Rogues Revenge Ch 13. 14/8

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Rogues Revenge Ch 13. 14/8

Post by SteveMill » Thu, 14. Aug 03, 12:19

Chapter 13: Lull

“Where next?” Corrin asked.

“Bluish Snout and then Ocean of Fantasy to deliver..” Corrin cut Massoor off with a raised hand. “Thanks, I’ll leave the details to you. Just tell me where to go.” He grinned and winked to make sure the new Trade Master understood it was not a reprimand. It was just, Corrin thought, he was so damn enthusiastic, making the Force satellite network hum with offers, counter-offers and deals that kept the Enterprise constantly on the move. In the ten days Max had been away it felt like the Enterprise had done nothing except jump from sector to sector, pausing just long enough for the small fleet of minimally upgraded Argon Lifter’s to scuttle between stations, fulfilling the negotiated trade agreements.

Continued on the Space Ritual site, here,

http://www.spaceritual.com/1977/2004.html

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Post by Al » Thu, 14. Aug 03, 13:44

Well worth the read folks.

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Post by Gandalf The White » Thu, 14. Aug 03, 19:36

Yup, I agree with that statement.
some who deserve life receive death. Others who deserve death receive life. Can you give it to them? Don't be eager to deal out death in judgement, for not even the wise can see all ends.
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Post by KiwiNZ » Thu, 14. Aug 03, 22:23

me too :D
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Post by Gandalf The White » Thu, 14. Aug 03, 22:58

More please! Oh, and as Rogue is nearly finnished, have you got any ideas as to what you are doing next?
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Post by Adamskini » Thu, 14. Aug 03, 23:22

good to see ur still writing Steve!

another good addition as always

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Post by Al » Fri, 15. Aug 03, 10:15

Bump :D

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Post by Gandalf The White » Fri, 15. Aug 03, 10:55

And I'll bump it again.
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Post by Adamskini » Fri, 15. Aug 03, 23:02

bump-tastic-alish

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Post by AJ Rimmer Bsc.Ssc. » Sat, 16. Aug 03, 00:01

more more ...encore innit!

but terrible terrible tease...

someone should do a "bo selecta" on him and get it written continuously while he`s locked in a cupboard :wink:
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Post by Gandalf The White » Sat, 16. Aug 03, 00:08

Lol yeah, "complete now or no food for a week!" lolololol.

Seeriously, Brilliant Steve, it really is good.
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Post by Faze » Sat, 16. Aug 03, 00:10

Just keep it coming Steve.

There, here or anywhere.

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P.S. Can you aim to get it finished before the release of X2.

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Post by Gandalf The White » Sat, 16. Aug 03, 00:43

Now wouldn't that be something? The complete story on the X2 CD.
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Post by Aye Capn » Sat, 16. Aug 03, 01:08

Encore! You and Mercenary have me hanging on the edge of my seat!

BTW, whatever happened to "Rela Qi Gets In Deep?" I liked that one, too ...
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Post by AJ Rimmer Bsc.Ssc. » Sat, 16. Aug 03, 01:27

well i got a tranquiliser gun :wink:
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Post by Moss » Sun, 17. Aug 03, 12:31

A little bump for anyone that may have missed this.

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Aye Capn wrote:Encore! You and Mercenary have me hanging on the edge of my seat!
Me too, great stories.
Aye Capn wrote: BTW, whatever happened to "Rela Qi Gets In Deep?" I liked that one, too ...
I'm kinda hoping we may get the rest of "Rela Qi Gets In Deep" with the CD fan fiction, perhaps if Jasperodus reads this he'll let us know!
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Post by Jasperodus » Mon, 18. Aug 03, 11:32

Good stuff, oh and Steve's site is interesting too.
Moss wrote:
Aye Capn wrote: BTW, whatever happened to "Rela Qi Gets In Deep?" I liked that one, too ...
I'm kinda hoping we may get the rest of "Rela Qi Gets In Deep" with the CD fan fiction, perhaps if Jasperodus reads this he'll let us know!
Well, it won't be on the CD as it is not finished and the deadline is long gone. I would have liked to have got it on but it would have been rushed. Unfortunately I've not been able to make time for it.

I may resurrect it as an exercise. However, I also really need to get on with a novel I'm trying to write in my own universe. (sixth chapter and part 1 nearly finished)

Thanks guys but alas I can't promise anything.

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