapter and a nice build up for the battle to come Steve, there seems a lot of uncertainties concerning Laws forces and tactics, leaving quite a bit for us to speculate about, will Jackson come through and do well, he should after his rather large recent investment, i'd think anyway.

Looking forward to more good reading, cheers.

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Post by KiwiNZ » Tue, 22. Apr 03, 23:37

Excellent read, Steve! Now we are gearing up for action by the looks of it.

I like the '... jeans' bit :lol:

Mind you, I don't trust the girl. Wrong questions at the right time .... :roll:
Cool, that build-up got my heart beat faster!

Can't wait for more.

Wouldn't be me if I hadn't noticed a typo :oops:

"what’s they word he used"

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Post by SteveMill » Wed, 23. Apr 03, 08:14

KiwiNZ wrote:Excellent read, Steve! Now we are gearing up for action by the looks of it.

I like the '... jeans' bit :lol:

Mind you, I don't trust the girl. Wrong questions at the right time .... :roll:
Cool, that build-up got my heart beat faster!

Can't wait for more.

Wouldn't be me if I hadn't noticed a typo :oops:

"what’s they word he used"
Thanks, will edit that.

I'm about to start work on the final chapter. It might be awhile as I want to post it complete.

Chapter Twenty: Vengeance :evil:

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Post by Al » Wed, 23. Apr 03, 13:58

SteveMill wrote:
Al wrote:Maybe its something to do with the broswer. I can still see it but obvoiusly you cant. Bit of a daft point anyway :)

Al[/spoiler]
using IE rather than Opera I see what you mean. Seems to bold a 4th stop. Have deleted it.
Wooohooo I'm not going mad :)

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Post by Al » Wed, 23. Apr 03, 14:02

SteveMill wrote:
I'm about to start work on the final chapter. It might be awhile as I want to post it complete.

Chapter Twenty: Vengeance :evil:
Hopefully you mean the final chapter in this story, and then you'll be working on the next installment? Or maybe a completely new story based in the X universe.... :cry:

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Post by Oldman » Wed, 23. Apr 03, 14:23

SteveMill wrote:
Chapter Twenty: Vengeance :evil:
Looks like the 'little' skirmish AI was hinting at is about to start
time to get the 'med kits' out... :)

Good read.

Oldman :)

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Post by Gandalf The White » Wed, 23. Apr 03, 17:44

I can't say I blame Max for not trusting her, it's one of the oldest tricks in the book isn't it.
some who deserve life receive death. Others who deserve death receive life. Can you give it to them? Don't be eager to deal out death in judgement, for not even the wise can see all ends.

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