Traders Tale II - Chapter 3
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Nice one Merc. Looks like Torr is going to be well defended out there but presumably he's going to need it!
One thing:
"Your security" should be "You're security"
Al
One thing:
"Your security" should be "You're security"
Al
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You could tryMercenary wrote:Cheers all,
I'll take another look, there are some other minor adjustments I want to make.KiwiNZ wrote:
Found one thing that I feel could do with re-phrasing:
'The most memorable thing he could remember' -> two 'memories' in there.
"The most notable thing he could remember"
"The most unforgettable thing he could remember"
"The one thing he could not forget"
hth
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Merc,
i have only read this part but it sounds really good but i would like 2 read it from the start b4 i tell you how grate it is, so do u think you could send all parts to my email ? (including any more you write ?)
My email is steve8x@talk21.com
hope to hear from you soon,
BLACKKNIGHT8X
i have only read this part but it sounds really good but i would like 2 read it from the start b4 i tell you how grate it is, so do u think you could send all parts to my email ? (including any more you write ?)
My email is steve8x@talk21.com
hope to hear from you soon,
BLACKKNIGHT8X
Hi Blackknight,
No problem, currently at work so I'll post the 1st 2 Chapters to you.. They are also on the site here buried a few pages back..
Chapter 2 http://www.egosoft.com/x2/forum/viewtop ... sc&start=0
Chapter 1 http://www.egosoft.com/x2/forum/viewtop ... highlight=
Hopefully these links work..
No problem, currently at work so I'll post the 1st 2 Chapters to you.. They are also on the site here buried a few pages back..
Chapter 2 http://www.egosoft.com/x2/forum/viewtop ... sc&start=0
Chapter 1 http://www.egosoft.com/x2/forum/viewtop ... highlight=
Hopefully these links work..