Rogues Revenge Ch 23 Pt 2 posted 28/11

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Rogues Revenge Ch 23 Pt 2 posted 28/11

Post by SteveMill » Mon, 24. Nov 03, 12:20

second part posted

Chapter 23: Betrayal

“Is Hagman on Station Prime?”

Jackson’s mind spun like an out of control Bayamon as he raced to catch up with the implications of the query.

“It’s a simple bloody question Jack,” Kaitrin snapped. “You’re in contact with him.”

“Hey,” Jackson raised his arms and took a step back. “I’m sorry Corrin got killed but it wasn’t me!”

“It was a Clan,” she spat back. “Kivvers don’t change their stripes.”

“Ah, Max, you’ve filled them in on the plan,” Jackson said. Max nodded.

Continued on the Space ritual forum, follow the sig.

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Post by Al » Mon, 24. Nov 03, 12:45

Great stuff, get it while its hot :D

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Post by KiwiNZ » Mon, 24. Nov 03, 13:41

Excellent read. You know, we really do hate those cliff hangers :D

Well, for the moment Max is on top of the game. Though, I think it is not going to be a stroll in the park. Hagman will have something up his sleeve, just not sure what exactly. The fight in the Split sector will be quite some spectacle, several XM2's versus one Split M2 and some Mamba's, that should bring Nyj down.

Looking forward to the next part!
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Post by Al » Mon, 24. Nov 03, 13:58

Note the chapter title - "Betrayal"

Doesn't say whos going to be betrayed. The obvious one is Hagman but, knowing Steve's love for more twists that the Monaco Grand Prix and sending us completely the wrong way, I'm not taking bets ;)

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Post by Mercenary » Mon, 24. Nov 03, 14:26

Al wrote:Note the chapter title - "Betrayal"

Doesn't say whos going to be betrayed. The obvious one is Hagman but, knowing Steve's love for more twists that the Monaco Grand Prix and sending us completely the wrong way, I'm not taking bets ;)

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Good point, there are quite a few "betrayals" possible in the context of the word.

If ever there was the potential for a follow up story then it'll be that Hagman somehow effecting his own escape and coming back to get revenge on Jackson (or something like that)... But I guess that'll depends on who survives :wink:
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Post by Moss » Mon, 24. Nov 03, 20:09

Well i'm not taking any bets on who survives, Steve can be very ruthless when it comes to character life expectacy :D

I do wonder what triggered Morn off tho!

Another great read Steve and some hard fighting soon to be done, looking forward to the next bit. Cheers.
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Post by KiwiNZ » Mon, 24. Nov 03, 20:46

Morn will be with Hagman, making sure the Teladi Gain base goes back into the hands of the clan. Morn herself may not even realise or know that Hagman is going to double-cross Law, perhaps not even bother. I am just curious how Max is going to deal with her.
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Post by Faze » Mon, 24. Nov 03, 23:25

Nice one Steve.

I have run out of superlatives.

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No point in running.
You will just DIE tired!

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Post by SteveMill » Fri, 28. Nov 03, 13:40

Updated posted, follow sig.

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Post by Al » Fri, 28. Nov 03, 13:59

Another great section! Looks like Law might be in trouble in the very near future and I cant wait to find out how Max is going to get the Xenon attacking :)

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Post by crunn » Fri, 28. Nov 03, 14:14

Very good again Steve. 8)
Looking forward to more.
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Post by KiwiNZ » Fri, 28. Nov 03, 15:05

Excellent second part. It surely makes for an interesting finish in Law's sector. If Max can manage to keep the Xenon destroyer at bay for long enough to slip into the sector just before or after him then there is a good chance they may not be met by a lot of opposition of Law's forces. Yay, long sentence

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Post by SteveMill » Fri, 28. Nov 03, 16:01

KiwiNZ wrote:Excellent second part. It surely makes for an interesting finish in Law's sector. If Max can manage to keep the Xenon destroyer at bay for long enough to slip into the sector just before or after him then there is a good chance they may not be met by a lot of opposition of Law's forces. Yay, long sentence

Looking forward to seeing how the game develops!
It would not surprise me at all if Max has a cunning plan in mind! :wink:
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Post by Faze » Fri, 28. Nov 03, 18:30

Faze wrote:Nice one Steve.

I have run out of superlatives.

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Said it once.

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Post by Moss » Fri, 28. Nov 03, 19:16

SteveMill wrote: It would not surprise me at all if Max has a cunning plan in mind! :wink:
It would surprise me if he didn't! :D
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